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The Orphic Collection, Volume I: The Hymns
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Prayer.33 AV002_04
Source AP002.04
Supplied apparatus ἠδ’ ἐμπυριφοίτους Wiel] ἠδὲ (ἰδὲ) πυριφοίτους.
Adopted forms ἠδ’ ἐμπυριφοίτους
Adopted lexical access ἠδέ; ἐμπυρίφοιτος
Reported forms ἠδὲ; ἰδὲ; πυριφοίτους
Reported lexical access ἠδέ; ἰδέ; πυρίφοιτος
Transliteration access ēde; ide; pyriphoitous
The adopted fire-dwelling compound has ἐμ-; the reported compound lacks it. Both concern beings associated with fire, not an extra class counted from the apparatus.
Uncertainty The note follows the marker 32 but the phrase occurs in Prayer 33. LSJ calls ἐμπυρίφοιτος probable at this locus; no manuscript collation has been performed.
Greek evidence Prayer.33. καὶ χθονίους καὶ ὑποχθονίους ἠδ’ ἐμπυριφοίτους,
Aligned English Prayer.33. and of earth, and beneath the earth, and those that walk in fire,
Related lexical entries ἐμπυρίφοιτος
Prayer.39 AV003_01
Source AP003.01
Supplied apparatus 39 αὐδῶ Portus] αὐλῶν.
Adopted forms αὐδῶ
Adopted lexical access αὐδάω
Reported forms αὐλῶν
Transliteration access aulōn
The adopted finite verb closes an invocation, “I call/name.” Reported αὐλῶν could be the participle “playing the aulos”; its precise parsing and fit in the transmitted sentence are not established.
Uncertainty αὐλῶν can be a participle of αὐλέω or a genitive plural of αὐλός; no unique dictionary lemma is assigned to the reported form. These are possible parses, not additional readings.
Greek evidence Prayer.39. καὶ Βροντὰς Κόσμου τε μέρη τετρακίονος αὐδῶ·
Aligned English Prayer.39. and the Thunders, and the parts of the four-pillared Kosmos, I name aloud;
Related lexical entries αὐδάω
I.1 AV004_03
Source AP004.03
Supplied apparatus ἐρεμνήν Wiel] ἐραννήν.
Adopted forms ἐρεμνήν
Adopted lexical access ἐρεμνός
Reported forms ἐραννήν
Reported lexical access ἐραννός
Transliteration access erannēn
Adopted “dark” contrasts with reported “lovely/desirable.” This is a real semantic alternative for Hecate, not spelling variation.
Uncertainty The supplied separate ledgers dispute the rejected reading (ἐραννήν versus ἐραυνήν). Record exactly the apparatus ἐραννήν and its secure lexical sense, but do not claim the underlying witness has been resolved. LSJ independently reports ἐραννήν at this locus without proving the supplied collation.
Greek evidence I.1. Εἰνοδίην Ἑκάτην κλῄζω, τριοδῖτιν, ἐρεμνήν,
Aligned English I.1. Einodian Hekate I call, of the three ways, dark,
Related lexical entries ἐρεμνός
I.4 AV004_06
Source AP004.06
Supplied apparatus 4 Πέρσειαν Hermann] περσίαν.
Adopted forms Πέρσειαν
Reported forms περσίαν
Transliteration access persian
The adopted form is the Perseian epithet of Hecate. Reported περσίαν differs in the stem spelling; do not turn it into a separate Persian identity or infer an etymology without additional evidence.
Uncertainty Dictionary access is left at the attested form Πέρσειαν rather than manufacturing a nominative; the name relation can be discussed without assigning a speculative lemma.
Greek evidence I.4. Πέρσειαν, φιλέρημον, ἀγαλλομένην ἐλάφοισι,
Aligned English I.4. Perseia, lover of solitude, delighting in deer,
Related lexical entries Πέρσειαν
II.4 AV005_01
Source AP005.01
Supplied apparatus 4 παροῦσ’ ἀνίαις Ruhnken] παροῦσα νέαις.
Adopted forms παροῦσ’ ἀνίαις
Adopted lexical access πάρειμι; ἀνία
Reported forms παροῦσα νέαις
Reported lexical access πάρειμι; νέος
Transliteration access parousa neais
Adopted “present at mortals’ pains” replaces “present to young/new \[feminine plural]”; elision changes the word boundary. The local petition concerns childbirth distress.
Uncertainty The supplied alternative does not itself specify a noun for νέαις; do not supply “young women” as an exact transmitted noun.
Greek evidence II.4. ὠκυλόχεια, παροῦσ’ ἀνίαις θνητῶν, Προθυραία,
Aligned English II.4. swift in delivery, present in the pains of mortals, Prothyraia,
II.11 AV006_01
Source AP006.01
Supplied apparatus 11 λαθικηδέες εἰσὶν ἀνίαι Abel] λυσιπήμονές εἰσιν ἀνίαι.
Adopted forms λαθικηδέες εἰσὶν ἀνίαι
Adopted lexical access λαθικηδής; εἰμί; ἀνία
Reported forms λυσιπήμονές εἰσιν ἀνίαι
Reported lexical access λυσιπήμων; εἰμί; ἀνία
Transliteration access lysipēmones eisin aniai
Adopted λαθικηδέες connects pains of childbirth with forgetting or dispelling care; reported λυσιπήμονες expresses release from pain. Both qualify ἀνίαι, and the paradoxical predication must be explained rather than flattening either adjective into “painless.”
Greek evidence II.11. ἐν γὰρ σοὶ τοκετῶν λαθικηδέες εἰσὶν ἀνίαι.
Aligned English II.11. for in you the pangs of birth are banishers of care.
III.6 AV007_03
Source AP007.03
Supplied apparatus 6 λυσιμέριμν’ Abel] ληθομέριμν’.
Adopted forms λυσιμέριμν’
Adopted lexical access λυσιμέριμνος
Reported forms ληθομέριμν’
Reported lexical access ληθομέριμνος
Transliteration access lēthomerimn’
Release from cares in the adopted compound contrasts with forgetting cares in the reported compound; both are epithets of Night.
Greek evidence III.6. λυσιμέριμν’, ἀγαθήν τε πόνων ἀνάπαυσιν ἔχουσα,
Aligned English III.6. looser of cares, holding a good rest from toils,
Related lexical entries λυσιμέριμνος
III.6 AV007_04
Source AP007.04
Supplied apparatus ἀγαθήν Pierson] ἀγαθή.
Adopted forms ἀγαθήν
Adopted lexical access ἀγαθός
Reported forms ἀγαθή
Reported lexical access ἀγαθός
Transliteration access agathē
The adopted accusative qualifies ἀνάπαυσιν, the good rest Night brings; the reported nominative/vocative could instead characterize Night. Retain the grammatical attachment difference.
Greek evidence III.6. λυσιμέριμν’, ἀγαθήν τε πόνων ἀνάπαυσιν ἔχουσα,
Aligned English III.6. looser of cares, holding a good rest from toils,
Related lexical entries ἀγαθός
III.12 AV008_05
Source AP008.05
Supplied apparatus μάκαιρα ὦ (om. νύξ) codd.
Adopted forms μάκαιρ’ ὦ Νύξ
Adopted lexical access μάκαρ; ὦ; νύξ
Reported forms μάκαιρα ὦ
Reported lexical access μάκαρ; ὦ
Transliteration access makaira ō
The apparatus explicitly says the witnesses omit νύξ. Printed Night is therefore a meaningful supplied addressee, whereas μάκαιρα/μάκαιρ’ is elision.
Uncertainty The note gives no named restorer for Νύξ. The word νύξ inside om. is the word reported absent, not a rejected witness token.
Greek evidence III.12. νῦν δέ, μάκαιρ’ ὦ Νύξ, πολυόλβιε, πᾶσι ποθεινή,
Aligned English III.12. and now, blessed Nyx, rich in blessing, longed for by all,
IV.3 AV009_02
Source AP009.02
Supplied apparatus 3 κοσμοκράτωρ (sic) Hermann] κόσμε πατήρ.
Adopted forms κοσμοκράτορ
Adopted lexical access κοσμοκράτωρ
Reported forms κόσμε πατήρ
Reported lexical access κόσμος; πατήρ
Transliteration access kosme patēr
“World-ruler” replaces the two-word address “world, father.” The compound affects the relation between Heaven and the cosmos.
Uncertainty The apparatus lemma itself is κοσμοκράτωρ (sic), while the adopted verse actually prints vocative κοσμοκράτορ.
Greek evidence IV.3. κοσμοκράτορ, σφαιρηδὸν ἑλισσόμενος περὶ γαῖαν,
Aligned English IV.3. world-ruler, rolling spherewise about the earth,
Related lexical entries κοσμοκράτωρ; κόσμος; πατήρ
IV.5 AV009_04
Source AP009.04
Supplied apparatus 5 αἰθέριος Schenkl] οὐράνιος.
Adopted forms αἰθέριος
Adopted lexical access αἰθέριος
Reported forms οὐράνιος
Reported lexical access οὐράνιος
Transliteration access ouranios
Aetherial replaces heavenly. Keep the aether/heaven distinction while allowing their local spatial overlap.
Greek evidence IV.5. αἰθέριος χθόνιός τε φύλαξ πάντων περιβληθείς,
Aligned English IV.5. of the aither and of the earth, guardian of all, cast round about,
IV.5 AV009_05
Source AP009.05
Supplied apparatus περικληθείς codd.
Adopted forms περιβληθείς
Adopted lexical access περιβάλλω
Reported forms περικληθείς
Transliteration access periklētheis
The adopted περιβληθείς describes Heaven as spread/wrapped around in its all-guarding role. Reported περικληθείς is a different participial string whose exact lemma and sense are not secured.
Uncertainty Do not automatically assign περικληθείς to περικλείω (whose expected passive formation is different), or invent a historical reading by adding letters.
Greek evidence IV.5. αἰθέριος χθόνιός τε φύλαξ πάντων περιβληθείς,
Aligned English IV.5. of the aither and of the earth, guardian of all, cast round about,
Related lexical entries περιβάλλω
IV.6 AV009_06
Source AP009.06
Supplied apparatus 6 ἄπλητον Hermann] ἄτλητον.
Adopted forms ἄπλητον
Adopted lexical access ἄπλητος
Reported forms ἄτλητον
Reported lexical access ἄτλητος
Transliteration access atlēton
Nature’s necessity is described as immense/unapproachable rather than unendurable. The two adjectives must not be conflated into one fixed translation of necessity.
Greek evidence IV.6. ἐν στέρνοισιν ἔχων φύσεως ἄπλητον ἀνάγκην,
Aligned English IV.6. holding in your breast the unapproachable necessity of nature,
Related lexical entries ἄπλητος
V.2 AV010_01
Source AP010.01
Supplied apparatus 2 θ’ ὑπέρεισμα Wiel] τε μέρισμα.
Adopted forms θ’ ὑπέρεισμα
Adopted lexical access τε; ὑπέρεισμα
Reported forms τε μέρισμα
Reported lexical access τε; μέρισμα
Transliteration access te merisma
Aether is the support of stars, sun and moon in the adopted text, not their portion/division. The altered connective is secondary.
Greek evidence V.2. ἄστρων ἠελίου τε σεληναίης θ’ ὑπέρεισμα,
Aligned English V.2. support of the stars and of the sun and of the moon,
VI.4 AV011_02
Source AP011.02
Supplied apparatus 4 σπέρμα Hermann] ὅστε.
Adopted forms σπέρμα
Adopted lexical access σπέρμα
Reported forms ὅστε
Transliteration access hoste
The adopted noun presents Protogonos as seed; the reported string ὅστε does not provide a securely parsed rival substantive.
Uncertainty Do not silently divide or emend ὅστε into ὅς τε and then count that reconstruction as transmitted.
Greek evidence VI.4. σπέρμα πολύμνηστον, πολυόργιον, Ἠρικεπαῖον,
Aligned English VI.4. much-remembered seed, of many orgia, Erikepaios,
Related lexical entries σπέρμα
VI.4 AV011_03
Source AP011.03
Supplied apparatus Ἠρικεπαῖον Leopardus] εὕρηκε παιάν.
Adopted forms Ἠρικεπαῖον
Adopted lexical access Ἠρικεπαῖος
Reported forms εὕρηκε παιάν
Reported lexical access εὑρίσκω; παιάν
Transliteration access heurēke paian
The adopted divine name Erikepaios replaces a two-word reading involving “has found” and “paean/Paian.” The alternative is not another straightforward spelling of the same name.
Uncertainty The full syntax and original word division of the witness reading remain unverified; no derivation of the divine name is licensed.
Greek evidence VI.4. σπέρμα πολύμνηστον, πολυόργιον, Ἠρικεπαῖον,
Aligned English VI.4. much-remembered seed, of many orgia, Erikepaios,
Related lexical entries Ἠρικεπαῖος; εὑρίσκω
VI.7 AV011_04
Source AP011.04
Supplied apparatus 7 δινηθείς Hermann] δινήεις.
Adopted forms δινηθεὶς
Adopted lexical access δινέω
Reported forms δινήεις
Reported lexical access δινήεις
Transliteration access dinēeis
The adopted aorist passive participle presents turning/spinning in the cosmic movement; the reported adjective means eddying/whirling. Related imagery does not erase the verb/adjective distinction.
Greek evidence VI.7. πάντῃ δινηθεὶς πτερύγων ῥιπαῖς κατὰ κόσμον
Aligned English VI.7. when you whirled everywhere through the kosmos on beating wings
Related lexical entries δινεύω
VI.9 AV011_05
Source AP011.05
Supplied apparatus 9 Ἀνταύγην Hermann] ἀνταυγῆ.
Adopted forms Ἀνταύγην
Adopted lexical access Ἀνταύγης; ἀνταυγής
Reported forms ἀνταυγῆ
Reported lexical access ἀνταυγής
Transliteration access antaugē
The adopted form is used among the names by which Protogonos is invoked. The reported form is adjectival “reflecting light”; distinguish name use and adjective without claiming separate beings.
Uncertainty Ἀνταύγης is an access name; dictionary morphology may instead group it under ἀνταυγής. Exact printed Ἀνταύγην controls.
Greek evidence VI.9. ἠδὲ Πρίηπον ἄνακτα καὶ Ἀνταύγην ἑλίκωπον.
Aligned English VI.9. and lord Priapos and Antauges of the flashing eye.
VII.2 AV012_01
Source AP012.01
Supplied apparatus 2 εὐιέραις (sic) Lennep] εὖ ἱεραῖς.
Adopted forms εὐιέροις
Adopted lexical access εὐίερος
Reported forms εὖ ἱεραῖς
Reported lexical access εὖ; ἱερός
Transliteration access eu hierais
The adopted compound qualifies sacred invocation voices; the reported two-word reading has adverb εὖ plus ἱεραῖς. Do not count the compound’s apparatus label as a further occurrence.
Uncertainty Apparatus εὐιέραις (sic) is not the verse εὐιέροις; record the former as the source’s lemma-label mismatch, not the adopted primary form.
Greek evidence VII.2. εὐιέροις φωνῇσι κικλήσκων δαίμονας ἁγνούς.
Aligned English VII.2. summoning with well-hallowed voices the holy daimones.
VII.2 AV012_03
Source AP012.03
Supplied apparatus ἀγανοῦς (ἀγανούς, ἀγ) codd.
Adopted forms ἁγνούς
Adopted lexical access ἁγνός
Reported forms ἀγανοῦς; ἀγανούς; ἀγ
Reported lexical access ἀγανός
Transliteration access aganous; aganous; an
The adopted daimones are holy/pure; the reported full forms point toward gentle/mild, but ἀγανοῦς and especially ἀγ retain textual difficulties.
Uncertainty Do not expand abbreviated ἀγ. ἀγανός securely accesses ἀγανούς, not proof of the exact parsing of every reported spelling.
Greek evidence VII.2. εὐιέροις φωνῇσι κικλήσκων δαίμονας ἁγνούς.
Aligned English VII.2. summoning with well-hallowed voices the holy daimones.
VII.4 AV012_05
Source AP012.05
Supplied apparatus πυριρρόθιοι Wiel] περιθρόνια.
Adopted forms πυριρρόθιοι
Adopted lexical access πυριρρόθιος
Reported forms περιθρόνια
Reported lexical access περιθρόνιος
Transliteration access perithronia
The adopted stars are fire-roaring/rushing. LSJ recognizes περιθρόνιος, “around the throne,” and cites this locus subject to textual variation; the reported neuter/feminine-looking περιθρόνια has a difficult agreement with the stars.
Uncertainty Recognizing the dictionary compound does not settle the reported clause’s gender/agreement or establish its historical priority.
Greek evidence VII.4. ἐγκυκλίοις δίνῃσι πυριρρόθιοι κυκλέοντες,
Aligned English VII.4. wheeling in circling eddies, rushing with fire,
Related lexical entries πυριρρόθιος
VII.8 AV013_01
Source AP013.01
Supplied apparatus 8 ὑφορώμενοι codd.
Adopted forms ἐφορώμενοι
Adopted lexical access ἐφοράω
Reported forms ὑφορώμενοι
Reported lexical access ὑφοράω
Transliteration access huphorōmenoi
Adopted “overseeing” the seven-light zones contrasts with reported ὑφορώμενοι, which can imply looking from beneath or looking askance. Do not import a uniquely hostile nuance into the hymn.
Greek evidence VII.8. ἑπταφαεῖς ζώνας ἐφορώμενοι, ἠερόπλαγκτοι,
Aligned English VII.8. overseeing the seven shining zones, roaming the air,
Related lexical entries ἐφοράω
VII.13 AV013_02
Source AP013.02
Supplied apparatus 13 ἐσθλόν Lobeck] ἐσθλοί.
Adopted forms ἐσθλὸν
Adopted lexical access ἐσθλός
Reported forms ἐσθλοί
Reported lexical access ἐσθλός
Transliteration access esthloi
Adopted accusative qualifies the course; reported plural nominative would characterize the stars. Grammatical attachment changes, not the lexeme.
Greek evidence VII.13. ἐσθλὸν ἐπ’ εὐδόξοις ἔργοις δρόμον ἐκτελέοντες.
Aligned English VII.13. accomplishing a noble course for works of good repute.
Related lexical entries ἐσθλός
VIII.6 AV014_02
Source AP014.02
Supplied apparatus 6 ῥοιζῆτορ Abel] ῥιζωτήρ.
Adopted forms ῥοιζῆτορ
Adopted lexical access ῥοιζήτωρ
Reported forms ῥιζωτήρ
Transliteration access rhizōtēr
The adopted sun is a rushing/whirring agent. Reported ῥιζωτήρ looks like a root-related agent formation, but its exact lexical sense is not independently established.
Uncertainty Use the exact reported form ῥιζωτήρ as access label, not a fabricated dictionary lemma or assured “rooter” definition.
Greek evidence VIII.6. εὔδρομε, ῥοιζῆτορ, πυρόεις, φαιδρωπέ, διφρευτά,
Aligned English VIII.6. good at running, whirring, fiery, bright-faced, charioteer,
Related lexical entries ῥοιζήτωρ
VIII.8 AV014_03
Source AP014.03
Supplied apparatus 8 ζαμενής Dinner] δυσμενής.
Adopted forms ζαμενὴς
Adopted lexical access ζαμενής
Reported forms δυσμενής
Reported lexical access δυσμενής
Transliteration access dysmenēs
Adopted “vehement/mighty” toward the impious contrasts with explicit “hostile.” The passage’s ethical direction is unchanged but the adjective’s semantics differ.
Greek evidence VIII.8. εὐσεβέσιν καθοδηγὲ καλῶν, ζαμενὴς ἀσεβοῦσι,
Aligned English VIII.8. guide of the pious to fair things, fierce against the impious,
VIII.12 AV015_03
Source AP015.03
Supplied apparatus αἰολόμικτε Wiel] αἰολόδικτε.
Adopted forms αἰολόμικτε
Adopted lexical access αἰολόμικτος
Reported forms αἰολόδικτε
Transliteration access aiolodikte
The adopted epithet concerns varied mixture; the alternative αἰολόδικτε is an uncertain compound/string and should not acquire an invented judicial or net-related meaning.
Uncertainty The secure adopted access form follows transparent inflection; no secure dictionary lemma has been assigned to the reported string.
Greek evidence VIII.12. φωσφόρος, αἰολόμικτε, φερέσβιε, κάρπιμε, Παιάν,
Aligned English VIII.12. light-bearer, of shifting blend, life-bringing, fruitful, Paian,
Related lexical entries αἰολόμικτος
VIII.14 AV015_04
Source AP015.04
Supplied apparatus 14 πασιφαές Pierson] παμφαῆ.
Adopted forms πασιφαές
Adopted lexical access πασιφαής
Reported forms παμφαῆ
Reported lexical access παμφαής
Transliteration access pamphaē
“Shining for all” replaces the all-shining compound; their radiance overlaps but both distinct compounds need recoverable access.
Greek evidence VIII.14. εὔδιε, πασιφαές, κόσμου τὸ περίδρομον ὄμμα,
Aligned English VIII.14. of fair weather, all-shining, the circling eye of the kosmos,
IX.6 AV016_04
Source AP016.04
Supplied apparatus 6 νυχαυγές Abel] νυχία.
Adopted forms νυχαυγές
Adopted lexical access νυχαυγής
Reported forms νυχία
Reported lexical access νύχιος
Transliteration access nykhia
The adopted compound means night-shining; the reported adjective is simply nocturnal. Night and luminosity are not interchangeable components.
Greek evidence IX.6. ἠλεκτρίς, βαρύθυμε, καταυγάστειρα, νυχαυγές,
Aligned English IX.6. amber-gleaming, heavy-hearted, shedding light down, night-gleaming,
IX.8 AV017_02
Source AP017.02
Supplied apparatus 8 εὐφρόνῃ Gesner] εὐφροσύνη (εὐφρόσυν’).
Adopted forms εὐφρόνῃ
Adopted lexical access εὐφρόνη
Reported forms εὐφροσύνη; εὐφρόσυν’
Reported lexical access εὐφροσύνη
Transliteration access euphrosynē; euphrosyn’
Adopted εὐφρόνη names night in a context of quiet and blessed lot; reported εὐφροσύνη concerns gladness. The parenthetical εὐφρόσυν’ is preserved but not forcibly assigned the noun’s inflection.
Uncertainty εὐφρόσυν’ can represent an elided adjective; its final vowel and syntax are not supplied.
Greek evidence IX.8. ἡσυχίῃ χαίρουσα καὶ εὐφρόνῃ ὀλβιομοίρῳ,
Aligned English IX.8. rejoicing in quiet and in the richly-fated good night,
IX.9 AV017_03
Source AP017.03
Supplied apparatus 9 χαριτῶπι Wiel] χαροδῶτι.
Adopted forms χαριτῶπι
Adopted lexical access χαριτῶπις
Reported forms χαροδῶτι
Transliteration access kharodōti
The adopted feminine epithet is graceful of aspect, securely supported by LSJ’s χαριτῶπις subentry under χαριτώπης. The reported χαροδῶτι differs in stem and the apparent giving-element.
Uncertainty The variant remains an exact form label; do not silently repair χαρο- to χαρι- or treat a tentative “joy-giving” analysis as a verified definition.
Greek evidence IX.9. λαμπετίη, χαριτῶπι, κερασφόρε, νυκτὸς ἄγαλμα,
Aligned English IX.9. shining one, of gracious face, horn-bearing, glory of night,
Related lexical entries χαριτῶπις
IX.9 AV017_04
Source AP017.04
Supplied apparatus κερασφόρε Abel] τελεσφόρε; an σελασφόρε scribendum?
Adopted forms κερασφόρε
Adopted lexical access κερασφόρος
Reported forms τελεσφόρε
Reported lexical access τελεσφόρος
Editorial queries σελασφόρε
Query lexical access σελασφόρος
Transliteration access telesphore
Adopted “horn-bearing” contrasts with reported “completion/fulfilment-bearing”; the editor additionally asks whether “radiance-bearing” should be written. All three are distinct compounds.
Uncertainty σελασφόρε is a query, not an adopted reading or verified manuscript variant.
Greek evidence IX.9. λαμπετίη, χαριτῶπι, κερασφόρε, νυκτὸς ἄγαλμα,
Aligned English IX.9. shining one, of gracious face, horn-bearing, glory of night,
Related lexical entries κερασφόρος; τελεσφόρος; σελασφόρος
IX.12 AV017_05
Source AP017.05
Supplied apparatus 12 νέους Hermann] τεούς.
Adopted forms νέους
Adopted lexical access νέος
Reported forms τεούς
Reported lexical access τεός
Transliteration access teous
The adopted supplicants are young/new; the reported possessive calls them “your” supplicants. Avoid deriving an age criterion for initiation from the adopted adjective alone.
Greek evidence IX.12. λαμπομένη, σώζουσα νέους ἱκέτας σέο, κούρη.
Aligned English IX.12. shining, saving these new suppliants of yours, maiden.
Related lexical entries νέος
IX.12 AV017_06
Source AP017.06
Supplied apparatus σέο κούρη Ruhnken] ἐσλοκούρη.
Adopted forms σέο, κούρη
Adopted lexical access σύ; κόρη
Reported forms ἐσλοκούρη
Transliteration access eslokourē
The adopted phrase supplies “of you, maiden” after the supplicants. The reported fused string is not secure evidence for a separate compound.
Uncertainty Do not repair ἐσλοκούρη into an unprinted ἐσθλο- compound or invent a lemma.
Greek evidence IX.12. λαμπομένη, σώζουσα νέους ἱκέτας σέο, κούρη.
Aligned English IX.12. shining, saving these new suppliants of yours, maiden.
Related lexical entries κόρη
X.4 AV018_03
Source AP018.03
Supplied apparatus 4 τετιμέν’ ἀεί Koene] τετιμενέα.
Adopted forms τετιμέν’ ἀεί
Adopted lexical access τίω; ἀεί
Reported forms τετιμενέα
Transliteration access tetimenea
The adopted phrase characterizes Nature as always honoured. The reported fused form does not securely establish a rival adjective or a full independent lexical item.
Uncertainty No lemma is manufactured for τετιμενέα.
Greek evidence X.4. παντοκράτειρα, τετιμέν’ ἀεί, πανυπέρτατε δαῖμον,
Aligned English X.4. all-ruler, ever honoured, most high daimon,
X.4 AV018_04
Source AP018.04
Supplied apparatus δαῖμον Hermann] πᾶσιν.
Adopted forms δαῖμον
Adopted lexical access δαίμων
Reported forms πᾶσιν
Reported lexical access πᾶς
Transliteration access pasin
A direct divine address replaces a dative plural “for/to all.” The adopted line’s list of epithets thus explicitly includes δαίμων.
Greek evidence X.4. παντοκράτειρα, τετιμέν’ ἀεί, πανυπέρτατε δαῖμον,
Aligned English X.4. all-ruler, ever honoured, most high daimon,
X.6 AV018_06
Source AP018.06
Supplied apparatus πολύπειρε Stephanus] πολύτειρε.
Adopted forms πολύπειρε
Adopted lexical access πολύπειρος
Reported forms πολύτειρε
Transliteration access polyteire
The adopted epithet invokes manifold experience/knowledge. The reported πολύτειρε has a different medial consonant; no securely verified local sense is imposed.
Uncertainty Preserve πολύτειρε as reported-form access only.
Greek evidence X.6. ἐννυχίη, πολύπειρε, σελασφόρε, δεινοκάθεκτε,
Aligned English X.6. of the night, of much experience, light-bearing, hard to hold,
Related lexical entries πολύπειρος
X.10 AV018_07
Source AP018.07
Supplied apparatus 10 ἀργής Abel] ἀρετῇ.
Adopted forms ἀργής
Adopted lexical access ἀργής
Reported forms ἀρετῇ
Reported lexical access ἀρετή
Transliteration access aretēi
Bright/shining Nature in the adopted text replaces a dative noun “excellence/virtue.” This is not inflection of one lemma.
Greek evidence X.10. αὐτοπάτωρ, ἀπάτωρ, ἀργής, πολύγηθε, μεγίστη,
Aligned English X.10. self-fathered, fatherless, bright, of much gladness, greatest,
X.11 AV019_01
Source AP019.01
Supplied apparatus 11 εὐαντές Abel] εὐάνθεια.
Adopted forms εὐαντές
Adopted lexical access εὐαντής
Reported forms εὐάνθεια
Transliteration access euantheia
Printed εὐαντές is the gracious/accessible epithet: LSJ εὐάντης (also εὐαντής) refers to εὐάντητος. Reported εὐάνθεια instead suggests flourishing/flower-related wording, but its exact lemma and construction remain unproved.
Uncertainty Do not replace the printed tau with theta or conflate εὐαντής with εὐανθής. The dictionary confirms the adopted access form; the reported string remains unassigned.
Greek evidence X.11. εὐαντές, πλοκίη, φιλίη, πολύμικτε, δαῆμον,
Aligned English X.11. kindly met, braided, loving, of many minglings, knowing,
Related lexical entries εὐάντης
X.11 AV019_02
Source AP019.02
Supplied apparatus πλοκίη Hermann] πλόκη.
Adopted forms πλοκίη
Adopted lexical access πλόκιος
Reported forms πλόκη
Transliteration access plokē
Adopted πλοκίη is the twined/interweaving epithet recorded by LSJ as probable here; the reported πλόκη could suggest πλοκή but its printed accent and exact analysis remain uncertain.
Uncertainty Retain πλόκη rather than silently replacing it with the dictionary noun πλοκή.
Greek evidence X.11. εὐαντές, πλοκίη, φιλίη, πολύμικτε, δαῆμον,
Aligned English X.11. kindly met, braided, loving, of many minglings, knowing,
Related lexical entries πλοκίη
X.17 AV019_06
Source AP019.06
Supplied apparatus 17 αὐξιτρόφων π. πεπ. δὲ λ. codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms αὐξιτρόφος, πίειρα, πεπαινομένων τε λύτειρα
Adopted lexical access αὐξιτρόφος; πίειρα; πεπαίνω; τε; λύτειρα
Reported forms αὐξιτρόφων; π.; πεπ.; δὲ; λ.
Reported lexical access αὐξιτρόφος; δέ
Transliteration access auxitrophōn; p.; pep.; de; l.
The adopted line names Nature as growth-nurturer and releaser of ripened things. The report’s genitive plural αὐξιτρόφων and connective δὲ differ; abbreviated π., πεπ., λ. do not license invented complete transmitted words.
Uncertainty Only printed full reported forms are lemmatized. The abbreviated remainder is deliberately not expanded.
Greek evidence X.17. αὐξιτρόφος, πίειρα, πεπαινομένων τε λύτειρα,
Aligned English X.17. fostering growth, rich, and looser of what is ripening,
X.18 AV019_07
Source AP019.07
Supplied apparatus 18 τιθήνη Abel] τιθηνός.
Adopted forms τιθήνη
Adopted lexical access τιθήνη
Reported forms τιθηνός
Reported lexical access τιθηνός
Transliteration access tithēnos
The adopted τιθήνη is the explicitly feminine nurse noun. Reported τιθηνός can itself be a nursing adjective, a male foster-nurse noun or a feminine nurse noun; it does not force male gender. The line already calls Nature father and mother.
Uncertainty Do not present this variant as an obligatory female-to-male change. LSJ expressly records feminine τιθηνός as equivalent to τιθήνη.
Greek evidence X.18. πάντων μὲν σὺ πατήρ, μήτηρ, τροφὸς ἠδὲ τιθήνη,
Aligned English X.18. of all things you are father, mother, nurse and foster-mother,
X.20 AV019_08
Source AP019.08
Supplied apparatus 20 πότνια] παντοῖα codd.
Adopted forms πότνια
Adopted lexical access πότνια
Reported forms παντοῖα
Reported lexical access παντοῖος
Transliteration access pantoia
The reverential “mistress” address replaces “of every kind/manifold.” These words contribute different aspects to Nature’s characterization.
Greek evidence X.20. παντοτεχνές, πλάστειρα, πολύκτιτε, πότνια δαῖμον,
Aligned English X.20. maker of every craft, moulder, of many foundings, lady daimon,
X.24 AV020_03
Source AP020.03
Supplied apparatus 24 εὔθρονε Hermann] ἔνθρονε.
Adopted forms εὔθρονε
Adopted lexical access εὔθρονος
Reported forms ἔνθρονε
Reported lexical access ἔνθρονος
Transliteration access enthrone
The adopted good/fair-throned compound differs from “enthroned.” The reading does not itself settle all possible etymological meanings of θρόνος.
Greek evidence X.24. εὔθρονε, τιμήεσσα, μόνη τὸ κριθὲν τελέουσα,
Aligned English X.24. fair-throned, held in honour, alone accomplishing what is decreed,
Related lexical entries εὔθρονος
X.28 AV020_04
Source AP020.04
Supplied apparatus 28 σὺ ἔσσι Hermann] σοὶ εἰσί.
Adopted forms σὺ ἔσσι
Adopted lexical access σύ; εἰμί
Reported forms σοὶ εἰσί
Reported lexical access σύ; εἰμί
Transliteration access soi eisi
Adopted “you are all things” replaces “all things are for you/to you.” This is a major predicative relation despite using the same pronoun and verb lemmas.
Greek evidence X.28. πάντα σὺ ἔσσι· τὰ πάντα σὺ γὰρ μούνη τάδε τεύχεις.
Aligned English X.28. you are all things: for you alone make all these.
Related lexical entries εἰμί
XI.5 AV021_03
Source AP021.03
Supplied apparatus 5 φιλένθεε, ἀστροδίαιτε codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms φιλένθεος, ἀντροδίαιτε
Adopted lexical access φιλένθεος; ἀντροδίαιτος
Reported forms φιλένθεε; ἀστροδίαιτε
Reported lexical access φιλένθεος; ἀστροδίαιτος
Transliteration access philenthee; astrodiaite
The φιλένθεος change is grammatical; cave-dwelling in ἀντροδίαιτε contrasts with star-dwelling ἀστροδίαιτε. That spatial compound is not a minor inflection.
Greek evidence XI.5. αἰγομελές, βακχευτά, φιλένθεος, ἀντροδίαιτε,
Aligned English XI.5. goat-limbed, reveller, filled with the god, dweller in caves,
Related lexical entries φιλένθεος; ἀντροδίαιτος
XI.14 AV022_02
Source AP022.02
Supplied apparatus 14 βαθύρροον Lennep] βαθύσπορον.
Adopted forms βαθύρροον
Adopted lexical access βαθύρροος
Reported forms βαθύσπορον
Reported lexical access βαθύσπορος
Transliteration access bathysporon
Deep-flowing water replaces a deep-sown compound. The former is a hydrological description; the latter’s precise force here is uncertain.
Uncertainty The alternative’s local interpretation is not secured by merely recognizing its components.
Greek evidence XI.14. εἴκει δ’ ἀκαμάτου πόντου τὸ βαθύρροον ὕδωρ
Aligned English XI.14. and the deep-flowing water of the untiring sea gives way,
Related lexical entries βαθύρροος
XI.18 AV023_01
Source AP023.01
Supplied apparatus 18 ῥεῖα Wiel] θεῖα.
Adopted forms ῥεῖα
Adopted lexical access ῥεῖα
Reported forms θεῖα
Reported lexical access θεῖος
Transliteration access theia
Adopted “easily” describes how the cosmic components move under Pan’s commands; the reported adjective would call the things divine.
Greek evidence XI.18. βαίνει γὰρ τάδε ῥεῖα πολύκριτα σῇσιν ἐφετμαῖς·
Aligned English XI.18. For these things, so widely diverse, go easily at your commands;
XII.5 AV024_04
Source AP024.04
Supplied apparatus 5 κάρτος μετὰ τόξα καὶ μάντι codd., corr. Sanctamandus.
Adopted forms κάρτος μέγα, τοξότα, μάντι
Adopted lexical access κάρτος; μέγας; τοξότης; μάντις
Reported forms κάρτος μετὰ τόξα καὶ μάντι
Reported lexical access κάρτος; μετά; τόξον; καί; μάντις
Transliteration access kartos meta toxa kai manti
Adopted “great might, archer, seer” replaces a reported clause containing “might, with/after bows, and seer.” The changes create the explicit agent title τοξότης and adjective μέγας.
Uncertainty The transmitted phrase as reported is syntactically problematic; no smooth rival translation is asserted.
Greek evidence XII.5. παγκρατὲς ἦτορ ἔχων, κάρτος μέγα, τοξότα, μάντι,
Aligned English XII.5. holding an all-conquering heart, great might, archer, seer,
XII.10 AV025_01
Source AP025.01
Supplied apparatus 10 βολίσιν Lennep] φολίσιν.
Adopted forms βολίσιν
Adopted lexical access βολίς
Reported forms φολίσιν
Reported lexical access φολίς
Transliteration access pholisin
Adopted missiles/bolts used in flashing contrast with reported scales. These are different nouns, not spelling variants of one headword.
Greek evidence XII.10. πρωτογόνοις στράψας βολίσιν, μεγαλώνυμε δαῖμον,
Aligned English XII.10. flashing with first-born shafts, daimon of great renown,
Related lexical entries βολίς
XII.10 AV025_02
Source AP025.02
Supplied apparatus δαῖμον Pierson] ναίων.
Adopted forms δαῖμον
Adopted lexical access δαίμων
Reported forms ναίων
Reported lexical access ναίω
Transliteration access naiōn
A divine vocative replaces a dwelling participle; the line’s construction changes along with lexical content.
Greek evidence XII.10. πρωτογόνοις στράψας βολίσιν, μεγαλώνυμε δαῖμον,
Aligned English XII.10. flashing with first-born shafts, daimon of great renown,
XII.16 AV025_05
Source AP025.05
Supplied apparatus 16 ἐπίπεμπε codd.
Adopted forms ἀπόπεμπε
Adopted lexical access ἀποπέμπω
Reported forms ἐπίπεμπε
Reported lexical access ἐπιπέμπω
Transliteration access epipempe
The adopted petition sends destructive fates away; the reported verb sends them upon/toward. Direction of the requested action is materially different.
Greek evidence XII.16. πτηνοῖς τ’ ἰοβόλοις κῆρας χαλεπὰς ἀπόπεμπε.
Aligned English XII.16. and with winged arrows send the harsh dooms away.
Related lexical entries ἀποπέμπω
XIII.4 AV026_02
Source AP026.02
Supplied apparatus 4 ἀρρήκτους Lennep] ἀρρήτους.
Adopted forms ἀρρήκτους
Adopted lexical access ἄρρηκτος
Reported forms ἀρρήτους
Reported lexical access ἄρρητος
Transliteration access arrētous
Kronos has unbreakable bonds in the adopted text rather than unspeakable/secret bonds. Explain these separate compounds without treating all ἀρρητ- language as a mystery code.
Greek evidence XIII.4. δεσμοὺς ἀρρήκτους ὃς ἔχεις κατ’ ἀπείρονα κόσμον,
Aligned English XIII.4. you who hold unbreakable bonds throughout the boundless kosmos,
XIII.7 AV026_04
Source AP026.04
Supplied apparatus 7 φυῆς Lennep] φυή.
Adopted forms φυῆς
Adopted lexical access φυή
Reported forms φυή
Reported lexical access φυή
Transliteration access phyē
Adopted genitive attaches growth/nature to μείωσι, “diminisher of growth”; reported nominative would alter this construction. Same noun but meaningful syntax.
Greek evidence XIII.7. γέννα, φυῆς μείωσι, Ῥέας πόσι, σεμνὲ προμηθεῦ,
Aligned English XIII.7. birth, diminisher of growth, husband of Rhea, august Prometheus,
Related lexical entries φυή
XIII.10 AV026_05
Source AP026.05
Supplied apparatus 10 εὐόλβου Hermann] εὐόλβον.
Adopted forms εὐόλβου
Adopted lexical access εὔολβος
Reported forms εὐόλβον
Reported lexical access εὔολβος
Transliteration access euolbon
Genitive qualifies life rather than the accusative end; the prosperous sense remains.
Greek evidence XIII.10. πέμποις εὐόλβου βιότου τέλος αἰὲν ἄμεμπτον.
Aligned English XIII.10. may you send an end of life ever blessed and blameless.
Related lexical entries εὔολβος
XIV.2 AV027_01
Source AP027.01
Supplied apparatus 2 ἥτ’ ἐπὶ ταυροφόρον ἱερότροχον ἅρμα τιταίνεις codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms ᾗ λῖς ταυροφόνος ἱερότροχον ἅρμα τιταίνει
Adopted lexical access ὅς; λίς; ταυροφόνος; ἱερότροχος; ἅρμα; τιταίνω
Reported forms ἥτ’ ἐπὶ ταυροφόρον ἱερότροχον ἅρμα τιταίνεις
Reported lexical access ὅς; τε; ἐπί; ταυροφόρος; ἱερότροχος; ἅρμα; τιταίνω
Transliteration access hēt’ epi taurophoron hierotrokhon harma titaineis
The adopted line supplies the lion as subject, bull-slaying, drawing Rhea’s sacred-wheeled chariot. The reported wording has Rhea as implied second-person subject and bull-bearing rather than bull-slaying. This changes agent and imagery.
Uncertainty The lion λῖς is absent from the complete reported clause; do not invent it as a witnessed word. The grammar of the reported opening remains awkward.
Greek evidence XIV.2. ᾗ λῖς ταυροφόνος ἱερότροχον ἅρμα τιταίνει,
Aligned English XIV.2. whose bull-slaying lion draws the sacred-wheeled chariot,
Related lexical entries λίς; ταυροφόνος; ἱερότροχος; ἅρμα; τιταίνω
XV.1 AV029_01
Source AP029.01
Supplied apparatus 1 πολύτιμε codd.
Adopted forms πολυτίμητε
Adopted lexical access πολυτίμητος
Reported forms πολύτιμε
Reported lexical access πολύτιμος
Transliteration access polytime
The adopted much-honoured participial adjective differs in formation from the reported much-valued/honoured adjective. The semantic overlap warrants a linked variant record, not two unrelated senses.
Greek evidence XV.1. Ζεῦ πολυτίμητε, Ζεῦ ἄφθιτε, τήνδε τοι ἡμεῖς
Aligned English XV.1. Zeus much honoured, Zeus imperishable, this absolving testimony
Related lexical entries πολυτίμητος; πολύτιμος
XV.5 AV029_03
Source AP029.03
Supplied apparatus 5 ἐέργει Abel] ἔταξε.
Adopted forms ἐέργει
Adopted lexical access ἐέργω
Reported forms ἔταξε
Reported lexical access τάσσω
Transliteration access etaxe
Heaven encloses things in the adopted line rather than having ordered/arranged them. Spatial containment and ordering should not be collapsed.
Greek evidence XV.5. καὶ πόντος καὶ πάνθ’, ὁπόσ’ οὐρανὸς ἐντὸς ἐέργει·
Aligned English XV.5. and the sea, and all that heaven encloses within;
Related lexical entries ἔργω
XV.9 AV029_04
Source AP029.04
Supplied apparatus 9 ἀστράπιε Hermann] ἀστραπαῖε.
Adopted forms ἀστράπιε
Adopted lexical access ἀστράπιος
Reported forms ἀστραπαῖε
Reported lexical access ἀστραπαῖος
Transliteration access astrapaie
Both are lightning epithets, but preserve their different suffixes and access forms. No distinct Zeus is implied.
Greek evidence XV.9. ἀστράπιε, βρονταῖε, κεραύνιε, φυτάλιε Ζεῦ·
Aligned English XV.9. god of the lightning, of the thunder, of the thunderbolt, Zeus of growth;
Related lexical entries ἀστράπιος
XVI.6 AV030_04
Source AP030.04
Supplied apparatus 6 ἠέρι Dorville] περί.
Adopted forms ἠέρι
Adopted lexical access ἀήρ
Reported forms περί
Reported lexical access περί
Transliteration access peri
The adopted dative noun explicitly makes Hera mingled with august air; the reported preposition does not itself name air. This affects the hymn’s physical characterization of Hera.
Greek evidence XVI.6. κοινωνεῖς γὰρ ἅπασι κεκραμένη ἠέρι σεμνῷ·
Aligned English XVI.6. for you share in all things, blended with the august air;
Related lexical entries ἀήρ
XVI.10 AV030_05
Source AP030.05
Supplied apparatus 10 γήθουσα Lobeck] γήθοντι.
Adopted forms γήθουσα
Adopted lexical access γηθέω
Reported forms γήθοντι
Reported lexical access γηθέω
Transliteration access gēthonti
Adopted feminine participle describes Hera’s gladness; reported dative attaches gladness elsewhere, potentially the face. Preserve the changed agreement without another lemma.
Greek evidence XVI.10. ἔλθοις εὐμενέουσα καλῷ γήθουσα προσώπῳ.
Aligned English XVI.10. may you come with favour, rejoicing, with a fair face.
Related lexical entries γηθέω
XVII.7 AV031_05
Source AP031.05
Supplied apparatus 7 ἔλαβες codd.
Adopted forms ἔλαχες
Adopted lexical access λαγχάνω
Reported forms ἔλαβες
Reported lexical access λαμβάνω
Transliteration access elabes
Adopted receiving by lot contrasts with general taking/receiving, an important distinction in Poseidon’s third share of the sea.
Greek evidence XVII.7. ὃς τριτάτης μοίρης ἔλαχες βαθὺ χεῦμα θαλάσσης,
Aligned English XVII.7. you who by the third lot were allotted the deep stream of the sea,
Related lexical entries λαγχάνω
XVIII.heading AV033_01
Source AP033.01
Supplied apparatus Inscr. εἰς τυφῶνα est in codd.
Reported forms εἰς τυφῶνα
Reported lexical access εἰς; Τυφών
Transliteration access eis typhōna
The apparatus says the manuscripts have a heading “to Typhon,” whereas the supplied hymn is presented as Plouton. This is paratextual evidence, not a Typhon occurrence in the adopted verses.
Uncertainty The exact manuscripts and heading’s history are not independently collated.
Heading evidence XVIII.heading. XVIII. ΕΙΣ ΠΛΟΥΤΩΝΑ
Related lexical entries Πλούτων
XVIII.11 AV033_02
Source AP033.02
Supplied apparatus 11 πολυδέγμον Ruhnken] πολυδαῖμον.
Adopted forms πολυδέγμον
Adopted lexical access πολυδέγμων
Reported forms πολυδαῖμον
Reported lexical access πολυδαίμων
Transliteration access polydaimon
The adopted many-receiving epithet characterizes the lord of the dead. LSJ labels πολυδαίμων at this locus a false reading; it is retained as a report, not confidently glossed as an independent theology of many daimones.
Greek evidence XVIII.11. ὃς κρατέεις θνητῶν θανάτου χάριν, ὦ πολυδέγμον·
Aligned English XVIII.11. you who rule over mortals for death's sake, O receiver of many;
Related lexical entries πολυδέγμων
XVIII.15 AV033_04
Source AP033.04
Supplied apparatus 15 εἰς codd.
Adopted forms εἰσ’
Adopted lexical access εἰμί
Reported forms εἰς
Reported lexical access εἰς
Transliteration access eis
Printed εἰσ’ is elided “are,” in “where the gates of Hades are”; reported εἰς could be read as the preposition into. The apparatus’s punctuation matters for parsing, not just orthography.
Uncertainty No full εἰσί is printed in the apparatus; dictionary access does not alter the source.
Greek evidence XVIII.15. δήμου Ἐλευσῖνος, τόθι περ πύλαι εἰσ’ Ἀίδαο.
Aligned English XVIII.15. of the deme of Eleusis, where the gates of Hades are.
Related lexical entries εἰμί
XVIII.18 AV033_06
Source AP033.06
Supplied apparatus 18 μυστοπόλοις (sic, errore?) Hermann] μουσιπόλοις.
Adopted forms μυστιπόλοις
Adopted lexical access μυστιπόλος
Reported forms μουσιπόλοις
Transliteration access mousipolois
The adopted μυστιπόλοις belongs to mystery-service vocabulary; the reported μουσιπόλοις has a different first component and uncertain exact dictionary form. The apparatus’s μυστοπόλοις is itself questioned and is not the actual adopted form.
Uncertainty Preserve μυστιπόλοις, apparatus μυστοπόλοις (sic, errore?) and reported μουσιπόλοις distinctly. The last resembles Muse-service formations such as μουσοπόλος, but is not silently respelled or assigned that lemma.
Greek evidence XVIII.18. σεμνοῖς μυστιπόλοις χαίρων ὁσίοις τε σεβασμοῖς·
Aligned English XVIII.18. rejoicing in the august celebrants and in pure acts of reverence;
Related lexical entries μυστιπόλος
XIX.1 AV034_01
Source AP034.01
Supplied apparatus 1 ὑψίβρομον Hermann] ὑψίδρομον.
Adopted forms ὑψίβρομον
Adopted lexical access ὑψίβρομος
Reported forms ὑψίδρομον
Reported lexical access ὑψίδρομος
Transliteration access hupsidromon
High-thundering cosmos in the adopted phrase contrasts with high-running; the compound’s second element changes the physical image.
Greek evidence XIX.1. Ζεῦ πάτερ, ὑψίβρομον πυριαυγέα κόσμον ἐλαύνων,
Aligned English XIX.1. Zeus father, driving the high-roaring, fire-gleaming kosmos,
Related lexical entries ὑψίβρομος
XIX.1 AV034_02
Source AP034.02
Supplied apparatus πυριαυγέα Abel] πυρσαυγέα.
Adopted forms πυριαυγέα
Adopted lexical access πυριαυγής
Reported forms πυρσαυγέα
Reported lexical access πυρσαυγής
Transliteration access pyrsaugea
Fire-shining and torch/firelight-shining compounds overlap in luminosity but have different forms; give linked variant access without inventing a contrast unsupported by context.
Greek evidence XIX.1. Ζεῦ πάτερ, ὑψίβρομον πυριαυγέα κόσμον ἐλαύνων,
Aligned English XIX.1. Zeus father, driving the high-roaring, fire-gleaming kosmos,
Related lexical entries πυριαυγής
XIX.6 AV034_05
Source AP034.05
Supplied apparatus 6 κραιπνούς Hermann] κρατερούς.
Adopted forms κραιπνούς
Adopted lexical access κραιπνός
Reported forms κρατερούς
Reported lexical access κρατερός
Transliteration access kraterous
The missiles are swift in the adopted text rather than strong. Both epithets are intelligible but emphasize different qualities.
Greek evidence XIX.6. παμφλέκτους, κραιπνούς, φρικώδεας, ὀβριμοθύμους,
Aligned English XIX.6. all-burning, swift, shudder-making, of mighty spirit,
XIX.7 AV034_06
Source AP034.06
Supplied apparatus 7 εὐροθίους Hermann] ἐς ῥοθίους.
Adopted forms εὐροθίους
Adopted lexical access εὐρόθιος
Reported forms ἐς ῥοθίους
Reported lexical access ἐς; ῥόθιος
Transliteration access es rhothious
The adopted εὐροθίους describes rapidly rushing thunderbolts (LSJ at this locus). The reported ἐς ῥοθίους is a preposition plus a separate rushing/roaring adjective, not just another inflection of the adopted compound.
Uncertainty The reported phrase’s syntactic object is not securely recoverable from the note alone.
Greek evidence XIX.7. βάλλων εὐροθίους, φλογερούς, νεφέεσσι καλύπτων
Aligned English XIX.7. hurling them, well-rushing and flaming, covering them with clouds,
Related lexical entries εὐρόθιος
XIX.7 AV034_07
Source AP034.07
Supplied apparatus νεφέεσσι Hermann] βελέεσσι.
Adopted forms νεφέεσσι
Adopted lexical access νεφέλη
Reported forms βελέεσσι
Reported lexical access βέλος
Transliteration access beleessi
Concealing in clouds replaces concealing with/in missiles. The physical medium changes.
Greek evidence XIX.7. βάλλων εὐροθίους, φλογερούς, νεφέεσσι καλύπτων
Aligned English XIX.7. hurling them, well-rushing and flaming, covering them with clouds,
XIX.8 AV034_08
Source AP034.08
Supplied apparatus 8 κλονοκάρδιον Stephanus] χρονοκάρδιον.
Adopted forms κλονοκάρδιον
Adopted lexical access κλονοκάρδιος
Reported forms χρονοκάρδιον
Transliteration access khronokardion
Adopted “heart-shaking” describes the frightening weapon. The reported χρονοκάρδιον is kept as an uncertain string, not interpreted as a novel theory of time and heart.
Uncertainty No secure variant lemma or sense assigned.
Greek evidence XIX.8. πτηνὸν ὅπλον δεινόν, κλονοκάρδιον, ὀρθοέθειρον,
Aligned English XIX.8. a winged weapon, dread, heart-shaking, hair-raising,
Related lexical entries κλονοκάρδιος
XIX.heading AV035_01
Source AP035.01
Supplied apparatus Inscr. Κεραυνοῦ in inscriptione codd.
Reported forms Κεραυνοῦ
Reported lexical access κεραυνός
Transliteration access Keraunou
The source reports a genitive heading “of Thunderbolt.” This belongs to the heading layer and does not add a verse occurrence.
Uncertainty The apparatus’s heading report is not independent proof of the manuscript title’s historical authority.
Heading evidence XIX.heading. XIX. ΚΕΡΑΥΝΙΟΥ ΔΙΟΣ
Rubric θυμίαμα στύρακα
Related lexical entries κεραυνός
XIX.17 AV035_02
Source AP035.02
Supplied apparatus 17 προκάλυμμ’ ἀφίεις Slothouwer] προκάλυμμα βάλλεις.
Adopted forms προκάλυμμ’ ἀφίεις
Adopted lexical access προκάλυμμα; ἀφίημι
Reported forms προκάλυμμα βάλλεις
Reported lexical access προκάλυμμα; βάλλω
Transliteration access prokalymma balleis
The adopted thunderbolt is sent forth/released rather than thrown; the common covering/veil noun is elided in the adopted wording. Keep the distinct verbs visible.
Greek evidence XIX.17. οὐράνιον προκάλυμμ’ ἀφίεις ἀργῆτα κεραυνόν.
Aligned English XIX.17. the heavenly covering, you let loose the white thunderbolt.
Related lexical entries προκάλυμμα; ἀφίημι; βάλλω
XIX.18 AV035_03
Source AP035.03
Supplied apparatus 18 βαρύν add. Slothouwer.
Adopted forms βαρὺν
Adopted lexical access βαρύς
The supplied addition makes Zeus’s θυμός explicitly heavy/grievous, whose force is redirected into the sea. This meaningful adjective needs a note even though the apparatus supplies no rejected replacement.
Greek evidence XIX.18. ἀλλά, μάκαρ, θυμὸν βαρὺν ἔμβαλε κύμασι πόντου
Aligned English XIX.18. But, blessed one, cast your heavy anger into the waves of the sea
Related lexical entries βαρύς
XX.heading AV036_01
Source AP036.01
Supplied apparatus In inscriptione ἀστραπίου Abel pro ἀστραπέως.
Adopted forms ἀστραπίου
Adopted lexical access ἀστράπιος
Reported forms ἀστραπέως
Transliteration access astrapeōs
Two lightning epithets appear in the heading report; distinguish the adopted adjective from the reported agent-style formation, without adding either to verse counts.
Uncertainty Reported ἀστραπέως is preserved as an exact heading-form label; the nominative ἀστραπεύς is not manufactured from it. Historical title transmission remains uncollated.
Heading evidence XX.heading. XX. ΔΙΟΣ ΑΣΤΡΑΠΙΟΥ
Rubric θυμίαμα λιβανομάνναν
Related lexical entries ἀστράπιος
XX.2 AV036_03
Source AP036.03
Supplied apparatus πυρίβρομον Pierson] πυρίδρομον.
Adopted forms πυρίβρομον
Adopted lexical access πυρίβρομος
Reported forms πυρίδρομον
Reported lexical access πυρίδρομος
Transliteration access pyridromon
Fire-thundering replaces fire-running, a real change in Zeus’s sound/motion imagery.
Greek evidence XX.2. ἠέριον, φλογόεντα, πυρίβρομον, ἠεροφεγγῆ,
Aligned English XX.2. of the air, flaming, fire-roaring, shining through the air,
Related lexical entries πυρίβρομος; πυρίδρομος
XX.5 AV036_05
Source AP036.05
Supplied apparatus 5 ἀστράπιον Abel] ἀστραπαῖον.
Adopted forms ἀστράπιον
Adopted lexical access ἀστράπιος
Reported forms ἀστραπαῖον
Reported lexical access ἀστραπαῖος
Transliteration access astrapaion
Different suffixal forms of the lightning epithet, as also at XV.9; no distinct deity is established.
Greek evidence XX.5. ἀστράπιον Δία, παγγενέτην, βασιλῆα μέγιστον,
Aligned English XX.5. Zeus of the lightning, all-begetter, greatest king,
Related lexical entries ἀστράπιος
XXI.3 AV037_03
Source AP037.03
Supplied apparatus 3 ὑγροκέλευθοι Hermann] ὑδροκέλευθοι.
Adopted forms ὑγροκέλευθοι
Adopted lexical access ὑγροκέλευθος
Reported forms ὑδροκέλευθοι
Reported lexical access ὑδροκέλευθος
Transliteration access hudrokeleuthoi
The adopted wet-wayed compound differs from a water-wayed formation. Their local senses overlap but the Greek compounds remain separately searchable.
Greek evidence XXI.3. βρονταῖαι, πυρόεσσαι, ἐρίβρομοι, ὑγροκέλευθοι,
Aligned English XXI.3. of the thunder, fiery, loud-roaring, watery-pathed,
Related lexical entries ὑγροκέλευθος
XXII.5 AV038_01
Source AP038.01
Supplied apparatus 5 εὐδίοις Abel] εὐδεινοῖς.
Adopted forms εὐδίοις
Adopted lexical access εὔδιος
Reported forms εὐδεινοῖς
Reported lexical access εὐδεινός
Transliteration access eudeinois
Both describe calm/gentle conditions of the sea’s courses. LSJ recognizes εὐδεινός as a contracted εὐδιεινός and reports this very variant, so it is not an unintelligible corruption.
Greek evidence XXII.5. εὐδίοις ἁπαλοῖσι γαληνιόωσα δρόμοισι,
Aligned English XXII.5. growing calm again in soft and fair-weather courses,
Related lexical entries εὔδιος
XXIII.6 AV039_02
Source AP039.02
Supplied apparatus 6 ἐννυχίοις et ἀποκλείοις codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms ἐν μυχίοις; ἀποκλείεις
Adopted lexical access ἐν; μύχιος; ἀποκλείω
Reported forms ἐννυχίοις; ἀποκλείοις
Reported lexical access ἐννύχιος; ἀποκλείω
Transliteration access ennykhiois; apokleiois
Adopted “in inner recesses” differs from “nocturnal”; the closing verb is indicative rather than reported optative. The concealed winds are not automatically night winds.
Greek evidence XXIII.6. ἐν μυχίοις κευθμῶσιν ἐλαυνομένας ἀποκλείεις·
Aligned English XXIII.6. the winds driven into the innermost hiding-places;
XXIII.8 AV039_04
Source AP039.04
Supplied apparatus ἠπιόχειρ’ (ἠπιόχειρον ὑγείην Ruhnken) ὑγίειαν Hermann] ὀλβιόχειρον ὑγείην.
Adopted forms ἠπιόχειρ’ ὑγίειαν
Adopted lexical access ἠπιόχειρ; ὑγίεια
Reported forms ὀλβιόχειρον ὑγείην
Transliteration access olbiokheiron hygeiēn
The adopted health has a soothing/gentle hand rather than the reported prosperous/blessed-hand formation. Ruhnken’s parenthetical ἠπιόχειρον ὑγείην is a separate editorial proposal, not another manuscript reading.
Uncertainty Do not force ὀλβιόχειρον into the three-termination morphology of ἠπιόχειρ or silently replace its ending. The alternate spelling of health belongs to the same health-word family.
Greek evidence XXIII.8. ὄλβον τ’ εἰρήνην τε καὶ ἠπιόχειρ’ ὑγίειαν.
Aligned English XXIII.8. prosperity and peace and gentle-handed health.
XXIV.2 AV040_01
Source AP040.01
Supplied apparatus 2 φρικαλέαι Abel] σφράγιαι.
Adopted forms φρικαλέαι
Adopted lexical access φρικαλέος
Reported forms σφράγιαι
Transliteration access sphragiai
Adopted fearsome/shuddering Nereids replace an obscure reported string. No “seal” or “sacrifice” definition is to be invented for σφράγιαι from resemblance alone.
Uncertainty The reported form remains an attested-form label without secure dictionary access.
Greek evidence XXIV.2. φρικαλέαι, βύθιαι, χοροπαίγμονες, ὑγροκέλευθοι,
Aligned English XXIV.2. shuddering, of the depths, dance-players, watery-pathed,
Related lexical entries φρικαλέος
XXV.9 AV041_02
Source AP041.02
Supplied apparatus 9 ἐν omm. codd.
Adopted forms ἐν
Adopted lexical access ἐν
The adopted “in Proteus” explicitly locates what first Nature deposited. The apparatus says the manuscripts omit ἐν, but names no restorer. The construction matters for Nature/Proteus, not a standalone article on the preposition.
Greek evidence XXV.9. πάντα γὰρ ἐν Πρωτεῖ πρώτη φύσις ἐγκατέθηκε.
Aligned English XXV.9. for the first nature laid all things up in Proteus.
XXVI.6 AV042_04
Source AP042.04
Supplied apparatus πολύσεμνε Abel] πολύσεπτε.
Adopted forms πολύσεμνε
Adopted lexical access πολύσεμνος
Reported forms πολύσεπτε
Reported lexical access πολύσεπτος
Transliteration access polysepte
Both epithets express intense reverence, but σεμν- and σεπτ- are distinct formations; do not erase their form distinction or impose the edition’s English policy as two rigid ancient categories.
Greek evidence XXVI.6. ἀιδίη, πολύσεμνε, βαθύστερν’, ὀλβιόμοιρε,
Aligned English XXVI.6. everlasting, most august, deep-breasted, of blessed lot,
Related lexical entries πολύσεμνος
XXVI.8 AV042_06
Source AP042.06
Supplied apparatus 8 ὀμβροχαρές Abel] ὀμβριμοχαρής.
Adopted forms ὀμβροχαρές
Adopted lexical access ὀμβροχαρής
Reported forms ὀμβριμοχαρής
Transliteration access ombrimokharēs
Adopted “rain-rejoicing” fits Gaia and growing vegetation; the extra letters of the report do not justify silently glossing a separate strength- or storm-compound.
Uncertainty No secure dictionary lemma is assigned to ὀμβριμοχαρής.
Greek evidence XXVI.8. ὀμβροχαρές, περὶ τὴν κόσμος πολυδαίδαλος ἄστρων
Aligned English XXVI.8. rain-delighting, about whom the intricate order of the stars
Related lexical entries ὀμβροχαρής
XXVI.11 AV042_08
Source AP042.08
Supplied apparatus 11 εὐόλβοισιν Lennep] ὀλβίοισιν.
Adopted forms εὐόλβοισιν
Adopted lexical access εὔολβος
Reported forms ὀλβίοισιν
Reported lexical access ὄλβιος
Transliteration access olbioisin
Prosperous/blessed seasons can be expressed with either related adjective. Give both access forms without asserting a large local semantic opposition.
Greek evidence XXVI.11. εὐμενὲς ἦτορ ἔχουσα, σὺν εὐόλβοισιν ἐν ὥραις.
Aligned English XXVI.11. holding a kindly heart, in seasons of good fortune.
Related lexical entries εὔολβος
XXVIII.5 AV044_04
Source AP044.04
Supplied apparatus 5 στροφιοῦχε Wiel] τροφιοῦχε.
Adopted forms στροφιοῦχε
Adopted lexical access στροφιοῦχος
Reported forms τροφιοῦχε
Transliteration access trophioukhe
The adopted Hermes epithet is wearing a στρόφιον according to LSJ, which explicitly calls it a conjecture for τροφ-. The reported form must not be automatically defined as a nourishment-holder.
Uncertainty The accepted source reading is lexically explained without claiming its underlying textual history certain; reported τροφιοῦχε remains an attested-form label.
Greek evidence XXVIII.5. γυμνάσιν ὃς χαίρεις δολίαις τ’ ἀπάταις, στροφιοῦχε,
Aligned English XXVIII.5. you who rejoice in exercises and in crafty deceits, wearer of the twisted band,
Related lexical entries στροφιοῦχος
XXIX.5 AV046_01
Source AP046.01
Supplied apparatus 5 ἐρασιπλόκαμος Abel] ἐρατοπλόκαμος.
Adopted forms ἐρασιπλόκαμος
Adopted lexical access ἐρασιπλόκαμος
Reported forms ἐρατοπλόκαμος
Reported lexical access ἐρατοπλόκαμος
Transliteration access eratoplokamos
Both relate to lovely/love-locks and LSJ cross-refers their meanings; preserve the two forms without manufacturing a sharp semantic contrast.
Greek evidence XXIX.5. Πραξιδίκη, ἐρασιπλόκαμος, Δηοῦς θάλος ἁγνόν,
Aligned English XXIX.5. Praxidike, of lovely hair, holy shoot of Deo,
Related lexical entries ἐρασιπλόκαμος
XXIX.5 AV046_02
Source AP046.02
Supplied apparatus Δηοῦς Lennep] διός.
Adopted forms Δηοῦς
Adopted lexical access Δηώ
Reported forms διός
Reported lexical access Ζεύς
Transliteration access dios
The adopted shoot of Deo/Demeter contrasts with a shoot of Zeus at this precise line. Zeus is already explicitly her father in XXIX.1 and is still present in XXIX.7, so the alteration must not be described as removing Zeus from the hymn or supplying Persephone’s existence.
Greek evidence XXIX.5. Πραξιδίκη, ἐρασιπλόκαμος, Δηοῦς θάλος ἁγνόν,
Aligned English XXIX.5. Praxidike, of lovely hair, holy shoot of Deo,
XXIX.9 AV046_03
Source AP046.03
Supplied apparatus 9 συμπαίκτειρα Heringa] συμπλέκτειρα.
Adopted forms συμπαίκτειρα
Adopted lexical access συμπαίκτειρα
Reported forms συμπλέκτειρα
Reported lexical access συμπλέκτειρα
Transliteration access symplekteira
Adopted συμπαίκτειρα means playmate of the Seasons. Reported συμπλέκτειρα morphologically suggests a co-weaving/intertwining agent, but LSJ labels it a false reading for συμπαίκτειρα, not an independently established weaving sense in this hymn.
Uncertainty The component-based alternative sense is explicitly tentative; the full reported form remains retrievable. A dictionary false-reading label is lexicographic judgment, not fresh collation.
Greek evidence XXIX.9. Ὡρῶν συμπαίκτειρα, φαεσφόρος, ἀγλαόμορφε,
Aligned English XXIX.9. playmate of the Horai, light-bearing, of splendid form,
Related lexical entries συμπαίκτειρα
XXIX.13 AV047_02
Source AP047.02
Supplied apparatus 13 χροοκάρποις codd.
Adopted forms χλοοκάρποις
Adopted lexical access χλοόκαρπος
Reported forms χροοκάρποις
Transliteration access khrookarpois
The adopted shoots have green/new fruit. The rho spelling is preserved without inventing a skin/colour-fruit compound from it.
Uncertainty No secure reported lemma or semantic contrast is asserted.
Greek evidence XXIX.13. ἱερὸν ἐκφαίνουσα δέμας βλαστοῖς χλοοκάρποις,
Aligned English XXIX.13. showing forth your sacred body in green-fruited shoots,
Related lexical entries χλοόκαρπος
XXX.5 AV048_01
Source AP048.01
Supplied apparatus 5 βοτρυηφόρον Abel] βοτρυοφόρον.
Adopted forms βοτρυηφόρον
Adopted lexical access βοτρυηφόρος
Reported forms βοτρυοφόρον
Reported lexical access βοτρυοφόρος
Transliteration access botryophoron
Both formations mean cluster-bearing; the vowel between noun and carrying element differs. Their close semantic identity can be explained together while preserving lookup access.
Greek evidence XXX.5. ὠμάδιον, τριετῆ, βοτρυηφόρον, ἐρνεσίπεπλον.
Aligned English XXX.5. eater of raw flesh, of the third year, grape-bearing, robed in shoots.
Related lexical entries βοτρυηφόρος
XXX.6 AV048_02
Source AP048.02
Supplied apparatus 6 Εὐβουλεῦ πολύβουλε Pierson] εὔβουλ’ εὐπολύβουλε.
Adopted forms Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύβουλε
Adopted lexical access Εὐβουλεύς; πολύβουλος
Reported forms εὔβουλ’ εὐπολύβουλε
Reported lexical access εὔβουλος
Transliteration access euboul’ eupolyboule
The adopted naming address Eubouleus followed by “much-counselling” replaces “good-counselling” plus an uncertain prefixed compound. The divine name is an editorial choice at this line, not proof that the named figure elsewhere is absent.
Uncertainty εὐπολύβουλε remains an exact reported-form label without a forced nominative or independent sense.
Greek evidence XXX.6. Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύβουλε, Διὸς καὶ Φερσεφονείης
Aligned English XXX.6. Eubouleus, of many counsels, of Zeus and Phersephoneia
Related lexical entries Εὐβουλεύς; πολύβουλος
XXX.8 AV048_04
Source AP048.04
Supplied apparatus 8 ἀμεμφής Lobeck] ἀμεν . . . .
Adopted forms ἀμεμφής
Adopted lexical access ἀμεμφής
Reported forms ἀμεν . . . .
Transliteration access amen . . . .
The adopted blameless/faultless epithet is a completion attributed to Lobeck; the source provides only the incomplete string ἀμεν with dots.
Uncertainty Do not fill the dots with an invented lost reading or count an apparatus-derived ἀμεμφής token as primary evidence in addition to the verse.
Greek evidence XXX.8. κλῦθι, μάκαρ, φωνῆς, ἡδὺς δ’ ἐπίπνευσον ἀμεμφής,
Aligned English XXX.8. hear my voice, blessed one, and breathe upon me, sweet and blameless,
Related lexical entries ἀμεμφής
XXXI.3 AV049_02
Source AP049.02
Supplied apparatus πολύρυθμοι?
Adopted forms παράρυθμοι
Adopted lexical access παράρυθμος
Editorial queries πολύρυθμοι
Query lexical access πολύρυθμος
The source asks whether πολύρυθμοι, “many-rhythmed,” should replace printed παράρυθμοι. A lexical explanation must discuss the adopted para-compound first, not silently translate the unadopted proposal.
Uncertainty The query has neither adoption nor a manuscript attribution in this note.
Greek evidence XXXI.3. κρουσιλύραι, παράρυθμοι, ἐπεμβάται ἴχνεσι κούφοις,
Aligned English XXXI.3. lyre-strikers, out of rhythm, treading with light footfalls,
Related lexical entries παράρυθμος
XXXI.3 AV049_03
Source AP049.03
Supplied apparatus κούφοις Valckenaer] κωφοί.
Adopted forms κούφοις
Adopted lexical access κοῦφος
Reported forms κωφοί
Reported lexical access κωφός
Transliteration access kōphoi
Adopted light footsteps contrast with a reported adjective meaning dull/deaf/mute. The variant changes both lexeme and grammatical attachment.
Greek evidence XXXI.3. κρουσιλύραι, παράρυθμοι, ἐπεμβάται ἴχνεσι κούφοις,
Aligned English XXXI.3. lyre-strikers, out of rhythm, treading with light footfalls,
Related lexical entries κοῦφος
XXXI.5 AV049_04
Source AP049.04
Supplied apparatus 5 ὀρειμανέος Hermann] ὀρειομανοῦς.
Adopted forms ὀρειμανέος
Adopted lexical access ὀρειμανής
Reported forms ὀρειομανοῦς
Reported lexical access ὀρειομανής
Transliteration access oreiomanous
The mountain-raging Mother is expressed through closely related compounds and uncontracted versus contracted genitive. LSJ cross-refers the forms; retain access without inventing a new role.
Greek evidence XXXI.5. μητρὸς ὀρειμανέος συνοπάονες, ὀργιοφάνται·
Aligned English XXXI.5. fellow-attendants of the mountain-raving Mother, you who show the orgia;
Related lexical entries ὀρειμανής
XXXII.4 AV050_06
Source AP050.06
Supplied apparatus 4 κατέχεις Wiel] διοίγεις.
Adopted forms κατέχεις
Adopted lexical access κατέχω
Reported forms διοίγεις
Reported lexical access διοίγω
Transliteration access dioigeis
Athena holds or inhabits the high places in the adopted text; the reported verb opens them. Preserve these different activities.
Greek evidence XXXII.4. ἣ κατέχεις ὄχθων ὑψηχέας ἀκρωρείας
Aligned English XXXII.4. you who hold the high-sounding summits of the ridges
Related lexical entries κατέχω
XXXII.4 AV050_07
Source AP050.07
Supplied apparatus ὄχθων Abel] ὄχθους.
Adopted forms ὄχθων
Adopted lexical access ὄχθος
Reported forms ὄχθους
Reported lexical access ὄχθος
Transliteration access okhthous
Adopted genitive makes the heights belong to the hills/banks; the reported accusative changes the structure of what Athena holds/opens.
Greek evidence XXXII.4. ἣ κατέχεις ὄχθων ὑψηχέας ἀκρωρείας
Aligned English XXXII.4. you who hold the high-sounding summits of the ridges
Related lexical entries ὄχθος
XXXII.4 AV050_08
Source AP050.08
Supplied apparatus ὑψηχέας Abel] ὑψαύχενας.
Adopted forms ὑψηχέας
Adopted lexical access ὑψηχής
Reported forms ὑψαύχενας
Reported lexical access ὑψαύχην
Transliteration access hupsaukhenas
Adopted ὑψηχέας means high/loud-sounding, not simply high-rising: LSJ ὑψηχής derives its sense from sound. Reported ὑψαύχενας means high-necked and offers a different image for the hill-summits.
Uncertainty Keep the potentially unusual acoustic description of the adopted text visible; do not silently translate the reported height-image instead.
Greek evidence XXXII.4. ἣ κατέχεις ὄχθων ὑψηχέας ἀκρωρείας
Aligned English XXXII.4. you who hold the high-sounding summits of the ridges
Related lexical entries ὑψηχής
XXXII.7 AV050_13
Source AP050.13
Supplied apparatus 7 κόρη Gesner] κάρη.
Adopted forms κόρη
Adopted lexical access κόρη
Reported forms κάρη
Reported lexical access κάρα
Transliteration access karē
Athena is the maiden who trains/exercises in the adopted line; the reported “head” produces a different and difficult construction.
Greek evidence XXXII.7. γυμνάζουσα κόρη, φρικώδεα θυμὸν ἔχουσα,
Aligned English XXXII.7. maiden who trains, holding a spirit that makes men shudder,
XXXII.9 AV050_16
Source AP050.16
Supplied apparatus 9 ὁρμήτειρα Abel] ὁρμάστειρα.
Adopted forms ὁρμήτειρα
Adopted lexical access ὁρμήτειρα
Reported forms ὁρμάστειρα
Reported lexical access ὁρμάστειρα
Transliteration access hormasteira
Both describe the one who urges on. LSJ explicitly records the manuscripts’ ὁρμάστειρα and Abel’s ὁρμήτειρα, so preserve both feminine agent forms in one explained family.
Greek evidence XXXII.9. ὁρμήτειρα, φίλοιστρε κακοῖς, ἀγαθοῖς δὲ φρόνησις·
Aligned English XXXII.9. impeller, lover of the goad against the wicked, but prudence to the good;
Related lexical entries ὁρμήτειρα
XXXIII.8 AV052_04
Source AP052.04
Supplied apparatus 8 πεποθημένη Slothouwer] πεποθημένῳ.
Adopted forms πεποθημένη
Adopted lexical access ποθέω
Reported forms πεποθημένῳ
Reported lexical access ποθέω
Transliteration access pepothēmenōi
Adopted feminine participle calls Victory longed-for; reported dative form could attach to the eye. Same verb, different predication.
Greek evidence XXXIII.8. ἀλλά, μάκαιρ’, ἔλθοις πεποθημένη ὄμματι φαιδρῷ
Aligned English XXXIII.8. But, blessed one, may you come, longed for, with a shining eye,
Related lexical entries ποθέω
XXXIII.9 AV052_05
Source AP052.05
Supplied apparatus 9 τέλος Lobeck] κλέος.
Adopted forms τέλος
Adopted lexical access τέλος
Reported forms κλέος
Reported lexical access κλέος
Transliteration access kleos
Victory brings a good completion/outcome rather than good renown. Both concepts occur in this hymn but cannot be merged at this locus.
Greek evidence XXXIII.9. αἰεὶ ἐπ’ εὐδόξοις ἔργοις τέλος ἐσθλὸν ἄγουσα.
Aligned English XXXIII.9. always bringing a good end upon deeds of good repute.
XXXIV.3 AV053_02
Source AP053.02
Supplied apparatus 3 σπερμεῖος Hermann] σπέρμιε.
Adopted forms σπερμεῖος
Adopted lexical access σπερμεῖος
Reported forms σπέρμιε
Transliteration access spermie
The adopted Apollo epithet presides over seeds. The reported σπέρμιε is retained as an alternative formation/address, not equated to the unrelated Cnossian month-name Σπέρμιος merely because a dictionary lookup matches letters.
Uncertainty No secure variant lemma is assigned; adopted σπερμεῖος is expressly supported by LSJ at this hymn.
Greek evidence XXXIV.3. χρυσολύρη, σπερμεῖος, ἀρότριε, Πύθιε, Τιτάν,
Aligned English XXXIV.3. golden-lyred, of the seed, of the plough, Pythian, Titan,
Related lexical entries σπερμεῖος
XXXIV.6 AV053_04
Source AP053.04
Supplied apparatus 6 κρουσιλύρη Abel] μουσαγέτα.
Adopted forms κρουσιλύρη
Adopted lexical access κρουσιλύρης
Reported forms μουσαγέτα
Reported lexical access μουσαγέτης
Transliteration access mousageta
The adopted “lyre-striker” replaces “leader of the Muses,” distinct musical roles that need separate access even within Apollo’s musical article.
Greek evidence XXXIV.6. κρουσιλύρη, χοροποιός, ἑκηβόλε, τοξοβέλεμνε,
Aligned English XXXIV.6. striker of the lyre, maker of the dance, far-shooting, arrow-darting,
Related lexical entries κρουσιλύρης
XXXIV.7 AV053_06
Source AP053.06
Supplied apparatus 7 βάκχιε codd.
Adopted forms Βράγχιε
Adopted lexical access Βράγχιος
Reported forms βάκχιε
Reported lexical access βάκχιος
Transliteration access bakkhie
The adopted Branchian cult epithet replaces Bacchic/Bacchian. Both are legible but should not be collapsed into the same geographical or Dionysian claim.
Greek evidence XXXIV.7. Βράγχιε καὶ Διδυμεῦ, Παταρήιε, Λοξία, ἁγνέ,
Aligned English XXXIV.7. of Branchos and of Didyma, Patarian, Loxias, holy,
Related lexical entries Βράγχιος
XXXIV.7 AV053_07
Source AP053.07
Supplied apparatus Παταρήιε Wiel] ἑκάεργε.
Adopted forms Παταρήιε
Adopted lexical access Παταρήιος
Reported forms ἑκάεργε
Reported lexical access ἑκάεργος
Transliteration access hekaerge
The adopted Patara-related epithet replaces far-working. The geographical name is an editorial choice at this locus; the adjacent Branchian and Didymean names remain in the verse independently.
Greek evidence XXXIV.7. Βράγχιε καὶ Διδυμεῦ, Παταρήιε, Λοξία, ἁγνέ,
Aligned English XXXIV.7. of Branchos and of Didyma, Patarian, Loxias, holy,
Related lexical entries Παταρήιος
XXXIV.12 AV054_02
Source AP054.02
Supplied apparatus 12 ὑπ’ αἰθέρι Wiel] ὕπερθέ τε.
Adopted forms ὑπ’ αἰθέρι
Adopted lexical access ὑπό; αἰθήρ
Reported forms ὕπερθέ τε
Reported lexical access ὕπερθε; τε
Transliteration access huperthe te
The adopted phrase explicitly locates Earth beneath aether rather than using “above and.” The addition of the aether noun affects the spatial description.
Greek evidence XXXIV.12. γαῖάν τ’ ὀλβιόμοιρον ὑπ’ αἰθέρι καὶ δι’ ἀμολγοῦ,
Aligned English XXXIV.12. and the earth of blessed lot beneath the aither, and through the dead of night,
XXXIV.13 AV054_03
Source AP054.03
Supplied apparatus 13 ἡσυχίαισιν ὑπ’ ἀστεροόμματον ὄρφνην codd., corr. Schneider.
Adopted forms ἡσυχίῃσιν ὑπ’ ἀστεροομμάτου ὄρφνης
Adopted lexical access ἡσυχία; ὑπό; ἀστεροόμματος; ὄρφνη
Reported forms ἡσυχίαισιν ὑπ’ ἀστεροόμματον ὄρφνην
Reported lexical access ἡσυχία; ὑπό; ἀστεροόμματος; ὄρφνη
Transliteration access hēsykhiaisin hyp’ asteroommaton orphnēn
Besides dialectal dative spelling, the adopted night phrase is genitive rather than accusative after ὑπό. This changes the spatial/grammatical construction, not the night’s star-eyed adjective.
Greek evidence XXXIV.13. νυκτὸς ἐν ἡσυχίῃσιν ὑπ’ ἀστεροομμάτου ὄρφνης
Aligned English XXXIV.13. and in the stillnesses of night, under the star-eyed gloom,
Related lexical entries ἡσυχία; ἀστεροόμματος; ὄρφνη
XXXIV.14 AV054_04
Source AP054.04
Supplied apparatus 14 δέδορκας Lennep] δέδωκας.
Adopted forms δέδορκας
Adopted lexical access δέρκομαι
Reported forms δέδωκας
Reported lexical access δίδωμι
Transliteration access dedōkas
Apollo sees the roots below in the adopted text rather than having given them. The visible cosmos and divine sight depend on this reading.
Greek evidence XXXIV.14. ῥίζας νέρθε δέδορκας, ἔχεις δέ τε πείρατα κόσμου
Aligned English XXXIV.14. you look upon the roots below, and you hold the limits of the whole
XXXIV.19 AV055_01
Source AP055.01
Supplied apparatus 19 κρίνας codd.
Adopted forms κιρνάς
Adopted lexical access κίρνημι
Reported forms κρίνας
Reported lexical access κρίνω
Transliteration access krinas
Adopted mixing of the whole celestial pole contrasts with a reported participle of distinguishing/judging. The next printed κρίνεις still belongs to κρίνω and must not be merged with κιρνάς.
Greek evidence XXXIV.19. πάντα πόλον κιρνάς, κρίνεις βιοθρέμμονα φῦλα,
Aligned English XXXIV.19. blending the whole pole, you distinguish the life-nourishing tribes,
Related lexical entries κρίνω
XXXIV.24 AV055_03
Source AP055.03
Supplied apparatus 24 ἐπωνυμίην Hermann] ἐπωνυμίαις.
Adopted forms ἐπωνυμίην
Adopted lexical access ἐπωνυμία
Reported forms ἐπωνυμίαις
Reported lexical access ἐπωνυμία
Transliteration access epōnymiais
Accusative singular “as/by an appellation” versus dative plural “by appellations”; grammatical number and attachment change but not the naming noun.
Greek evidence XXXIV.24. ἔνθεν ἐπωνυμίην σε βροτοὶ κλήζουσιν ἄνακτα,
Aligned English XXXIV.24. From this mortals call you by a name taken from it — lord,
Related lexical entries ἐπωνυμία
XXXIV.26 AV055_04
Source AP055.04
Supplied apparatus 26 σφραγῖδα τυπωτήν codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms σφρηγῖδα τυπῶτιν
Adopted lexical access σφραγίς; τυπῶτις
Reported forms σφραγῖδα τυπωτήν
Reported lexical access σφραγίς; τυπωτός
Transliteration access sphragida typōtēn
The seal’s Ionic spelling is secondary. Adopted τυπῶτιν is the feminine of the forming/moulding agent, expressly recorded by LSJ under τυπωτής at this locus; reported τυπωτήν instead belongs to the fashioned/moulded adjective. The active/result distinction is lexically consequential.
Uncertainty The feminine dictionary subentry confirms τυπῶτις as an access lemma; it does not independently collate the supplied apparatus history.
Greek evidence XXXIV.26. οὕνεκα παντὸς ἔχεις κόσμου σφρηγῖδα τυπῶτιν.
Aligned English XXXIV.26. since you hold the stamping seal of the whole kosmos.
XXXV.3 AV056_02
Source AP056.02
Supplied apparatus 3 λαβοῦσα codd.
Adopted forms λαχοῦσα
Adopted lexical access λαγχάνω
Reported forms λαβοῦσα
Reported lexical access λαμβάνω
Transliteration access labousa
Leto’s fruitful birth-pang is allotted/obtained by lot in the adopted text rather than simply received. The allotment verb must remain distinct from general receiving.
Greek evidence XXXV.3. εὔτεκνον Ζηνὸς γονίμην ὠδῖνα λαχοῦσα,
Aligned English XXXV.3. who obtained the child-blessed, fruitful birth-pang of Zeus,
Related lexical entries λαγχάνω
XXXVI.7 AV057_06
Source AP057.06
Supplied apparatus λυτηριάς Abel] λυτηρία.
Adopted forms λυτηριάς
Adopted lexical access λυτηριάς
Reported forms λυτηρία
Reported lexical access λυτήριος
Transliteration access lytēria
Adopted feminine epithet of release differs from the regular feminine adjective in the report. Both belong to releasing vocabulary but their forms should remain retrievable.
Greek evidence XXXVI.7. κλησίη, εὐάντητε, λυτηριάς, ἀρσενόμορφε,
Aligned English XXXVI.7. of the summons, kindly met, releaser, of male form,
XXXVI.9 AV058_01
Source AP058.01
Supplied apparatus 9 ἀμβροσίη Abel] ἀμβροτέρα.
Adopted forms ἀμβροσίη
Adopted lexical access ἀμβρόσιος
Reported forms ἀμβροτέρα
Transliteration access ambrotera
The adopted immortal/divine epithet replaces an obscure comparative-looking report. Do not translate ἀμβροτέρα as a securely attested comparison without lexical evidence.
Uncertainty Reported form retained without forced lemma.
Greek evidence XXXVI.9. ἀμβροσίη, χθονίη, θηροκτόνος, ὀλβιόμοιρε,
Aligned English XXXVI.9. immortal, of the earth, slayer of beasts, of blessed lot,
Related lexical entries ἀμβρόσιος
XXXVI.16 AV058_03
Source AP058.03
Supplied apparatus 16 κορυφάς Abel] κεφαλάς.
Adopted forms κορυφὰς
Adopted lexical access κορυφή
Reported forms κεφαλάς
Reported lexical access κεφαλή
Transliteration access kephalas
The diseases are sent to mountain peaks in the adopted line; “heads” in the report can also metaphorically designate summits. Record both nouns without exaggerating the local spatial contrast.
Greek evidence XXXVI.16. πέμποις δ’ εἰς ὀρέων κορυφὰς νούσους τε καὶ ἄλγη.
Aligned English XXXVI.16. and may you send to the peaks of the mountains sicknesses and pains.
XXXVIII.11 AV061_01
Source AP061.01
Supplied apparatus 11 ἵκει Hermann] ἧκει.
Adopted forms ἵκει
Adopted lexical access ἵκω
Reported forms ἧκει
Reported lexical access ἥκω
Transliteration access hēkei
Both verbs describe noise reaching heaven, but the related arrival verbs are not the same surface form or paradigm. Record linked access without a dramatic semantic opposition.
Greek evidence XXXVIII.11. ὁρμώντων, θόρυβος δὲ βοή τ’ εἰς οὐρανὸν ἵκει,
Aligned English XXXVIII.11. as you rush on, and the din and the shout reach heaven,
Related lexical entries ἵκω
XXXVIII.15 AV061_04
Source AP061.04
Supplied apparatus 15 ἂν ὁρμαίνητε Bentley] ἀνορμαίνωνται.
Adopted forms ἂν ὁρμαίνητε
Adopted lexical access ἄν; ὁρμαίνω
Reported forms ἀνορμαίνωνται
Transliteration access anormainōntai
Adopted conditional/modal second-person “whenever you rush/stir” addresses the Kouretes; the reported joined string has a different person/formation. Do not silently divide it into a known transmitted clause.
Uncertainty No certain full lemma is assigned to ἀνορμαίνωνται; the adopted verb is secure.
Greek evidence XXXVIII.15. ἡνίκ’ ἂν ὁρμαίνητε χολούμενοι ἀνθρώποισιν
Aligned English XXXVIII.15. whenever you stir yourselves in anger against men,
Related lexical entries ὁρμαίνω
XXXVIII.17 AV061_05
Source AP061.05
Supplied apparatus 17 πιμπράντες Wiel] πιμπλάντες.
Adopted forms πιμπράντες
Adopted lexical access πίμπρημι
Reported forms πιμπλάντες
Reported lexical access πίμπλημι
Transliteration access pimplantes
The adopted agents burn people and possessions; the reported participle belongs to filling. This is a substantial difference in the destructive action.
Greek evidence XXXVIII.17. πιμπράντες· στοναχεῖ δὲ μέγας πόντος βαθυδίνης,
Aligned English XXXVIII.17. burning — then the great deep-eddying sea groans,
Related lexical entries πίμπρημι
XXXIX.10 AV063_05
Source AP063.05
Supplied apparatus 11 ἀνάγνου Wiel] ἀνάγκης.
Adopted forms ἀνάγνου
Adopted lexical access ἄναγνος
Reported forms ἀνάγκης
Reported lexical access ἀνάγκη
Transliteration access anankēs
The adopted soul is defiled/impure (genitive adjective), whereas the report gives necessity/distress (genitive noun). This changes the explanation of the frightened soul’s condition.
Uncertainty The apparatus says 11, but this is the supplied hymn’s line 10, its final verse. Preserve the source’s misnumbering without creating a nonexistent line.
Greek evidence XXXIX.10. παύων φαντασίας ψυχῆς ἐκπλήκτου, ἀνάγνου.
Aligned English XXXIX.10. stilling the phantasms of a stricken and unholy soul.
XL.1 AV064_02
Source AP064.02
Supplied apparatus θεά Hermann] θεοῖς.
Adopted forms θεά
Adopted lexical access θεός
Reported forms θεοῖς
Reported lexical access θεός
Transliteration access theois
Singular goddess address versus dative plural gods; adopted grammar directly addresses Demeter.
Greek evidence XL.1. Δηοῖ, παμμήτειρα θεά, πολυώνυμε δαῖμον,
Aligned English XL.1. Deo, all-mother goddess, daimon of many names,
XL.8 AV064_05
Source AP064.05
Supplied apparatus 8 πρώτη ὑποζεύξασα Hermann] ἣ πρώτη ζεύξασα.
Adopted forms πρώτη ὑποζεύξασα
Adopted lexical access πρῶτος; ὑποζεύγνυμι
Reported forms ἣ πρώτη ζεύξασα
Reported lexical access ὅς; πρῶτος; ζεύγνυμι
Transliteration access hē prōtē zeuxasa
The adopted compound explicitly yokes under; the report uses simple yoking with a relative pronoun. Both assign first yoking of the oxen to Demeter.
Greek evidence XL.8. πρώτη ὑποζεύξασα βοῶν ἀροτῆρα τένοντα
Aligned English XL.8. first to yoke the ploughing neck of oxen
Related lexical entries πρῶτος; ὑποζεύγνυμι; ζεύγνυμι
XL.9 AV064_06
Source AP064.06
Supplied apparatus 9 περίολβον codd.
Adopted forms πολύολβον
Adopted lexical access πολύολβος
Reported forms περίολβον
Reported lexical access περίολβος
Transliteration access periolbon
Both compounds intensify prosperity/blessedness in human life. Preserve their forms while avoiding a false substantive opposition.
Greek evidence XL.9. καὶ βίον ἱμερόεντα βροτοῖς πολύολβον ἀνεῖσα,
Aligned English XL.9. and to send up for mortals a life desired and rich in blessing,
Related lexical entries πολύολβος
XL.10 AV064_08
Source AP064.08
Supplied apparatus Βρομίοιο Hermann] βρομίοις.
Adopted forms Βρομίοιο
Adopted lexical access Βρόμιος
Reported forms βρομίοις
Reported lexical access βρόμιος
Transliteration access bromiois
Adopted genitive singular makes Demeter share the hearth with Bromios; the reported dative plural of the adjective/name changes that construction and does not uniquely identify a second named individual.
Uncertainty Do not silently treat βρομίοις as a secure singular name in the transmitted wording.
Greek evidence XL.10. αὐξιθαλές, Βρομίοιο συνέστιος, ἀγλαότιμος,
Aligned English XL.10. making growth and bloom, hearth-fellow of Bromios, of splendid honour,
XL.15 AV065_03
Source AP065.03
Supplied apparatus 15 εὐαζόντων Hermann] εὐάζουσα.
Adopted forms εὐαζόντων
Adopted lexical access εὐάζω
Reported forms εὐάζουσα
Reported lexical access εὐάζω
Transliteration access euazousa
Adopted genitive plural locates the Bacchic cries among those circling the throne; reported feminine nominative makes Demeter herself the utterer. Same verb, significant agent/attachment change.
Greek evidence XL.15. ἐγκυκλίοις δίναις περὶ σὸν θρόνον εὐαζόντων,
Aligned English XL.15. in the wheeling eddies of those who cry euhoi about your throne,
Related lexical entries εὐάζω
XL.17 AV065_05
Source AP065.05
Supplied apparatus 17 ἱεροθηλεῖς Hermann] ἱεροθαλλεῖς.
Adopted forms ἱεροθηλεῖς
Adopted lexical access ἱεροθηλής
Reported forms ἱεροθαλλεῖς
Reported lexical access ἱεροθαλλής
Transliteration access hierothalleis
Both compounds express sacred flourishing of Demeter’s many forms. LSJ gives ἱεροθαλλής and expressly reports Hermann’s -θηλής alternative; preserve the forms without a fabricated sharp distinction.
Greek evidence XL.17. ἧς πολλαὶ μορφαί, πολυάνθεμοι, ἱεροθηλεῖς·
Aligned English XL.17. whose forms are many, many-flowered, sacred in their blooming;
Related lexical entries ἱεροθηλής
XL.18 AV065_06
Source AP065.06
Supplied apparatus 18 καρποῖσι βρύουσα?
Adopted forms καρποῖς βρίθουσα
Adopted lexical access καρπός; βρίθω
Editorial queries καρποῖσι βρύουσα
Query lexical access καρπός; βρύω
Printed “heavy/laden with fruits” is not the same as the proposed “flourishing/teeming with fruits.” The query changes the verb as well as the dative form.
Uncertainty The question-marked phrase is unadopted and has no manuscript attribution here.
Greek evidence XL.18. ἐλθέ, μάκαιρ’, ἁγνή, καρποῖς βρίθουσα θερείοις,
Aligned English XL.18. come, blessed one, holy, heavy with the fruits of summer,
XLI.6 AV066_06
Source AP066.06
Supplied apparatus 6 δύσαγνος παῖδ’ ἁγνὸν ὁδηγητῆρα λαβοῦσα codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms ἁγνὸν παῖδα Δυσαύλου ὁδηγητῆρα λαχοῦσα
Adopted lexical access ἁγνός; παῖς; Δυσαύλης; ὁδηγητήρ; λαγχάνω
Reported forms δύσαγνος; παῖδ’; ἁγνὸν; ὁδηγητῆρα; λαβοῦσα
Reported lexical access δύσαγνος; παῖς; ἁγνός; ὁδηγητήρ; λαμβάνω
Transliteration access dysagnos; paid’; hagnon; hodēgētēra; labousa
The printed phrase names Dysaules as the child's father and has λαχοῦσα, having obtained by lot or received, rather than λαβοῦσα, having taken. The reported δύσαγνος is not the proper name Δύσαυλος and produces a difficult construction; do not force a continuous reconstruction or claim a verified manuscript genealogy.
Greek evidence XLI.6. ἁγνὸν παῖδα Δυσαύλου ὁδηγητῆρα λαχοῦσα,
Aligned English XLI.6. having got the holy child of Dysaules for your guide,
Related lexical entries ἁγνός; παῖς; Δυσαύλης; ὁδηγητήρ; λαγχάνω
XLI.8 AV066_08
Source AP066.08
Supplied apparatus 8 Εὐβουλῆα τεκοῦσα Abel] εὔβουλον τέξασα.
Adopted forms Εὐβουλῆα τεκοῦσα
Adopted lexical access Εὐβουλεύς; τίκτω
Reported forms εὔβουλον; τέξασα
Reported lexical access εὔβουλος; τίκτω
Transliteration access euboulon; texasa
Printed Eubouleus is a name, whereas εὔβουλον can be the well-counselled epithet/name Euboulos. τεκοῦσα and reported τέξασα use different aorist formations of τίκτω; do not infer a future birth or separate verb from the ending.
Greek evidence XLI.8. Εὐβουλῆα τεκοῦσα θεὰ θνητῆς ὑπ’ ἀνάγκης.
Aligned English XLI.8. and bore Eubouleus, a goddess under mortal necessity.
XLI.8 AV066_09
Source AP066.09
Supplied apparatus θεά Lobeck] θεόν.
Adopted forms θεὰ
Adopted lexical access θεά
Reported forms θεόν
Reported lexical access θεός
Transliteration access theon
Printed feminine nominative names the mother as a goddess; reported θεόν is an accusative divine designation, potentially attached to her offspring. This changes syntactic attribution, not merely spelling.
Greek evidence XLI.8. Εὐβουλῆα τεκοῦσα θεὰ θνητῆς ὑπ’ ἀνάγκης.
Aligned English XLI.8. and bore Eubouleus, a goddess under mortal necessity.
XLI.8 AV066_10
Source AP066.10
Supplied apparatus ἐπ’ codd.
Adopted forms ὑπ’
Adopted lexical access ὑπό
Reported forms ἐπ’
Reported lexical access ἐπί
Transliteration access ep’
Printed under mortal necessity uses ὑπό; reported ἐπ’ gives a different preposition. Explain the adopted constraint construction without asserting that only it can express compulsion.
Greek evidence XLI.8. Εὐβουλῆα τεκοῦσα θεὰ θνητῆς ὑπ’ ἀνάγκης.
Aligned English XLI.8. and bore Eubouleus, a goddess under mortal necessity.
Related lexical entries ἀνάγκη
XLII.11 AV067_03
Source AP067.03
Supplied apparatus 11 ἀγάθ’ ἐκτελέουσ’ Hermann] ἀγαθοῖς τελέουσ’.
Adopted forms ἀγάθ’ ἐκτελέουσ’
Adopted lexical access ἀγαθός; ἐκτελέω
Reported forms ἀγαθοῖς; τελέουσ’
Reported lexical access ἀγαθός; τελέω
Transliteration access agathois; teleous’
The printed petition has good things as an object of bringing to completion, with compound ἐκτελέω. The reported dative ἀγαθοῖς with simple τελέω changes both construction and verbal form; do not silently equate the two.
Greek evidence XLII.11. εὐμενέουσ’ ἔλθοις ἀγάθ’ ἐκτελέουσ’ ἐπ’ ἀέθλοις.
Aligned English XLII.11. may you come with favour, bringing good things to pass upon these contests.
XLIII.7 AV068_01
Source AP068.01
Supplied apparatus 7 ἁγνῆς add. Abel.
Adopted forms ἁγνῆς
Adopted lexical access ἁγνός
Reported lexical access ἁγνός
Holy explicitly qualifies Persephone in the adopted text because the apparatus attributes its addition to Abel. Mark the qualification as an adopted supplement, not a separately witnessed manuscript word.
Greek evidence XLIII.7. ἁγνῆς Φερσεφόνης συμπαίκτορες, εὖτέ ἑ Μοῖραι
Aligned English XLIII.7. playmates of holy Phersephone, whenever the Moirai
XLIII.7 AV068_02
Source AP068.02
Supplied apparatus Περσεφόνης (sic) Hermann] Περσεφόνη.
Adopted forms Φερσεφόνης
Adopted lexical access Φερσεφόνη
Reported forms Περσεφόνη
Reported lexical access Περσεφόνη
Transliteration access Persephonē
The apparatus lemma is Περσεφόνης, marked sic, while the verse prints Φερσεφόνης. Its bracketed correction is genitive versus reported nominative Περσεφόνη; record both the case change and the phi/pi discrepancy.
Greek evidence XLIII.7. ἁγνῆς Φερσεφόνης συμπαίκτορες, εὖτέ ἑ Μοῖραι
Aligned English XLIII.7. playmates of holy Phersephone, whenever the Moirai
Related lexical entries Φερσεφόνη
XLIII.7 AV068_03
Source AP068.03
Supplied apparatus εὖτέ ἑ Hermann] ἡνίκα.
Adopted forms εὖτέ ἑ
Adopted lexical access εὖτε; ἕ
Reported forms ἡνίκα
Reported lexical access ἡνίκα
Transliteration access hēnika
The adopted conjunction plus pronoun supplies her as the explicit object of lead up in line 8. The reported temporal conjunction leaves the object implicit; it does not by itself remove Persephone from the passage.
Greek evidence XLIII.7. ἁγνῆς Φερσεφόνης συμπαίκτορες, εὖτέ ἑ Μοῖραι
Aligned English XLIII.7. playmates of holy Phersephone, whenever the Moirai
Related lexical entries Φερσεφόνη
XLIII.10 AV068_05
Source AP068.05
Supplied apparatus 10 νεομύστοις Hermann] νεομύστους.
Adopted forms νεομύστοις
Adopted lexical access νεόμυστος
Reported forms νεομύστους
Reported lexical access νεόμυστος
Transliteration access neomystous
Dative makes the rites for new initiates; reported accusative would construe the new initiates differently. Keep the novice designation retrievable under the same lexeme.
Greek evidence XLIII.10. ἔλθετ’ ἐπ’ εὐφήμους τελετὰς ὁσίας νεομύστοις
Aligned English XLIII.10. come to the pure rites of good omen, for the new initiates,
Related lexical entries νεόμυστος
XLIV.2 AV069_01
Source AP069.01
Supplied apparatus 2 ἐρασιπλόκαμον Abel] ἐρατοπλόκαμον.
Adopted forms ἐρασιπλόκαμον
Adopted lexical access ἐρασιπλόκαμος
Reported forms ἐρατοπλόκαμον
Reported lexical access ἐρατοπλόκαμος
Transliteration access eratoplokamon
Two distinct compound formations for lovely hair/tresses, not case variants. Preserve reported ἐρατοπλόκαμον as a related explained lookup under the hair epithets.
Greek evidence XLIV.2. εὐειδῆ Σεμέλην, ἐρασιπλόκαμον, βαθύκολπον,
Aligned English XLIV.2. fair-formed Semele, of lovely hair, deep-bosomed,
Related lexical entries ἐρασιπλόκαμος
XLIV.5 AV069_02
Source AP069.02
Supplied apparatus 5 ἀστραπίοιο Wiel] ἀθανάτου.
Adopted forms ἀστραπίοιο
Adopted lexical access ἀστράπιος
Reported forms ἀθανάτου
Reported lexical access ἀθάνατος
Transliteration access athanatou
Lightning-related Zeus replaces immortal Zeus locally. The explicit lightning adjective is an adopted reading, not evidence that the reported line contained it.
Greek evidence XLIV.5. ἀστραπίοιο τεκοῦσα Διὸς βολίσι Κρονίοιο·
Aligned English XLIV.5. when she bore him, by the bolts of Zeus of the lightning, son of Kronos;
XLIV.5 AV069_03
Source AP069.03
Supplied apparatus τεχθεῖσα codd.
Adopted forms τεκοῦσα
Adopted lexical access τίκτω
Reported forms τεχθεῖσα
Reported lexical access τίκτω
Transliteration access tekhtheisa
Printed active having borne contrasts with reported passive having been born. This materially changes Semele's grammatical relation to the birth; the commentary's smooth reconstruction using the reported adjectives does not include every apparatus reading.
Greek evidence XLIV.5. ἀστραπίοιο τεκοῦσα Διὸς βολίσι Κρονίοιο·
Aligned English XLIV.5. when she bore him, by the bolts of Zeus of the lightning, son of Kronos;
Related lexical entries τίκτω
XLIV.5 AV069_04
Source AP069.04
Supplied apparatus βολίσι Wiel] βουλαῖς.
Adopted forms βολίσι
Adopted lexical access βολίς
Reported forms βουλαῖς
Reported lexical access βουλή
Transliteration access boulais
Bolts or missiles replace counsels or plans. The birth-by-lightning reading depends on this and ἀστραπίοιο, while the apparatus also reports a separate change at τεκοῦσα.
Greek evidence XLIV.5. ἀστραπίοιο τεκοῦσα Διὸς βολίσι Κρονίοιο·
Aligned English XLIV.5. when she bore him, by the bolts of Zeus of the lightning, son of Kronos;
XLIV.6 AV069_05
Source AP069.05
Supplied apparatus 6 παρ’ ἀγαυῆς Pierson] παρ’ αὐτῆς.
Adopted forms παρ’ ἀγαυῆς
Adopted lexical access παρά; ἀγαυός
Reported forms παρ’; αὐτῆς
Reported lexical access παρά; αὐτός
Transliteration access par’; autēs
Noble replaces herself after from. Φερσεφονείης remains in the verse independently of this change; the supplied prose's claim that the reported phrase removes Persephone is not warranted.
Greek evidence XLIV.6. τιμὰς τευξαμένη παρ’ ἀγαυῆς Φερσεφονείης
Aligned English XLIV.6. who won her honours from noble Phersephoneia
Related lexical entries ἀγαυός
XLV.4 AV070_02
Source AP070.02
Supplied apparatus 4 ⟨μαινόλα⟩ Hermann] μανικέ. (lemma et numerus in exemplari adhibito obtecti)
Adopted forms μαινόλα
Adopted lexical access μαινόλης
Reported forms μανικέ
Reported lexical access μανικός
Transliteration access manike
The verse securely prints μαινόλα, raving one. The apparatus prints an angle-bracket restoration ⟨μαινόλα⟩ against μανικέ, and explicitly says the lemma and numeral were obscured in the consulted exemplar. Treat the restoration and attribution as the supplied edition's assertion, not as a newly verified reading of Abel or a manuscript.
Greek evidence XLV.4. εὐάζων κατ’ Ὄλυμπον, ἐρίβρομε, μαινόλα Βάκχε,
Aligned English XLV.4. crying euhoi over Olympos, loud-roaring, raving Bakchos,
XLV.5 AV070_03
Source AP070.03
Supplied apparatus 5 θυρσεγχής (sic) Ruhnken] θυρσεχθής.
Adopted forms θυρσεγχές
Adopted lexical access θυρσεγχής
Reported forms θυρσεχθής
Reported lexical access θυρσεχθής
Transliteration access thyrsekhthēs
The apparatus lemma θυρσεγχής is nominative, marked sic, whereas the verse has the vocative θυρσεγχές, thyrsos-speared. Reported θυρσεχθής is preserved as a suspect form, not interpreted confidently as thyrsos-hating; LSJ treats it as a probable false reading for θυρσεγχής.
Greek evidence XLV.5. θυρσεγχές, βαρύμηνι, τετιμένε πᾶσι θεοῖσι
Aligned English XLV.5. thyrsos-speared, heavy in wrath, honoured by all the gods
Related lexical entries θυρσεγχής
XLVI.6 AV071_05
Source AP071.05
Supplied apparatus πρὸς ἀγαυήν Pierson] πρός τ’ αὐτήν.
Adopted forms πρὸς ἀγαυὴν
Adopted lexical access πρός; ἀγαυός
Reported forms πρός; τ’; αὐτήν
Reported lexical access πρός; τε; αὐτός
Transliteration access pros; t’; autēn
Printed toward noble contrasts with reported toward her herself, with a particle. The following Φερσεφόνειαν is unchanged, so this emendation does not introduce Persephone or make her previously unnamed.
Greek evidence XLVI.6. καὶ βουλῇσι Διὸς πρὸς ἀγαυὴν Φερσεφόνειαν
Aligned English XLVI.6. and by the counsels of Zeus, to noble Phersephoneia
Related lexical entries ἀγαυός
XLVI.7 AV071_06
Source AP071.06
Supplied apparatus 7 φόβος codd.
Adopted forms φίλος
Adopted lexical access φίλος
Reported forms φόβος
Reported lexical access φόβος
Transliteration access phobos
Dear to the gods contrasts with reported fear. Do not replace the reported noun with an invented adjectival reading merely to smooth the line.
Greek evidence XLVI.7. ἀχθεὶς ἐξετράφης φίλος ἀθανάτοισι θεοῖσιν.
Aligned English XLVI.7. brought, were reared to manhood, dear to the immortal gods.
XLVII.2 AV072_01
Source AP072.01
Supplied apparatus 2 πέρι πάντῃ Hermann] περὶ πάντα.
Adopted forms πέρι πάντη
Adopted lexical access περί; πάντῃ
Reported forms περὶ; πάντα
Reported lexical access περί; πᾶς
Transliteration access peri; panta
Adopted adverbial on every side contrasts with reported around all things. Apparatus πάντῃ and verse πάντη differ in iota marking; preserve both without duplicating lexemes.
Greek evidence XLVII.2. Καδμείοισι δόμοις ὃς ἑλισσόμενος πέρι πάντη
Aligned English XLVII.2. who, winding about the house of Kadmos on every side,
XLVII.4 AV072_02
Source AP072.02
Supplied apparatus 4 ἐκίνησε Scriverius] ἐνίκησε.
Adopted forms ἐκίνησε
Adopted lexical access κινέω
Reported forms ἐνίκησε
Reported lexical access νικάω
Transliteration access enikēse
The flash shook the earth in the adopted text; reported ἐνίκησε would mean overcame or conquered. Both are aorists of different verbs.
Greek evidence XLVII.4. ἡνίκα πυρφόρος αὐγὴ ἐκίνησε χθόνα πᾶσαν
Aligned English XLVII.4. when the fire-bearing flash shook the whole ground
Related lexical entries κινέω
XLVIII.after3 AV073_02
Source AP073.02
Supplied apparatus Post v. 3 versum huius fere sententiae μησὶ περιπλομένοις, καί μιν ταχέως ἐκόμισσας excidisse vidit Lobeck.
Reported lexical access μήν; περιπέλομαι; κομίζω
Proposed supplements μησὶ; περιπλομένοις; καί; μιν; ταχέως; ἐκόμισσας
The apparatus reports Lobeck's diagnosis of a lost verse and gives wording of approximately this sense: revolving months and swiftly bringing him. This is neither an adopted seventh verse nor verified recovered wording; preserve the complete proposed Greek only as conjectural illustrative supplementation.
Related lexical entries κομίζω
XLIX.3 AV074_03
Source AP074.03
Supplied apparatus χοροῖσι περιβρεμέτοις ἰάχοισι codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms χοροῖσιν ἐριβρεμέταο Ἰάκχου
Adopted lexical access χορός; ἐριβρεμέτης; Ἴακχος
Reported forms χοροῖσι; περιβρεμέτοις; ἰάχοισι
Reported lexical access χορός; ἰαχή
Transliteration access khoroisi; peribremetois; iakhoisi
Printed dances of loud-roaring Iakchos contrasts with reported dances and surrounding-roaring cries. The exact syntax and lexical normalization of περιβρεμέτοις remain uncertain; Iakchos is the adopted name, not silently counted as a primary reading in the reported wording.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence XLIX.3. νυκτερίοις τε χοροῖσιν ἐριβρεμέταο Ἰάκχου.
Aligned English XLIX.3. and in the night-dances of loud-roaring Iakchos.
Related lexical entries χορός; ἐριβρεμέτης; Ἴακχος
L.1 AV075_02
Source AP075.02
Supplied apparatus διμήτωρ (sic) Hermann] διμάτωρ.
Adopted forms διμῆτορ
Adopted lexical access διμήτωρ
Reported forms διμάτωρ
Reported lexical access διμήτωρ
Transliteration access dimatōr
The apparatus's adopted-side διμήτωρ, marked sic, is not the verse's vocative διμῆτορ. Reported διμάτωρ adds an alpha/eta variation. Keep the two-mother/two-birth interpretation attached to the printed term, without treating all three as separate occurrences.
Greek evidence L.1. Κλῦθι, μάκαρ, Διὸς υἷ’, ἐπιλήνιε Βάκχε, διμῆτορ,
Aligned English L.1. Hear, blessed son of Zeus, Bakchos of the wine-press, of two mothers,
Related lexical entries διμήτωρ
L.6 AV075_05
Source AP075.05
Supplied apparatus 6 παυσίπονον Hermann] παυσίπονος.
Adopted forms παυσίπονον
Adopted lexical access παυσίπονος
Reported forms παυσίπονος
Reported lexical access παυσίπονος
Transliteration access pausiponos
Neuter agreement with ἄκος makes the remedy toil-stopping; the reported masculine form would describe the god instead.
Greek evidence L.6. παυσίπονον θνητοῖσι φανεὶς ἄκος, ἱερὸν ἄνθος,
Aligned English L.6. appearing to mortals as a toil-stopping remedy, a sacred flower,
Related lexical entries παυσίπονος
L.9 AV075_07
Source AP075.07
Supplied apparatus 9 πιφαύσκειν Hermann] πιφαύσκων.
Adopted forms πιφαύσκειν
Adopted lexical access πιφαύσκω
Reported forms πιφαύσκων
Reported lexical access πιφαύσκω
Transliteration access piphauskōn
Infinitive reveal is governed by ἐθέλεις with σε; reported participle would produce a different clause construction.
Greek evidence L.9. οἷς ἐθέλεις θνητῶν ἠδ’ ἀθανάτων σε πιφαύσκειν·
Aligned English L.9. to whomever of mortals and immortals you will to reveal yourself;
Related lexical entries πιφαύσκω
LI.1 AV076_01
Source AP076.01
Supplied apparatus 1 μεγακήτεος Wiel] μεγαλήτορος.
Adopted forms μεγακήτεος
Adopted lexical access μεγακήτης
Reported forms μεγαλήτορος
Reported lexical access μεγαλήτωρ
Transliteration access megalētoros
Great-gulfed or vast Okeanos replaces great-hearted Okeanos. Preserve the spatial versus spirited epithet distinction.
Greek evidence LI.1. Νύμφαι, θυγατέρες μεγακήτεος Ὠκεανοῖο,
Aligned English LI.1. Nymphs, daughters of great-gulfed Okeanos,
Related lexical entries μεγακήτης
LI.3 AV076_02
Source AP076.02
Supplied apparatus 3 κρυψίδομοι Casaubonus] κρυψίδρομοι.
Adopted forms κρυψίδομοι
Adopted lexical access κρυψίδομος
Reported forms κρυψίδρομοι
Transliteration access krypsidromoi
Hidden-dwelling compound replaces a reported form with -δρομοι, suggesting movement/course rather than dwelling. Its dictionary lemma is not forced; explain the securely printed -δομος reading and retain the reported form as uncertain.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LI.3. κρυψίδομοι, Βάκχοιο τροφοί, χθόνιαι, πολυγηθεῖς,
Aligned English LI.3. of hidden houses, nurses of Bakchos, of the earth, full of gladness,
Related lexical entries κρυψίδομος
LI.7 AV076_03
Source AP076.03
Supplied apparatus 7 πολυανθεῖς Hermann] πολύανθοι.
Adopted forms πολυανθεῖς
Adopted lexical access πολυανθής
Reported forms πολύανθοι
Reported lexical access πολύανθος
Transliteration access polyanthoi
Closely synonymous many-flowered compounds use distinct adjectival formations, πολυανθής and πολύανθος. Preserve both lookup forms; LSJ labels the latter reading doubtful here.
Greek evidence LI.7. φαινόμεναι, ἀφανεῖς, αὐλωνιάδες, πολυανθεῖς,
Aligned English LI.7. manifest, unseen, of the glens, rich in flowers,
Related lexical entries πολυανθής
LI.13 AV077_01
Source AP077.01
Supplied apparatus 13 δρυμοχαρεῖς Heringa] κρυμοχαρεῖς.
Adopted forms δρυμοχαρεῖς
Adopted lexical access δρυμοχαρής
Reported forms κρυμοχαρεῖς
Reported lexical access κρυμοχαρής
Transliteration access krymokhareis
Delighting in thickets replaces frost-delighting. LSJ explicitly treats the frost reading here as a false reading, but this lexicon records the apparatus evidence rather than independently claiming manuscript collation.
Greek evidence LI.13. δρυμοχαρεῖς, ἁπαλαί, πολυθρέμμονες αὐξίτροφοί τε,
Aligned English LI.13. glad in the thickets, tender, nourishers of many and increasers of growth,
Related lexical entries δρυμοχαρής
LI.18 AV077_03
Source AP077.03
Supplied apparatus 18 σὺν αὐξιτρόφοισιν ἐν ὥραις codd.
Adopted forms ἀεξιτρόφοισιν ἐν ὥραις
Adopted lexical access ἀεξίτροφος; ἐν; ὥρα
Reported forms σὺν; αὐξιτρόφοισιν; ἐν; ὥραις
Reported lexical access σύν; αὐξίτροφος; ἐν; ὥρα
Transliteration access syn; auxitrophoisin; en; hōrais
The adopted growth-increasing adjective qualifies seasons directly. The reported wording adds σύν and uses αὐξι- rather than ἀεξι-; do not silently supply a second independent noun to make it grammatical.
Greek evidence LI.18. νᾶμα χέουσ’ ὑγιεινὸν ἀεξιτρόφοισιν ἐν ὥραις.
Aligned English LI.18. pouring a healthful stream in the seasons that increase growth.
Related lexical entries ἀεξίτροφος; ὥρα; αὐξίτροφος
LII.1 AV078_01
Source AP078.01
Supplied apparatus 1 μαινόλα Hermann] μανικέ.
Adopted forms μαινόλα
Adopted lexical access μαινόλης
Reported forms μανικέ
Reported lexical access μανικός
Transliteration access manike
Printed raving-one term versus reported mad/frenzied adjective. This parallel supports comparison with XLV.4 but cannot certify the obscured numeral and lemma in another exemplar.
Greek evidence LII.1. Κικλήσκω σε, μάκαρ, πολυώνυμε, μαινόλα, Βακχεῦ,
Aligned English LII.1. I call on you, blessed one, of many names, raving, Bakcheus,
LII.2 AV078_03
Source AP078.03
Supplied apparatus λυσεῦ Schneider] λυσσεῦ.
Adopted forms λυσεῦ
Adopted lexical access Λυσεύς
Reported forms λυσσεῦ
Transliteration access lysseu
Printed loosener form contrasts with double-sigma λυσσεῦ, suggesting the fury vocabulary. Do not silently derive an unattested dictionary nominative for the reported form or erase the release/frenzy tension.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LII.2. ταυρόκερως, ληναῖε, πυροσπόρε, Νύσιε, λυσεῦ,
Aligned English LII.2. bull-horned, of the wine-vat, sower of fire, Nysian, loosener,
Related lexical entries Λυσεύς
LII.3 AV078_04
Source AP078.04
Supplied apparatus 3 μητροτρεφές Abel] μητροτρεφής.
Adopted forms μηροτρεφές
Adopted lexical access μηροτρεφής
Reported forms μητροτρεφής
Transliteration access mētrotrephēs
Printed μηροτρεφές is thigh-nourished, while both apparatus sides have μητρο-, mother-. The apparatus also contrasts vocative -ές with nominative -ής. This is an observable text/apparatus inconsistency, not proof of two independently collated mother-versus-thigh witnesses; retain both apparatus forms exactly.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LII.3. μηροτρεφές, λικνῖτα, πυρίπνοε καὶ τελετάρχα,
Aligned English LII.3. thigh-nourished, of the winnowing-fan, fire-breathing, and lord of the rite,
Related lexical entries μηροτρεφής
LII.3 AV078_05
Source AP078.05
Supplied apparatus πυρίπνοε Hermann] πυριπόλε.
Adopted forms πυρίπνοε
Adopted lexical access πυρίπνοος
Reported forms πυριπόλε
Reported lexical access πυρίπολος
Transliteration access pyripole
Fire-breathing replaces the reported fire-related -πολος compound. LSJ's πυρίπολος points to πύρπολος; retain its exact accent distinction rather than impose the verse's breath sense upon it.
Greek evidence LII.3. μηροτρεφές, λικνῖτα, πυρίπνοε καὶ τελετάρχα,
Aligned English LII.3. thigh-nourished, of the winnowing-fan, fire-breathing, and lord of the rite,
Related lexical entries πυρίπνοος
LII.8 AV079_01
Source AP079.01
Supplied apparatus 8 τιθήνας Wiel] γαληναῖς.
Adopted forms τιθήνας
Adopted lexical access τιθήνη
Reported forms γαληναῖς
Reported lexical access γαλήνη
Transliteration access galēnais
Nurses or foster-mothers in the accusative replace reported dative calms. The adopted attendants are a material reading choice, not present in the reported word.
Greek evidence LII.8. βακχεύων ἁγίας τριετηρίδας ἀμφὶ τιθήνας,
Aligned English LII.8. revelling through the consecrated trieteric feasts among the foster-mothers,
Related lexical entries τιθήνη
LII.11 AV079_06
Source AP079.06
Supplied apparatus 11 θυρσεγχής Hermann] χρυσεγχής.
Adopted forms θυρσεγχής
Adopted lexical access θυρσεγχής
Reported forms χρυσεγχής
Reported lexical access χρυσεγχής
Transliteration access khrysenkhēs
Thyrsos-speared replaces gold-speared. Both compounds need explicit lookup and must not merge under generic spear-bearing.
Greek evidence LII.11. Παιὰν θυρσεγχής, ὑποκόλπιε, βοτρυόκοσμε,
Aligned English LII.11. Paian, thyrsos-speared, held in the lap, adorned with the grape-cluster,
Related lexical entries θυρσεγχής
LII.12 AV079_08
Source AP079.08
Supplied apparatus κύδιμε κοῦρε Wiel] καὶ διάκοσμε.
Adopted forms κύδιμε κοῦρε
Adopted lexical access κύδιμος; κοῦρος
Reported forms καὶ; διάκοσμε
Reported lexical access καί; διάκοσμος
Transliteration access kai; diakosme
Glorious youth replaces the phrase καὶ διάκοσμε. The latter contains an address formed from διάκοσμος, but its precise local interpretation is not established by the apparatus; do not present a smooth alternative translation as certain.
Greek evidence LII.12. Βάσσαρε, κισσοχαρές, πολυπάρθενε, κύδιμε κοῦρε·
Aligned English LII.12. Bassaros, glad in ivy, of many maidens, glorious youth;
LII.13 AV079_10
Source AP079.10
Supplied apparatus κεχαρισμένος Abel] κεχαρημένος.
Adopted forms κεχαρισμένος
Adopted lexical access χαρίζομαι
Reported forms κεχαρημένος
Reported lexical access χαίρω
Transliteration access kekharēmenos
Adopted welcome/pleasing participle from χαρίζομαι contrasts with reported rejoicing form from χαίρω. The distinction concerns being a source of favour versus being glad, not merely spelling.
Greek evidence LII.13. ἐλθέ, μάκαρ, μύστῃσι βρύων κεχαρισμένος αἰεί.
Aligned English LII.13. come, blessed one, teeming, ever welcome to the initiates.
LIII.7 AV080_05
Source AP080.05
Supplied apparatus 7 χρόνους codd.
Adopted forms χοροὺς
Adopted lexical access χορός
Reported forms χρόνους
Reported lexical access χρόνος
Transliteration access khronous
Dances replace times. The printed line moves dances in circling seasons; the reported noun must not be counted as another primary occurrence of time.
Greek evidence LIII.7. εὐάζων κινῶν τε χοροὺς ἐνὶ κυκλάσιν ὥραις.
Aligned English LIII.7. crying euhoi and stirring the dances in the circling seasons.
LIV.4 AV081_03
Source AP081.03
Supplied apparatus 4 ἁγνοτελής (sic) Casaubonus] ἁγνοτερής.
Adopted forms ἁγνοτελές
Adopted lexical access ἁγνοτελής
Reported forms ἁγνοτερής
Transliteration access hagnoterēs
The verse's vocative ἁγνοτελές differs from apparatus lemma ἁγνοτελής, marked sic. The reported rho form ἁγνοτερής is a different and uncertain formation, not confidently assigned a dictionary lemma or an invented holiness sense.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LIV.4. ἁγνοτελές, γεραρός, θιάσου νομίου τελετάρχα,
Aligned English LIV.4. of holy rites, stately, lord of the rite of the pastoral company,
Related lexical entries ἁγνοτελής
LIV.4 AV081_04
Source AP081.04
Supplied apparatus θίασ’ εὐνομίου codd.
Adopted forms θιάσου νομίου
Adopted lexical access θίασος; νόμιος
Reported forms θίασ’; εὐνομίου
Reported lexical access θίασος
Transliteration access thias’; eunomiou
Printed of the pastoral company contrasts with the divided/elided reported θίασ’ εὐνομίου. Its exact construction is uncertain; do not call the reported phrase an independent attestation of the printed pastoral sense.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LIV.4. ἁγνοτελές, γεραρός, θιάσου νομίου τελετάρχα,
Aligned English LIV.4. of holy rites, stately, lord of the rite of the pastoral company,
LIV.5 AV081_05
Source AP081.05
Supplied apparatus 5 φιλάγρυπνε νεάζων οἷσι σιληνοῖς codd., corr. Dorville.
Adopted forms φιλάγρυπνε σὺν εὐζώνοισι τιθήναις
Adopted lexical access φιλάγρυπνος; σύν; εὔζωνος; τιθήνη
Reported forms φιλάγρυπνε; νεάζων; οἷσι; σιληνοῖς
Reported lexical access φιλάγρυπνος; νεάζω; ὅς; Σιληνός
Transliteration access philagrypne; neazōn; hoisi; silēnois
The printed wake-loving addressee is with fair-girdled nurses; the reported phrase instead includes νεάζων and Silenoi. Preserve its difficult οἷσι construction without rebuilding a complete lost verse.
Greek evidence LIV.5. εὐαστής, φιλάγρυπνε σὺν εὐζώνοισι τιθήναις,
Aligned English LIV.5. crier of euhoi, lover of sleeplessness, with the fair-girdled foster-mothers,
Related lexical entries φιλάγρυπνος; εὔζωνος; τιθήνη; Σιληνός
LIV.6 AV081_06
Source AP081.06
Supplied apparatus 6 Βάκχαις Dinner] βάκχοις.
Adopted forms Βάκχαις
Adopted lexical access Βάκχη
Reported forms βάκχοις
Reported lexical access Βάκχος
Transliteration access bakkhois
Feminine Bacchants replace reported masculine βάκχοις. Gender and the composition of the company change; do not erase the distinction as capitalization alone.
Greek evidence LIV.6. Ναΐσι καὶ Βάκχαις ἡγούμενε κισσοφόροισι·
Aligned English LIV.6. leader of the Naiads and of the ivy-bearing Bakchai;
LIV.8 AV081_08
Source AP081.08
Supplied apparatus 8 Βάκχοιο Hermann] βακχεῖον.
Adopted forms Βάκχοιο
Adopted lexical access Βάκχος
Reported forms βακχεῖον
Reported lexical access βάκχειος
Transliteration access bakkheion
Genitive of Bakchos makes the cry belong to the lord Bakchos; reported neuter bacchic adjective would qualify the cry. The god-name construction is adopted, not a separate new god.
Greek evidence LIV.8. θηροτύποις, εὔασμα διδοὺς Βάκχοιο ἄνακτος,
Aligned English LIV.8. beast-shaped, giving the euhoi-cry of Bakchos the lord,
Related lexical entries Βάκχος
LV.10 AV082_10
Source AP082.10
Supplied apparatus ἐρασιπλόκαμ’ Abel] ἐρατοπλόκαμ’.
Adopted forms ἐρασιπλόκαμ’
Adopted lexical access ἐρασιπλόκαμος
Reported forms ἐρατοπλόκαμ’
Reported lexical access ἐρατοπλόκαμος
Transliteration access eratoplokam’
Two lovely-tressed compound formations as at XLIV.2; report elided forms exactly and keep both lexical access paths.
Greek evidence LV.10. φαινομένη, ἀφανής, ἐρασιπλόκαμ’, εὐπατέρεια,
Aligned English LV.10. manifest, unseen, of lovely hair, of a noble father,
Related lexical entries ἐρασιπλόκαμος
LV.11 AV083_02
Source AP083.02
Supplied apparatus σύνδαιτι Heringa] σὺν δαιτί.
Adopted forms σύνδαιτι
Adopted lexical access συνδαίτης
Reported forms σὺν; δαιτί
Reported lexical access σύν; δαίς
Transliteration access syn; daiti
Printed compound companion at feast replaces the two-word phrase with a feast. Word division changes the lexical unit and direct address.
Greek evidence LV.11. νυμφιδίη, σύνδαιτι, θεῶν σκηπτοῦχε, λυκείη,
Aligned English LV.11. bridal, feast-fellow, sceptred among gods, Lykeia,
Related lexical entries συνδαίτης
LV.11 AV083_03
Source AP083.03
Supplied apparatus λυκείη Abel] λύκαινα.
Adopted forms λυκείη
Adopted lexical access λύκειος
Reported forms λύκαινα
Reported lexical access λύκαινα
Transliteration access lykaina
Printed λύκειος feminine epithet contrasts with she-wolf. The exact local interpretation of λυκείη is not settled by the change; do not assert a light etymology or identify a new cult from the variant alone.
Greek evidence LV.11. νυμφιδίη, σύνδαιτι, θεῶν σκηπτοῦχε, λυκείη,
Aligned English LV.11. bridal, feast-fellow, sceptred among gods, Lykeia,
Related lexical entries λύκειος
LV.13 AV083_04
Source AP083.04
Supplied apparatus 13 ἐνζεύξασα Hermann] ζεύξασα.
Adopted forms ἐνζεύξασα
Adopted lexical access ἐνζεύγνυμι
Reported forms ζεύξασα
Reported lexical access ζεύγνυμι
Transliteration access zeuxasa
Compound yoking-in verb versus simple yoking. Both concern mortals bound by unbridled necessities, but compound access should remain recoverable.
Greek evidence LV.13. ἐνζεύξασα βροτοὺς ἀχαλινώτοισιν ἀνάγκαις
Aligned English LV.13. you who have yoked mortals in unbridled necessities
Related lexical entries ἐνζεύγνυμι; ζεύγνυμι
LV.14 AV083_05
Source AP083.05
Supplied apparatus 14 ἐρωτομανῶν ἀπό codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms ἐρωμανέων ὑπὸ
Adopted lexical access ἐρωμανής; ὑπό
Reported forms ἐρωτομανῶν; ἀπό
Reported lexical access ἐρωτομανής; ἀπό
Transliteration access erōtomanōn; apo
Adopted love-maddening adjective and under contrast with reported ἐρωτομανῶν and from. The -ερωτο- formation is related but distinct; the preposition also affects how the charms act.
Greek evidence LV.14. καὶ θηρῶν πολὺ φῦλον ἐρωμανέων ὑπὸ φίλτρων·
Aligned English LV.14. and the great tribe of wild beasts, maddened with love, beneath charms;
Related lexical entries ἐρωμανής
LV.20 AV084_01
Source AP084.01
Supplied apparatus 20 κυκνείοισιν Wiel] κυανέοις.
Adopted forms κυκνείοισιν
Adopted lexical access κύκνειος
Reported forms κυανέοις
Reported lexical access κυάνεος
Transliteration access kyaneois
Swan-related conveyances replace dark-blue ones; do not import swans into the reported colour adjective.
Greek evidence LV.20. ἢ καὶ κυκνείοισιν ὄχοις ἐπὶ πόντιον οἶδμα
Aligned English LV.20. or on cars of swans over the swell of the sea
LV.20 AV084_02
Source AP084.02
Supplied apparatus ὄχοις Hermann] ὄχθοις.
Adopted forms ὄχοις
Adopted lexical access ὄχος
Reported forms ὄχθοις
Reported lexical access ὄχθη
Transliteration access okhthois
Vehicles/chariots replace banks or shores. The adopted maritime chariot image relies on this reading.
Greek evidence LV.20. ἢ καὶ κυκνείοισιν ὄχοις ἐπὶ πόντιον οἶδμα
Aligned English LV.20. or on cars of swans over the swell of the sea
Related lexical entries ὄχος
LV.21 AV084_03
Source AP084.03
Supplied apparatus 21 ἐρχομένη Hermann] τερπομένη.
Adopted forms ἐρχομένη
Adopted lexical access ἔρχομαι
Reported forms τερπομένη
Reported lexical access τέρπω
Transliteration access terpomenē
Coming replaces delighting. The later χαίρεις already expresses enjoyment, so record the verbs distinctly without inventing two separate journeys.
Greek evidence LV.21. ἐρχομένη χαίρεις κητῶν κυκλίῃσι χορείαις,
Aligned English LV.21. coming, you rejoice in the wheeling dances of the sea-beasts,
LV.21 AV084_04
Source AP084.04
Supplied apparatus κητῶν Wiel] θνητῶν.
Adopted forms κητῶν
Adopted lexical access κῆτος
Reported forms θνητῶν
Reported lexical access θνητός
Transliteration access thnētōn
Sea-monsters or great sea-creatures replace mortals as performers of the circling dances.
Greek evidence LV.21. ἐρχομένη χαίρεις κητῶν κυκλίῃσι χορείαις,
Aligned English LV.21. coming, you rejoice in the wheeling dances of the sea-beasts,
LV.22 AV084_06
Source AP084.06
Supplied apparatus 22 καλυκώπισιν Wiel] κυανώπισιν.
Adopted forms καλυκώπισιν
Adopted lexical access καλυκῶπις
Reported forms κυανώπισιν
Reported lexical access κυανῶπις
Transliteration access kyanōpisin
Bud-faced replaces dark-eyed/dark-faced. Preserve the -ωπις compound difference rather than using the supplied English as proof of a single fixed body-part sense.
Greek evidence LV.22. ἢ νύμφαις τέρπῃ καλυκώπισιν ἐν χθονὶ Δίῃ,
Aligned English LV.22. or delight in the bud-faced nymphs on the divine earth,
Related lexical entries καλυκῶπις
LV.23 AV084_07
Source AP084.07
Supplied apparatus 23 θυιάς Hermann] θῖνας.
Adopted forms θυιὰς
Adopted lexical access θυιάς
Reported forms θῖνας
Reported lexical access θίς
Transliteration access thinas
The adopted frenzied woman/Thyad designation contrasts with reported θῖνας, sand-heaps or beaches. The reported case and construction are difficult; do not claim a smooth rival syntax.
Greek evidence LV.23. θυιὰς ἐπ’ αἰγιαλοῖς ψαμαθώδεσιν ἅλματι κούφῳ·
Aligned English LV.23. a thyiad on the sandy shores, with a light leap;
Related lexical entries θυιάς
LV.23 AV084_08
Source AP084.08
Supplied apparatus ψαμαθώδεσιν Abel] ψαμμώδεσιν.
Adopted forms ψαμαθώδεσιν
Adopted lexical access ψαμαθώδης
Reported forms ψαμμώδεσιν
Reported lexical access ψαμμώδης
Transliteration access psammōdesin
Closely synonymous sandy adjectives built on ψάμαθος and ψάμμος; distinct lexical formations receive related lookup rather than invented semantic opposition.
Greek evidence LV.23. θυιὰς ἐπ’ αἰγιαλοῖς ψαμαθώδεσιν ἅλματι κούφῳ·
Aligned English LV.23. a thyiad on the sandy shores, with a light leap;
Related lexical entries ψαμαθώδης
LV.23 AV084_09
Source AP084.09
Supplied apparatus ἅρματι codd.
Adopted forms ἅλματι
Adopted lexical access ἅλμα
Reported forms ἅρματι
Reported lexical access ἅρμα
Transliteration access harmati
Light leap replaces light chariot. The goddess's movement image is materially altered.
Greek evidence LV.23. θυιὰς ἐπ’ αἰγιαλοῖς ψαμαθώδεσιν ἅλματι κούφῳ·
Aligned English LV.23. a thyiad on the sandy shores, with a light leap;
LVI.2 AV085_02
Source AP085.02
Supplied apparatus 2 ὥραισι (sic) Ruhnken] ᾠδαῖσι.
Adopted forms ὥρῃσι
Adopted lexical access ὥρα
Reported forms ᾠδαῖσι
Reported lexical access ᾠδή
Transliteration access ōidaisi
Verse has Ionic ὥρῃσι, apparatus adopted-side ὥραισι marked sic; reported ᾠδαῖσι is songs, not seasons. Both the seasons/songs lexical contrast and the text/apparatus ending difference matter.
Greek evidence LVI.2. ἁβροκόμη, φιλέρημε, βρύων ὥρῃσι ποθειναῖς,
Aligned English LVI.2. soft-haired, lover of solitude, teeming in the longed-for seasons,
Related lexical entries ὥρα
LVI.3 AV085_03
Source AP085.03
Supplied apparatus 3 Εὐβουλεῦ Hermann] εὔβουλε.
Adopted forms Εὐβουλεῦ
Adopted lexical access Εὐβουλεύς
Reported forms εὔβουλε
Reported lexical access εὔβουλος
Transliteration access euboule
Adopted name Eubouleus differs from reported well-counselled/Euboulos vocative. Do not treat this as a mere case variant of one identical name.
Greek evidence LVI.3. Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύμορφε, τροφὸς πάντων ἀρίδηλε,
Aligned English LVI.3. Eubouleus, of many forms, nurse of all, plain to see,
Related lexical entries Εὐβουλεύς
LVI.3 AV085_04
Source AP085.04
Supplied apparatus τροφός Abel] τροφή.
Adopted forms τροφὸς
Adopted lexical access τροφός
Reported forms τροφή
Reported lexical access τροφή
Transliteration access trophē
Nurse/nourisher replaces nourishment. The change makes the god an agent rather than a food/nurture noun.
Greek evidence LVI.3. Εὐβουλεῦ, πολύμορφε, τροφὸς πάντων ἀρίδηλε,
Aligned English LVI.3. Eubouleus, of many forms, nurse of all, plain to see,
LVI.4 AV085_06
Source AP085.06
Supplied apparatus πασιφαές Wiel] σὺ πᾶσιν.
Adopted forms πασιφαὲς
Adopted lexical access πασιφαής
Reported forms σὺ; πᾶσιν
Reported lexical access σύ; πᾶς
Transliteration access sy; pasin
All-shining compound replaces you to all. The shining adjective is the adopted interpretation, not an attested reported compound.
Greek evidence LVI.4. κούρη καὶ κόρε, πασιφαὲς θάλος αἰέν, Ἄδωνι,
Aligned English LVI.4. maiden and boy, all-shining shoot for ever, Adonis,
LVI.7 AV086_01
Source AP086.01
Supplied apparatus 7 κυνηγεσίαις Dinner] κυναγεσίοις.
Adopted forms κυνηγεσίαις
Adopted lexical access κυνηγεσία
Reported forms κυναγεσίοις
Reported lexical access κυναγέσιον
Transliteration access kynagesiois
The adopted feminine hunt/hunting noun differs from reported neuter hunting/chase noun with dialectal alpha. Same practical field, but not merely a changed case ending of one identical form.
Greek evidence LVI.7. ἀγλαόμορφε, κυνηγεσίαις χαίρων, βαθυχαῖτα,
Aligned English LVI.7. of splendid form, rejoicing in the hunt, deep-haired,
Related lexical entries κυνηγεσία
LVII.3 AV087_01
Source AP087.01
Supplied apparatus 3 βακχεχόροιο Casaubonus] βάκχε χοροῖο.
Adopted forms βακχεχόροιο
Adopted lexical access βακχέχορος
Reported forms βάκχε; χοροῖο
Reported lexical access Βάκχος; χορός
Transliteration access bakkhe; khoroio
The adopted compound qualifies Dionysos as of the bacchic dance; the reported divided words are a Bakchos vocative and genitive dance. Διωνύσοιο γένεθλον and Aphrodite in the following line remain independently printed, so do not claim this adjacent emendation alone creates all the stated parentage.
Greek evidence LVII.3. Ἑρμῆ, βακχεχόροιο Διωνύσοιο γένεθλον
Aligned English LVII.3. Hermes, offspring of Dionysos of the bacchic dance
Related lexical entries βακχέχορος; Βάκχος; χορός
LVII.8 AV088_02
Source AP088.02
Supplied apparatus 8 ὑπνοδώτιρα codd.
Adopted forms ὑπνοδώτιδι
Adopted lexical access ὑπνοδῶτις
Reported forms ὑπνοδώτιρα
Transliteration access hupnodōtira
The printed dative sleep-giving agrees with the wand; reported ὑπνοδώτιρα is a different agent-noun formation/case. Keep reported form retrievable without manufacturing its dictionary nominative.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LVII.8. εὐιέρῳ ῥάβδῳ θέλγων ὑπνοδώτιδι πάντα,
Aligned English LVII.8. charming all things with your well-hallowed, sleep-giving wand,
Related lexical entries ὑπνοδῶτις
LVII.11 AV088_03
Source AP088.03
Supplied apparatus 11 αἰνομόροις Abel] ἀενάοις.
Adopted forms αἰνομόροις
Adopted lexical access αἰνόμορος
Reported forms ἀενάοις
Reported lexical access ἀέναος
Transliteration access aenaois
Grim-fated souls replace ever-flowing/everlasting souls; substantial adjective contrast, not an inflectional variant.
Greek evidence LVII.11. ψυχαῖς αἰνομόροις θνητῶν ὁδὸν ἡγεμονεύειν.
Aligned English LVII.11. to lead the way for the grim-fated souls of mortals.
LVIII.2 AV089_01
Source AP089.01
Supplied apparatus 2 τοξουλκῆ?
Adopted forms τοξαλκῆ
Adopted lexical access τοξαλκής
Editorial queries τοξουλκῆ
Unadopted question τοξουλκῆ? would shift bow-strength toward bow-drawing. Preserve as a query, not a reported manuscript reading, and use the attested query form rather than force a headword.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LVIII.2. τοξαλκῆ, πτερόεντα, πυρίβρομον, εὔδρομον ὁρμῇ,
Aligned English LVIII.2. strong with the bow, winged, fire-roaring, swift in his rush,
Related lexical entries τοξαλκής
LVIII.2 AV089_02
Source AP089.02
Supplied apparatus πυρίβρομον Hermann] πυρίδρομον.
Adopted forms πυρίβρομον
Adopted lexical access πυρίβρομος
Reported forms πυρίδρομον
Reported lexical access πυρίδρομος
Transliteration access pyridromon
Fire-roaring versus fiery in course; different compounds, both directly relevant to Eros's force.
Greek evidence LVIII.2. τοξαλκῆ, πτερόεντα, πυρίβρομον, εὔδρομον ὁρμῇ,
Aligned English LVIII.2. strong with the bow, winged, fire-roaring, swift in his rush,
Related lexical entries πυρίβρομος; πυρίδρομος
LVIII.6 AV089_03
Source AP089.03
Supplied apparatus 6 Ῥέα Wiel] θεά.
Adopted forms Ῥέα
Adopted lexical access Ῥέα
Reported forms θεά
Reported lexical access θεά
Transliteration access thea
Adopted Rhea names the feeding goddess; reported θεά is the general goddess noun. Do not identify the reported goddess by name without qualification.
Greek evidence LVIII.6. πνεύματα παντογένεθλα Ῥέα βόσκει χλοόκαρπος,
Aligned English LVIII.6. all-begetting, that green-fruited Rhea feeds for mortals,
LIX.3 AV090_02
Source AP090.02
Supplied apparatus 3 ὀρφναίης Wiel] οὐρανίας.
Adopted forms ὀρφναίης
Adopted lexical access ὀρφναῖος
Reported forms οὐρανίας
Reported lexical access οὐράνιος
Transliteration access ouranias
Dark lake replaces heavenly lake. This is a substantive setting contrast, not alternative inflection.
Greek evidence LIX.3. ὀρφναίης, ἵνα λυγρὸν ὕδωρ νυχίης ὑπὸ θέρμης
Aligned English LIX.3. of darkness, where the mournful water under the night-heat
LIX.3 AV090_03
Source AP090.03
Supplied apparatus λυγρόν Wiel] λευκόν.
Adopted forms λυγρὸν
Adopted lexical access λυγρός
Reported forms λευκόν
Reported lexical access λευκός
Transliteration access leukon
Mournful/baneful water replaces white/bright water; preserve evaluative versus colour/light vocabulary.
Greek evidence LIX.3. ὀρφναίης, ἵνα λυγρὸν ὕδωρ νυχίης ὑπὸ θέρμης
Aligned English LIX.3. of darkness, where the mournful water under the night-heat
Related lexical entries λυγρός
LIX.4 AV090_05
Source AP090.05
Supplied apparatus 4 λιπαρῷ μυχῷ εὐλίθῳ ἄντρῳ codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms λιπαροῦ μυχῷ εὐλίθου ἄντρου
Adopted lexical access λιπαρός; μυχός; εὔλιθος; ἄντρον
Reported forms λιπαρῷ; μυχῷ; εὐλίθῳ; ἄντρῳ
Reported lexical access λιπαρός; μυχός; εὔλιθος; ἄντρον
Transliteration access liparōi; mykhōi; eulithōi; antrōi
Adopted genitives qualify the cave containing the recess; reported datives coordinate or agree differently. The smooth/fair-stoned cave nouns remain, but their grammatical grouping changes.
Greek evidence LIX.4. ῥήγνυται ἐν σκιερῷ λιπαροῦ μυχῷ εὐλίθου ἄντρου,
Aligned English LIX.4. breaks out in the shadowy recess of a sleek, fair-stoned cave,
LIX.6 AV090_06
Source AP090.06
Supplied apparatus 6 κούφῃ Hermann] κοῦφον.
Adopted forms κούφῃ
Adopted lexical access κοῦφος
Reported forms κοῦφον
Reported lexical access κοῦφος
Transliteration access kouphon
Dative light qualifies hope, not the neuter mortal race as reported κοῦφον could. Explain the attachment, not a new adjective.
Greek evidence LIX.6. ἔνθεν ἐπὶ βρότεον δόκιμον γένος ἐλπίδι κούφῃ
Aligned English LIX.6. from there upon the tried mortal race, with light hope,
Related lexical entries κοῦφος
LIX.15 AV091_02
Source AP091.02
Supplied apparatus 15 ἀέριοι (sic) Ruhnken] νυκτέριοι.
Adopted forms ἠέριαι
Adopted lexical access ἠέριος
Reported forms νυκτέριοι
Reported lexical access νυκτέριος
Transliteration access nykterioi
Verse has feminine epic ἠέριαι, while the apparatus lemma is masculine ἀέριοι, marked sic. The note and line 17 jointly report redistribution of airy and nocturnal epithets; do not count the epithets as added or lost from the hymn as a whole.
Greek evidence LIX.15. ἀλλά μοι, ἠέριαι, μαλακόφρονες, ἠπιόθυμοι,
Aligned English LIX.15. But to me, airy ones, soft of mind, gentle of heart —
LIX.17 AV091_03
Source AP091.03
Supplied apparatus 17 νυκτέριοι (sic) Ruhnken] ἀέριοι.
Adopted forms νυκτέριαι
Adopted lexical access νυκτέριος
Reported forms ἀέριοι
Reported lexical access ἀέριος
Transliteration access aerioi
Verse has feminine νυκτέριαι, apparatus masculine νυκτέριοι marked sic. Together with line 15 this swaps the locations of airy/nocturnal, rather than giving independent evidence for two new kinds of Fate.
Greek evidence LIX.17. νυκτέριαι, ἀφανεῖς, ἀμετάτροποι, αἰὲν ἀτειρεῖς,
Aligned English LIX.17. of the night, unseen, not to be turned aside, ever unwearied,
Related lexical entries νυκτέριος
LIX.18 AV091_04
Source AP091.04
Supplied apparatus 18 ἀνάγκης Hermann] ἀνάγκη.
Adopted forms ἀνάγκης
Adopted lexical access ἀνάγκη
Reported forms ἀνάγκη
Reported lexical access ἀνάγκη
Transliteration access anankē
Genitive necessity completes takers-away of necessity for mortals; nominative reported ἀνάγκη lacks that relation. This supports concrete relief in the adopted text, not an exclusively cosmic definition.
Greek evidence LIX.18. παντοδότειραι, ἀφαιρέτιδες θνητοῖσιν ἀνάγκης·
Aligned English LIX.18. givers of all, takers of necessity from mortals;
Related lexical entries ἀνάγκη
LIX.20 AV091_05
Source AP091.05
Supplied apparatus 20 λαθικηδέες Abel] λυσιπήμονες.
Adopted forms λαθικηδέες
Adopted lexical access λαθικηδής
Reported forms λυσιπήμονες
Reported lexical access λυσιπήμων
Transliteration access lysipēmones
Care-forgetting replaces grief-loosing. Both express relief, but forgetting and releasing are different compound actions that deserve explained access.
Greek evidence LIX.20. ἐρχόμεναι μύσταις λαθικηδέες εὔφρονι βουλῇ.
Aligned English LIX.20. coming to the initiates, care-forgetting, with kindly counsel.
Related lexical entries λαθικηδής
LIX.after20 AV091_06
Source AP091.06
Supplied apparatus Post v. 20 sequitur in codd. hic versus Μοιράων τέλος ἔλλαβ’ ἀοιδή, ἣν ὕφαν’ Ὀρφεύς.
Reported forms Μοιράων; τέλος; ἔλλαβ’; ἀοιδή; ἣν; ὕφαν’; Ὀρφεύς
Reported lexical access Μοῖρα; τέλος; λαμβάνω; ἀοιδή; ὑφαίνω; Ὀρφεύς
Transliteration access Moiraōn; telos; ellab’; aoidē; hēn; huphan’; Orpheus
The apparatus quotes a whole verse-colophon about the song of the Moirai reaching its end, woven by Orpheus. It is not in the 20-line adopted hymn and is not a new primary attestation; preserve as reported paratext/extra verse, without asserting how it entered the manuscript tradition.
Related lexical entries τέλος
LX.2 AV092_02
Source AP092.02
Supplied apparatus 2 Εὐρυνόμης Schrader] εὐνομίης.
Adopted forms Εὐρυνόμης
Adopted lexical access Εὐρυνόμη
Reported forms εὐνομίης
Reported lexical access εὐνομία
Transliteration access eunomiēs
Named Eurynome replaces good order/Eunomia as the mother's designation. This genealogical alteration is explicitly editorial in the supplied apparatus, not a verified reading of all manuscripts.
Greek evidence LX.2. θυγατέρες Ζηνός τε καὶ Εὐρυνόμης βαθυκόλπου,
Aligned English LX.2. daughters of Zeus and of deep-bosomed Eurynome,
LX.4 AV092_04
Source AP092.04
Supplied apparatus 4 εὔφρονες Slothouwer] εὐφροσύν’.
Adopted forms εὔφρονες
Adopted lexical access εὔφρων
Reported forms εὐφροσύν’
Transliteration access euphrosyn’
Printed kindly plural adjective replaces an elided reported εὐφροσύν’ whose expansion and syntax are uncertain. Do not assert whether it is a person-name or abstract noun without further evidence; preserve the exact form.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LX.4. χαρμοσύνης γενέτειραι, ἐράσμιαι, εὔφρονες, ἁγναί,
Aligned English LX.4. mothers of gladness, lovely, kindly, holy,
Related lexical entries εὔφρων
LX.6-9 AV092_05
Source AP092.05
Supplied apparatus Vss. 6—9 ex hymno LXIX. huc transposuit Ruhnken.
The apparatus attributes transfer of these four adopted verses from LXIX to Ruhnken. The corresponding notice follows LXIX.9; this is one reported relocation, not eight primary verses or new variants at each duplicated notice.
Greek evidence LX.6. οὔτε γὰρ ἠελίου ταχιναὶ φλόγες οὔτε σελήνης
Aligned English LX.6. for neither the swift flames of the sun, nor of the moon,
Greek evidence LX.7. καὶ σοφίης ἀρετῆς τε καὶ ἐργασίμου θρασύτητος
Aligned English LX.7. and of wisdom and excellence and workmanlike daring
Greek evidence LX.8. εὐχέρει’ οὔτε βίου λιπαρῆς περικαλλέος ἥβης
Aligned English LX.8. the readiness, nor of life's sleek and lovely youth,
Greek evidence LX.9. ὑμῶν χωρὶς ἐγείρει εὐφροσύνας βιότοιο·
Aligned English LX.9. rouses, apart from you, the joys of living;
Related lexical entries χάρις; σοφία
Related consequential readings AV106_01
LX.8 AV092_07
Source AP092.07
Supplied apparatus 8 εὐχέρει’ Wiel] εὔχαρι.
Adopted forms εὐχέρει’
Adopted lexical access εὐχέρεια
Reported forms εὔχαρι
Reported lexical access εὔχαρις
Transliteration access eukhari
Readiness/ease noun replaces gracious/charming adjective form. The adopted abstract capacity is not simply grace spelled differently.
Greek evidence LX.8. εὐχέρει’ οὔτε βίου λιπαρῆς περικαλλέος ἥβης
Aligned English LX.8. the readiness, nor of life's sleek and lovely youth,
Related lexical entries εὐχέρεια
LXI.2 AV093_01
Source AP093.01
Supplied apparatus 2 πολυθρύ(λ)λων vel πολυ.... codd.
Adopted forms πολυφύλων
Adopted lexical access πολύφυλος
Reported forms πολυθρύ; λ; λων; πολυ
Transliteration access polythry; l; lōn; poly
Printed of many tribes contrasts with incompletely reported πολυθρύ(λ)λων or πολυ.... . Do not restore the damaged alternative, infer a full headword, or assign a definite substitute meaning from the prefix alone.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXI.2. πανδερκής, ἐσορῶσα βίον θνητῶν πολυφύλων·
Aligned English LXI.2. all-seeing, looking upon the life of mortals of many tribes;
Related lexical entries πολύφυλος
LXI.4 AV093_03
Source AP093.03
Supplied apparatus 4 ἀλλ’ ἔχθουσα Wiel] ἀλλάσσουσα.
Adopted forms ἀλλ’ ἔχθουσα
Adopted lexical access ἀλλά; ἔχθω
Reported forms ἀλλάσσουσα
Reported lexical access ἀλλάσσω
Transliteration access allassousa
But hating the unstable speech replaces changing it. Word division changes the verb and the stated response of Nemesis.
Greek evidence LXI.4. ἀλλ’ ἔχθουσα λόγον πολυποίκιλον, ἄστατον αἰεί,
Aligned English LXI.4. but hate a speech of many colours, never standing still,
LXI.5 AV093_04
Source AP093.04
Supplied apparatus 5 δεδίασι Pierson] δεδάασι.
Adopted forms δεδίασι
Adopted lexical access δείδω
Reported forms δεδάασι
Reported lexical access δάω
Transliteration access dedaasi
Mortals fear her in the printed reading; reported δεδάασι belongs to knowing/learning. Preserve this fear-versus-knowledge contrast without treating the reported form as another fear inflection.
Greek evidence LXI.5. ἣν πάντες δεδίασι βροτοὶ ζυγὸν αὐχένι θέντες·
Aligned English LXI.5. whom all mortals fear, setting the yoke upon the neck;
Related lexical entries δείδω
LXI.6 AV093_05
Source AP093.05
Supplied apparatus 6 σοί Hermann] σή.
Adopted forms σοὶ
Adopted lexical access σύ
Reported forms σή
Reported lexical access σός
Transliteration access sē
Dative to you replaces possessive your, affecting whether the purpose concerns Nemesis or belongs to her.
Greek evidence LXI.6. σοὶ γὰρ ἀεὶ γνώμη πάντων μέλει, οὐδέ σε λήθει
Aligned English LXI.6. for the purpose of all is ever your care, nor does it escape you,
LXI.6 AV093_06
Source AP093.06
Supplied apparatus μέλει Hermann] πέλει.
Adopted forms μέλει
Adopted lexical access μέλω
Reported forms πέλει
Reported lexical access πέλω
Transliteration access pelei
Is a concern replaces is/is present; note the coordination with the preceding pronoun change rather than pretending each isolated reading yields the same finished syntax.
Greek evidence LXI.6. σοὶ γὰρ ἀεὶ γνώμη πάντων μέλει, οὐδέ σε λήθει
Aligned English LXI.6. for the purpose of all is ever your care, nor does it escape you,
LXI.12 AV094_02
Source AP094.02
Supplied apparatus 12 ἀλλοπροσάλλας Hermann] ἀλλιτροτάτας.
Adopted forms ἀλλοπροσάλλας
Adopted lexical access ἀλλοπρόσαλλος
Reported forms ἀλλιτροτάτας
Transliteration access allitrotatas
Printed shifting from side to side describes the impure purposes. Reported ἀλλιτροτάτας remains a difficult form with no confident lemma or exact gloss assigned; do not manufacture an ethical superlative.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXI.12. γνώμας οὐχ ὁσίας, πανυπέρφρονας, ἀλλοπροσάλλας.
Aligned English LXI.12. purposes, impure, all-overweening, turning from side to side.
Related lexical entries ἀλλοπρόσαλλος
LXII.5 AV095_02
Source AP095.02
Supplied apparatus 5 ἀληθείῃ Hermann] ἀληθείας.
Adopted forms ἀληθείῃ
Adopted lexical access ἀλήθεια
Reported forms ἀληθείας
Reported lexical access ἀλήθεια
Transliteration access alētheias
Dative by/in truth replaces genitive truth; the role of truth in drawing unlike things together is grammatical, not a new lexeme.
Greek evidence LXII.5. ἐξ ἰσότητος ἀληθείῃ συνάγουσ’ ἀνόμοια·
Aligned English LXII.5. on equal terms drawing unlike things together by truth;
Related lexical entries ἀλήθεια
LXIII.6 AV096_03
Source AP096.03
Supplied apparatus 6 ἀλλοπρόσαλλοι Hermann] ἀλλ’ ὑπὲρ αὐτοῦ.
Adopted forms ἀλλοπρόσαλλοι
Adopted lexical access ἀλλοπρόσαλλος
Reported forms ἀλλ’; ὑπὲρ; αὐτοῦ
Reported lexical access ἀλλά; ὑπέρ; αὐτός
Transliteration access all’; huper; autou
Printed compound calls the offenders shifting; reported phrase but over/for him is syntactically different. Preserve the difficult phrase without supplying a missing antecedent.
Greek evidence LXIII.6. ὅσσοι μὴ τὸ σὸν ἦλθον ὑπὸ ζυγόν, ἀλλοπρόσαλλοι,
Aligned English LXIII.6. who have not come beneath your yoke, the shifting ones,
Related lexical entries ἀλλοπρόσαλλος
LXIII.11 AV097_01
Source AP097.01
Supplied apparatus 11 σοφίη Hermann] σοφίης.
Adopted forms σοφίη
Adopted lexical access σοφία
Reported forms σοφίης
Reported lexical access σοφία
Transliteration access sophiēs
Nominative wisdom becomes the subject reaching the good end; reported genitive wisdom would require a different construction.
Greek evidence LXIII.11. ἐν σοὶ γὰρ σοφίη ἀρετῆς τέλος ἐσθλὸν ἱκάνει.
Aligned English LXIII.11. for in you wisdom reaches the good end of excellence.
Related lexical entries σοφία
LXIII.11 AV097_02
Source AP097.02
Supplied apparatus ἐσθλόν Lennep] ὅλλον.
Adopted forms ἐσθλὸν
Adopted lexical access ἐσθλός
Reported forms ὅλλον
Transliteration access hollon
Printed good qualifies the end; reported ὅλλον is preserved exactly and not silently normalized to ὅλον, whole. No secure reported headword is assigned.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXIII.11. ἐν σοὶ γὰρ σοφίη ἀρετῆς τέλος ἐσθλὸν ἱκάνει.
Aligned English LXIII.11. for in you wisdom reaches the good end of excellence.
Related lexical entries ἐσθλός
LXIV.4 AV098_02
Source AP098.02
Supplied apparatus 4 ἀκλινές Stephanus] ἀκλινῆ.
Adopted forms ἀκλινὲς
Adopted lexical access ἀκλινής
Reported forms ἀκλινῆ
Reported lexical access ἀκλινής
Transliteration access aklinē
Neuter accusative agrees with the steadfast thing in nature; reported ἀκλινῆ can be masculine/feminine accusative singular or neuter plural, not agreeing with that singular neuter, so its attachment changes. Same unswerving adjective.
Greek evidence LXIV.4. ἀκλινὲς ἀστασίαστον ἀεὶ τηροῦντα νόμοισιν,
Aligned English LXIV.4. unswerving, free of faction, keeping it always by laws,
Related lexical entries ἀκλινής
LXIV.6 AV098_03
Source AP098.03
Supplied apparatus 6 οὐτιδανόν Wiel] οὐ δίκαιον.
Adopted forms οὐτιδανὸν
Adopted lexical access οὐτιδανός
Reported forms οὐ; δίκαιον
Reported lexical access οὐ; δίκαιος
Transliteration access ou; dikaion
Worthless envy replaces not-just envy. The adopted adjective and reported negated adjective are distinct evaluations, not synonyms by definition.
Greek evidence LXIV.6. καὶ φθόνον οὐτιδανὸν ῥοίζου τρόπον ἐκτὸς ἐλαύνει·
Aligned English LXIV.6. and with a whistling rush drives worthless envy outside;
LXIV.6 AV098_04
Source AP098.04
Supplied apparatus ἐκτός Wiel] αὐτός.
Adopted forms ἐκτὸς
Adopted lexical access ἐκτός
Reported forms αὐτός
Reported lexical access αὐτός
Transliteration access autos
Outside specifies the direction of expulsion; himself instead supplies an emphatic subject. The driven-out sense is partly lexicalized by the adopted adverb.
Greek evidence LXIV.6. καὶ φθόνον οὐτιδανὸν ῥοίζου τρόπον ἐκτὸς ἐλαύνει·
Aligned English LXIV.6. and with a whistling rush drives worthless envy outside;
Related lexical entries ἐκτός
LXV.3 AV099_03
Source AP099.03
Supplied apparatus 3 ὁπλόδουπε Pierson] δολόδουπε.
Adopted forms ὁπλόδουπε
Adopted lexical access ὁπλόδουπος
Reported forms δολόδουπε
Transliteration access dolodoupe
Printed loud-with-arms compound differs from reported δολόδουπε. The latter is retained as a difficult attested form; do not confidently gloss it as trick-roaring simply by splitting its letters.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXV.3. Ἆρες ἄναξ, ὁπλόδουπε, φόνοις πεπαλαγμένος αἰεί,
Aligned English LXV.3. Ares lord, loud with arms, for ever stained with slaughter,
Related lexical entries ὁπλόδουπος
LXV.7 AV099_06
Source AP099.06
Supplied apparatus Λυαίου Lennep] λυαίους.
Adopted forms Λυαίου
Adopted lexical access Λυαῖος
Reported forms λυαίους
Reported lexical access λυαῖος
Transliteration access lyaious
Genitive divine epithet Lyaios makes the revels his; reported accusative plural could qualify the revels as releasing. The divine name is an adopted construction, not a wholly unrelated lexeme.
Greek evidence LXV.7. ἐς δὲ πόθον νεῦσον Κύπριδος κώμους τε Λυαίου,
Aligned English LXV.7. and incline to longing for the Kyprian and the revels of Lyaios,
Related lexical entries Λυαῖος
LXVI.2 AV100_02
Source AP100.02
Supplied apparatus 2 φλογεραῖς Abel] φλογίαις.
Adopted forms φλογεραῖς
Adopted lexical access φλογερός
Reported forms φλογίαις
Reported lexical access φλόγιος
Transliteration access phlogiais
Two flaming/fire-related adjective formations, φλογερός and φλόγιος. Their close sense does not make them case forms of one lemma.
Greek evidence LXVI.2. λαμπόμενε φλογεραῖς αὐγαῖς, φαεσίμβροτε δαῖμον,
Aligned English LXVI.2. shining with flaming beams, daimon that shines on mortals,
Related lexical entries φλογερός
LXVI.2 AV100_03
Source AP100.03
Supplied apparatus αὐγαῖς Hermann] αὔραις.
Adopted forms αὐγαῖς
Adopted lexical access αὐγή
Reported forms αὔραις
Reported lexical access αὔρα
Transliteration access aurais
Rays or radiance replace breezes; the adopted fiery-light image must not be read into the reported air noun.
Greek evidence LXVI.2. λαμπόμενε φλογεραῖς αὐγαῖς, φαεσίμβροτε δαῖμον,
Aligned English LXVI.2. shining with flaming beams, daimon that shines on mortals,
LXIX.after9 AV106_01
Source AP106.01
Supplied apparatus Post v. 9 ante Ruhnkenium legebantur versus quos ille in h. LX. transtulit.
The Latin notice reports removal after line 9 of verses now placed at LX.6–9, attributed to Ruhnken. Compare the corresponding notice at LX.6–9; it does not supply additional Greek tokens or independent primary verses.
Related lexical entries χάρις; σοφία
Related consequential readings AV092_05
LXX.4 AV107_01
Source AP107.01
Supplied apparatus 4 ἣ πάντων καθορᾷ βίοτον codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms αἳ πάντων καθορᾶτε βίον
Adopted lexical access ὅς; πᾶς; καθοράω; βίος
Reported forms ἣ; πάντων; καθορᾷ; βίοτον
Reported lexical access ὅς; πᾶς; καθοράω; βίοτος
Transliteration access hē; pantōn; kathorai; bioton
Printed plural relative and second-person plural address replace singular she looks down; βίον replaces cognate βίοτον. The change fits the plural Eumenides and preserves the life-observing act.
Greek evidence LXX.4. αἳ πάντων καθορᾶτε βίον θνητῶν ἀσεβούντων,
Aligned English LXX.4. you who look upon the life of all impious mortals,
LXX.9 AV107_02
Source AP107.02
Supplied apparatus 9 βλοσυραί Lennep et νύχιαι Hermann; codd. βλοσυροννύχιαι.
Adopted forms βλοσυραί, νύχιαι
Adopted lexical access βλοσυρός; νύχιος
Reported forms βλοσυροννύχιαι
Transliteration access blosyronnykhiai
Two adopted adjectives, grim and nocturnal, replace a reported fused/damaged form. Preserve βλοσυροννύχιαι exactly; do not invent a securely attested dictionary headword or silently call the source two separate words.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXX.9. λυσιμελεῖς οἴστρῳ, βλοσυραί, νύχιαι, πολύποτμοι,
Aligned English LXX.9. limb-loosing with frenzy, grim, of the night, of many dooms,
LXXI.4 AV108_03
Source AP108.03
Supplied apparatus 4 Πλούτων’ Gesner] Πλούτων.
Adopted forms Πλούτων’
Adopted lexical access Πλούτων
Reported forms Πλούτων
Reported lexical access Πλούτων
Transliteration access Ploutōn
The printed apostrophe signals elided accusative Πλούτωνα, permitting the supplied translation's as-Plouton construction; reported nominative Πλούτων makes Plouton an expressed subject. Zeus is nevertheless explicitly named at LXXI.3 in the supplied verse. The apparatus does not itself change Ζηνὸς Κρονίοιο or prove that the reported narrative contains no Zeus.
Greek evidence LXXI.4. ᾗ ψευσθεὶς Πλούτων’ ἐμίγη δολίαις ἀπάτῃσι,
Aligned English LXXI.4. with whom, playing false as Plouton, he mingled in crafty deceits,
Related lexical entries Πλούτων
LXXI.4 AV108_04
Source AP108.04
Supplied apparatus ἀπάτῃσιν (sic) Hermann] ἀπάταισι.
Adopted forms ἀπάτῃσι
Adopted lexical access ἀπάτη
Reported forms ἀπάταισι
Reported lexical access ἀπάτη
Transliteration access apataisi
Apparatus adopted-side ἀπάτῃσιν, marked sic, has a nu absent from the verse; reported ἀπάταισι also has an alpha ending. Same deceptions noun, not a new lexical reading.
Greek evidence LXXI.4. ᾗ ψευσθεὶς Πλούτων’ ἐμίγη δολίαις ἀπάτῃσι,
Aligned English LXXI.4. with whom, playing false as Plouton, he mingled in crafty deceits,
Related lexical entries ἀπάτη
LXXI.heading AV109_01
Source AP109.01
Supplied apparatus In inscriptione Μειλινόης Lobeck pro μηλινόης.
Adopted forms ΜΕΙΛΙΝΟΗΣ
Adopted lexical access Μειλινόη
Reported forms μηλινόης
Transliteration access mēlinoēs
The note explicitly concerns the heading, not verse 1. Printed heading ΜΕΙΛΙΝΟΗΣ and apparatus Μειλινόης preserve the corrected name spelling; μηλινόης is the reported alternative. Keep this separate from verse counts and from the name in LXXI.1.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Related lexical entries Μειλινόη
LXXI.11 AV109_03
Source AP109.03
Supplied apparatus 11 ἐκπέμποις Hermann] ἐκπέμπειν.
Adopted forms ἐκπέμποις
Adopted lexical access ἐκπέμπω
Reported forms ἐκπέμπειν
Reported lexical access ἐκπέμπω
Transliteration access ekpempein
Optative petition may you send out replaces infinitive. Same expelling verb, but petition syntax becomes explicit.
Greek evidence LXXI.11. ψυχῆς ἐκπέμποις οἶστρον ἐπὶ τέρματα γαίης,
Aligned English LXXI.11. may you send the soul's frenzy out to the ends of the earth,
Related lexical entries ἐκπέμπω
LXXI.12 AV109_04
Source AP109.04
Supplied apparatus 12 εὐιέροις?
Adopted forms εὐίερον
Adopted lexical access εὐίερος
Reported lexical access εὐίερος
Editorial queries εὐιέροις
Unadopted dative-plural query εὐιέροις? would qualify the initiates rather than the neuter face described as well-hallowed. Preserve this change of attachment as a query, not a witnessed correction.
Greek evidence LXXI.12. εὐμενὲς εὐίερον μύσταις φαίνουσα πρόσωπον.
Aligned English LXXI.12. showing to the initiates a kindly and well-hallowed face.
Related lexical entries εὐίερος
LXXII.4 AV110_02
Source AP110.02
Supplied apparatus 4 εἶδος Abel] εὖχος.
Adopted forms εἶδος
Adopted lexical access εἶδος
Reported forms εὖχος
Reported lexical access εὖχος
Transliteration access eukhos
The adopted form/appearance noun replaces glory/boast. This changes what is called unassailable, not just an accent or inflection.
Greek evidence LXXII.4. αἵματος ἐκγεγαῶσαν, ἀπρόσμαχον εἶδος ἔχουσαν,
Aligned English LXXII.4. of Eubouleus, having a form none can assail,
LXXIII.1 AV111_01
Source AP111.01
Supplied apparatus 1 πελάσαι ἡγήτορα Wiel] μεγαλανηγήτορα.
Adopted forms πελάσαι ἡγήτορα
Adopted lexical access πελάζω; ἡγήτωρ
Reported forms μεγαλανηγήτορα
Transliteration access megalanēgētora
Adopted infinitive draw near plus leader replaces the reported compound-like μεγαλανηγήτορα. The reported word's precise formation is uncertain; preserve it without repairing to a conjectural dictionary lemma.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXXIII.1. Δαίμονα κικλήσκω πελάσαι ἡγήτορα φρικτόν,
Aligned English LXXIII.1. I call upon the Daimon to draw near, the leader who makes men shudder,
LXXIII.7 AV111_04
Source AP111.04
Supplied apparatus 7 πολύστονα Slothouwer] πολύσπορα.
Adopted forms πολύστονα
Adopted lexical access πολύστονος
Reported forms πολύσπορα
Reported lexical access πολύσπορος
Transliteration access polyspora
Much-lamented or groan-filled cares replace many-seeded cares. The compound shift changes the characterization of grief; it is not a number variant.
Greek evidence LXXIII.7. τοιγάρ τοι, μάκαρ, ἁγνέ, πολύστονα κήδε’ ἐλάσσας,
Aligned English LXXIII.7. Therefore, blessed one, holy, having driven off the cares of many groans,
Related lexical entries πολύστονος; πολύσπορος
LXXIII.9 AV111_05
Source AP111.05
Supplied apparatus 9 εὔδοξον Hermann] ἔνδοξον.
Adopted forms εὔδοξον
Adopted lexical access εὔδοξος
Reported forms ἔνδοξον
Reported lexical access ἔνδοξος
Transliteration access endoxon
Well-reputed/glorious versus in-repute/glorious are distinct but close adjective formations. Do not manufacture a sharp moral opposition solely from prefixes.
Greek evidence LXXIII.9. εὔδοξον βιοτῆς γλυκερὸν τέλος ἐσθλὸν ὀπάζοις.
Aligned English LXXIII.9. may you grant a glorious, sweet and noble end to life.
Related lexical entries εὔδοξος
LXXV.7 AV113_03
Source AP113.03
Supplied apparatus 7 φαινομένου Hermann] φαινόμενος.
Adopted forms φαινομένου
Adopted lexical access φαίνω
Reported forms φαινόμενος
Reported lexical access φαίνω
Transliteration access phainomenos
Genitive participle agrees with storm in line 6; reported nominative would instead describe the visible addressee. This changes attachment, not the appearance verb.
Greek evidence LXXV.7. φαινομένου σωτὴρ μοῦνος θνητοῖς ἀναφαίνῃ,
Aligned English LXXV.7. shows itself, you shine out sole saviour to mortals,
Related lexical entries φαίνω
LXXVI.10 AV115_01
Source AP115.01
Supplied apparatus 10 Εὐνομίῃ Abel] εὐδυνάτῃ.
Adopted forms Εὐνομίῃ
Adopted lexical access εὐνομία
Reported forms εὐδυνάτῃ
Reported lexical access εὐδύνατος
Transliteration access eudynatēi
Named Eunomia/Good Order replaces an adjective meaning potent or strong. The added named companion is an adopted reading, not guaranteed by the reported epithet.
Greek evidence LXXVI.10. Καλλιόπη σὺν μητρὶ καὶ Εὐνομίῃ θεᾷ ἁγνῇ.
Aligned English LXXVI.10. and Kalliope, with your mother and with Eunomia, holy goddess.
LXXVII.3 AV116_01
Source AP116.01
Supplied apparatus 3 ἔχουσα (sic) Hermann] ἐοῦσα.
Adopted forms ἔχουσ’
Adopted lexical access ἔχω
Reported forms ἐοῦσα
Reported lexical access εἰμί
Transliteration access eousa
Verse elides ἔχουσα; apparatus quotes its full form and marks sic. Having/keeping replaces being in the reported ἐοῦσα; interpret with the adjacent memory and deception case changes rather than as an isolated synonym.
Greek evidence LXXVII.3. ἐκτὸς ἔχουσ’ ἀπάτης μνήμην βλαψίφρονος αἰεί,
Aligned English LXXVII.3. keeping memory always outside mind-harming deceit,
LXXVII.3 AV116_02
Source AP116.02
Supplied apparatus ἀπάτης Wiel] κακῆς.
Adopted forms ἀπάτης
Adopted lexical access ἀπάτη
Reported forms κακῆς
Reported lexical access κακός
Transliteration access kakēs
Deception noun replaces the adjective evil. The adopted line keeps memory outside mind-harming deception; the reported wording does not independently contain the same deception noun.
Greek evidence LXXVII.3. ἐκτὸς ἔχουσ’ ἀπάτης μνήμην βλαψίφρονος αἰεί,
Aligned English LXXVII.3. keeping memory always outside mind-harming deceit,
LXXVII.3 AV116_03
Source AP116.03
Supplied apparatus μνήμην Hermann] μνήμης.
Adopted forms μνήμην
Adopted lexical access μνήμη
Reported forms μνήμης
Reported lexical access μνήμη
Transliteration access mnēmēs
Accusative memory becomes the object of keeping; reported genitive belongs to a different construction with the other readings at this line.
Greek evidence LXXVII.3. ἐκτὸς ἔχουσ’ ἀπάτης μνήμην βλαψίφρονος αἰεί,
Aligned English LXXVII.3. keeping memory always outside mind-harming deceit,
Related lexical entries μνήμη
LXXVII.7 AV116_06
Source AP116.06
Supplied apparatus 7 ἑκάστοις et κάτθηται codd.
Adopted forms ἕκαστος; κατάθηται
Adopted lexical access ἕκαστος; κατατίθημι
Reported forms ἑκάστοις; κάτθηται
Reported lexical access ἕκαστος
Transliteration access hekastois; katthētai
Printed nominative each person with subjunctive lay down/deposit contrasts with reported dative plural ἑκάστοις and difficult κάτθηται. Do not silently expand the reported contraction or assign a different verb without evidence.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXXVII.7. ὧν ἂν ἕκαστος ἀεὶ στέρνοις γνώμην κατάθηται,
Aligned English LXXVII.7. whatever each man lays up always as purpose in his breast,
Related lexical entries κατατίθημι
LXXVIII.3 AV117_02
Source AP117.02
Supplied apparatus 3 αγγελιῶτι?
Adopted forms ἀγγελίεια
Adopted lexical access ἀγγελίεια
Reported lexical access ἀγγελιῶτις
Editorial queries αγγελιῶτι
The accentless source query αγγελιῶτι? proposes an alternative feminine messenger designation but is not adopted or attributed to manuscripts. Preserve the query's exact spelling and distinguish the proposed formation from printed ἀγγελίεια.
Greek evidence LXXVIII.3. ἀγγελίεια θεοῦ μεγάλου Τιτῆνος ἀγανοῦ,
Aligned English LXXVIII.3. messenger of the great god, the gentle Titan,
Related lexical entries ἀγγελίεια
LXXVIII.3 AV117_03
Source AP117.03
Supplied apparatus θεοῦ τιτάνος ἀγανοῦ μεγάλοιο codd., corr. Dinner (Τιτῆνος Hermann scripsit pro τιτᾶνος).
Adopted forms θεοῦ μεγάλου Τιτῆνος ἀγανοῦ
Adopted lexical access θεός; μέγας; Τιτάν; ἀγανός
Reported forms θεοῦ; τιτάνος; ἀγανοῦ; μεγάλοιο; τιτᾶνος
Reported lexical access θεός; Τιτάν; ἀγανός; μέγας
Transliteration access theou; titanos; aganou; megaloio; titanos
Reordered and differently inflected description of the great gentle Titan-god. The note separately attributes Τιτῆνος for τιτᾶνος to Hermann; preserve both reported τιτάνος and the parenthetic τιτᾶνος, not one silently standardized form.
Greek evidence LXXVIII.3. ἀγγελίεια θεοῦ μεγάλου Τιτῆνος ἀγανοῦ,
Aligned English LXXVIII.3. messenger of the great god, the gentle Titan,
LXXVIII.4 AV117_04
Source AP117.04
Supplied apparatus 4 ζοφόεντα Hermann] ζοφερήν τε.
Adopted forms ζοφόεντα
Adopted lexical access ζοφόεις
Reported forms ζοφερήν; τε
Reported lexical access ζοφερός; τε
Transliteration access zopherēn; te
Printed dark/gloomy adjective replaces a feminine adjective plus conjunction. The adopted masculine accusative form with the feminine πορείην is grammatically difficult; record rather than silently correct this agreement problem.
Greek evidence LXXVIII.4. ἣ νυκτὸς ζοφόεντα κελαινόχρωτα πορείην
Aligned English LXXVIII.4. you who the dusky, black-skinned journeying of night
Related lexical entries ζοφόεις
LXXVIII.4 AV117_05
Source AP117.05
Supplied apparatus An ζοφερήν τε κελαινόχροόν τε scribendum?
Adopted forms ζοφόεντα κελαινόχρωτα
Adopted lexical access ζοφόεις; κελαινόχρως
Reported lexical access ζοφερός; κελαινόχροος; τε
Editorial queries ζοφερήν; τε; κελαινόχροόν; τε
The full unadopted query would replace the two printed adjectives with ζοφερήν τε κελαινόχροόν τε. It reuses the reported first reading and proposes a second formation/inflection. Preserve it as an editorial question, not a third manuscript witness or an adopted repair.
Greek evidence LXXVIII.4. ἣ νυκτὸς ζοφόεντα κελαινόχρωτα πορείην
Aligned English LXXVIII.4. you who the dusky, black-skinned journeying of night
Related lexical entries ζοφόεις; κελαινόχρως
LXXVIII.12 AV118_01
Source AP118.01
Supplied apparatus 12 πᾶσι Abel] πάντα.
Adopted forms πᾶσι
Adopted lexical access πᾶς
Reported forms πάντα
Reported lexical access πᾶς
Transliteration access panta
Dative to all qualifies mortals receiving a workable life; reported neuter accusative all things changes its grammatical role.
Greek evidence LXXVIII.12. πᾶσι γὰρ ἐργάσιμον βίοτον θνητοῖσι πορίζεις.
Aligned English LXXVIII.12. for to all mortals you furnish a workable livelihood.
Related lexical entries πᾶς
LXXIX.5 AV119_01
Source AP119.01
Supplied apparatus 5 ὅτε Hermann] ὅθι.
Adopted forms ὅτε
Adopted lexical access ὅτε
Reported forms ὅθι
Reported lexical access ὅθι
Transliteration access hothi
Temporal when replaces local where in the Pytho clause; preserve temporal versus locative relation.
Greek evidence LXXIX.5. Πυθίῳ ἐν δαπέδῳ, ὅτε Πυθοῖ ἐμβασίλευεν·
Aligned English LXXIX.5. on the Pythian floor, when she was queen in Pytho;
Related lexical entries ὅτε
LXXIX.11 AV120_02
Source AP120.02
Supplied apparatus 11 κεχαρισμένη Abel] κεχαρημένη.
Adopted forms κεχαρισμένη
Adopted lexical access χαρίζομαι
Reported forms κεχαρημένη
Reported lexical access χαίρω
Transliteration access kekharēmenē
Adopted welcome/pleasing from χαρίζομαι contrasts with reported rejoicing from χαίρω, as at LII.13; do not reduce to accent or morphology alone.
Greek evidence LXXIX.11. ἀλλά, μάκαιρ’, ἔλθοις κεχαρισμένη εὔφρονι βουλῇ
Aligned English LXXIX.11. But, blessed one, may you come well pleased, with kindly counsel,
LXXX.6 AV121_06
Source AP121.06
Supplied apparatus 6 ἀκτῖσιν Hermann] ἀκτίνες ἁς.
Adopted forms ἀκτῖσιν
Adopted lexical access ἀκτίς
Reported forms ἀκτίνες; ἁς
Reported lexical access ἀκτίς; ὅς
Transliteration access aktines; has
Printed dative with rays replaces reported nominative rays plus relative ἁς. The division and case change repair the sunlight construction; no second kind of ray is introduced.
Greek evidence LXXX.6. ἀκτῖσιν λάμπουσαν ἐπὶ χθονὸς ἠελίοιο.
Aligned English LXXX.6. that shines upon the earth with the rays of the sun.
Related lexical entries ἀκτίς
LXXXI.1 AV122_01
Source AP122.01
Supplied apparatus 1 παντογενεῖς codd.
Adopted forms ποντογενεῖς
Adopted lexical access ποντογενής
Reported forms παντογενεῖς
Reported lexical access παντογενής
Transliteration access pantogeneis
Sea-born replaces all-born/all-generating. The compound's first member changes the breezes' characterization materially.
Greek evidence LXXXI.1. Αὖραι ποντογενεῖς Ζεφυρίτιδες, ἠερόφοιτοι,
Aligned English LXXXI.1. Breezes born of the sea, Zephyr-breezes, walkers in air,
Related lexical entries ποντογενής
LXXXI.1 AV122_02
Source AP122.02
Supplied apparatus ἠεροφοῖτοι (sic) Hermann] ἠεροφοῖται.
Adopted forms ἠερόφοιτοι
Adopted lexical access ἠερόφοιτος
Reported forms ἠεροφοῖται
Transliteration access ēerophoitai
The verse accents ἠερόφοιτοι, while apparatus lemma ἠεροφοῖτοι is marked sic and reported form ends -φοῖται. Preserve ending and accent differences within the air-roaming family; no confident second dictionary lemma is imposed.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXXXI.1. Αὖραι ποντογενεῖς Ζεφυρίτιδες, ἠερόφοιτοι,
Aligned English LXXXI.1. Breezes born of the sea, Zephyr-breezes, walkers in air,
Related lexical entries ἠερόφοιτος
LXXXI.2 AV122_03
Source AP122.03
Supplied apparatus 2 θανάτου codd.
Adopted forms καμάτου
Adopted lexical access κάματος
Reported forms θανάτου
Reported lexical access θάνατος
Transliteration access thanatou
Relief from toil replaces relief from death. The adopted practical respite must not be cited as a primary promise of respite from death.
Greek evidence LXXXI.2. ἡδύπνοοι, ψιθυραί, καμάτου ἀνάπαυσιν ἔχουσαι,
Aligned English LXXXI.2. sweet-blowing, whispering, holding rest from toil,
LXXXI.3 AV122_04
Source AP122.04
Supplied apparatus 3 λειμωνίδες codd.
Adopted forms λειμωνιάδες
Adopted lexical access λειμωνιάς
Reported forms λειμωνίδες
Reported lexical access λειμωνίς
Transliteration access leimōnides
Related meadow-associated feminine formations differ, λειμωνιάς versus λειμωνίς; preserve both as related lexical access, without inventing an opposed sense.
Greek evidence LXXXI.3. εἰαριναί, λειμωνιάδες, πεποθημέναι ὅρμοις,
Aligned English LXXXI.3. of the spring, of the meadows, longed for by the harbours,
Related lexical entries λειμωνιάς
LXXXI.4 AV122_05
Source AP122.05
Supplied apparatus 4 νηυσίν (sic) Hermann] ναυσί.
Adopted forms νηυσὶ
Adopted lexical access ναῦς
Reported forms ναυσί
Reported lexical access ναῦς
Transliteration access nausi
Apparatus lemma νηυσίν, marked sic, includes nu absent from the verse; reported ναυσί is the contracted/dialectal counterpart. Same ships noun.
Greek evidence LXXXI.4. σύρουσαι νηυσὶ τρυφερὸν πόρον, ἠέρα κοῦφον·
Aligned English LXXXI.4. drawing for ships a delicate passage, a light air;
Related lexical entries ναῦς
LXXXI.4 AV122_06
Source AP122.06
Supplied apparatus πόρον] ὅρμον codd.
Adopted forms πόρον
Adopted lexical access πόρος
Reported forms ὅρμον
Reported lexical access ὅρμος
Transliteration access hormon
Passage or way for ships replaces anchorage/harbour. The adopted motion sense differs from the reported destination/resting-place noun.
Greek evidence LXXXI.4. σύρουσαι νηυσὶ τρυφερὸν πόρον, ἠέρα κοῦφον·
Aligned English LXXXI.4. drawing for ships a delicate passage, a light air;
LXXXIV.3 AV124_03
Source AP124.03
Supplied apparatus 3 ὁσίαις Abel] ὁσίους.
Adopted forms ὁσίαις
Adopted lexical access ὅσιος
Reported forms ὁσίους
Reported lexical access ὅσιος
Transliteration access hosious
Dative pure qualifies the rites; reported masculine accusative would qualify the initiates. Purity's grammatical target changes.
Greek evidence LXXXIV.3. τούσδε σὺ ἐν τελεταῖς ὁσίαις μύστας ἀναδείξαις,
Aligned English LXXXIV.3. may you yourself show forth these men as initiates in the pure rites,
Related lexical entries ὅσιος
LXXXIV.4 AV124_04
Source AP124.04
Supplied apparatus 4 θεῖσ’ αἰειθαλέας Hermann] θήσω ἀειθαλέας.
Adopted forms θεῖσ’ αἰειθαλέας
Adopted lexical access τίθημι; ἀειθαλής
Reported forms θήσω; ἀειθαλέας
Reported lexical access τίθημι; ἀειθαλής
Transliteration access thēsō; aeithaleas
Printed feminine participle having made follows the goddess's petition; reported θήσω is first-person future I shall make. The ever-blooming adjective also has expanded/unexpanded spelling. Do not invent a new speaker in the adopted text.
Greek evidence LXXXIV.4. θεῖσ’ αἰειθαλέας, πολυόλβους, εὔφρονας, ἁγνούς·
Aligned English LXXXIV.4. making them ever-blooming, rich in blessing, kindly, holy;
LXXXIV.5 AV124_05
Source AP124.05
Supplied apparatus 5 οἶκε Dorville] οἳ καί.
Adopted forms οἶκε
Adopted lexical access οἶκος
Reported forms οἳ; καί
Reported lexical access ὅς; καί
Transliteration access hoi; kai
House as direct address replaces reported relative-plus-conjunction οἳ καί. The explicit house metaphor for Hestia is adopted, not transmitted in those reported words.
Greek evidence LXXXIV.5. οἶκε θεῶν μακάρων, θνητῶν στήριγμα κραταιόν,
Aligned English LXXXIV.5. O house of the blessed gods, mighty support of mortals,
Related lexical entries οἶκος
LXXXIV.8 AV124_07
Source AP124.07
Supplied apparatus 8 ἠπιόχειρον ὑγείαν codd., corr. Porson.
Adopted forms ἠπιόχειρ’ ὑγίειαν
Adopted lexical access ἠπιόχειρ; ὑγίεια
Reported forms ἠπιόχειρον; ὑγείαν
Reported lexical access ὑγίεια
Transliteration access ēpiokheiron; hugeian
The adopted elided accusative ἠπιόχειρα of ἠπιόχειρ and health spelling differ from reported ἠπιόχειρον ὑγείαν. The reported -χειρον form is not forced into the printed third-declension paradigm. Preserve the formula as printed and the apparatus's attribution to Porson; no independent collation or automatic claim of its original wording.
Uncertainty At least one reported form is retained without an asserted dictionary lemma; see local note.
Greek evidence LXXXIV.8. ὄλβον ἐπιπνείουσα καὶ ἠπιόχειρ’ ὑγίειαν.
Aligned English LXXXIV.8. breathing in prosperity and gentle-handed health.
LXXXV.6 AV125_01
Source AP125.01
Supplied apparatus 6 ἔρδων] ἔργον codd.
Adopted forms ἔρδων
Adopted lexical access ἔρδω
Reported forms ἔργον
Reported lexical access ἔργον
Transliteration access ergon
Doing/making a sacred consolation replaces work/deed noun. The participle makes Sleep the acting subject, not simply an abstract product.
Greek evidence LXXXV.6. καὶ πάσης λύπης ἱερὸν παραμύθιον ἔρδων·
Aligned English LXXXV.6. and working a sacred consolation for every grief;
LXXXV.7 AV125_02
Source AP125.02
Supplied apparatus 7 ἀπάγεις Wiel] ἐπάγεις.
Adopted forms ἀπάγεις
Adopted lexical access ἀπάγω
Reported forms ἐπάγεις
Reported lexical access ἐπάγω
Transliteration access epageis
Printed leading away the μελέτη of death contrasts with reported bringing it on. Keep ἀπάγω and ἐπάγω separate: the variant reverses the direction of Sleep's relation to the thought/study/practice of death and cannot be suppressed by a generic bring gloss.
Greek evidence LXXXV.7. καὶ θανάτου μελέτην ἀπάγεις ψυχὰς διασώζων·
Aligned English LXXXV.7. and you take the rehearsal of death away, keeping souls safe;
LXXXVI.3 AV126_02
Source AP126.02
Supplied apparatus ὕπνος γλυκερός codd.
Adopted forms ὕπνου γλυκεροῦ
Adopted lexical access ὕπνος; γλυκερός
Reported forms ὕπνος; γλυκερός
Reported lexical access ὕπνος; γλυκερός
Transliteration access hupnos; glykeros
Adopted genitive of sweet sleep depends on stillness; reported nominatives make sweet sleep a separate subject or address. Same nouns/adjectives, different grouping.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.3. ἡσυχίῃ γὰρ ὕπνου γλυκεροῦ σιγηλὸς ἐπελθών,
Aligned English LXXXVI.3. for in the stillness of sweet sleep you come silent,
LXXXVI.4 AV126_03
Source AP126.03
Supplied apparatus 4 προφωνῶν codd.
Adopted forms προσφωνῶν
Adopted lexical access προσφωνέω
Reported forms προφωνῶν
Reported lexical access προφωνέω
Transliteration access prophōnōn
Printed addressing souls differs from reported speaking beforehand/announcing form without sigma. Distinguish this from the separate line-6 contrast, where προφωνῶν is reported again.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.4. προσφωνῶν ψυχαῖς θνητῶν νόον αὐτὸς ἐγείρεις,
Aligned English LXXXVI.4. speaking to the souls of mortals, and yourself wake the mind,
Related lexical entries προσφωνέω
LXXXVI.6 AV126_04
Source AP126.04
Supplied apparatus 6 προφαίνων Lennep] προφωνῶν.
Adopted forms προφαίνων
Adopted lexical access προφαίνω
Reported forms προφωνῶν
Reported lexical access προφωνέω
Transliteration access prophōnōn
Showing beforehand replaces speaking beforehand. The adopted revelation is silent in the surrounding words; the voice/showing contrast matters to the dream vocabulary.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.6. σιγῶν σιγώσαις ψυχαῖς μέλλοντα προφαίνων,
Aligned English LXXXVI.6. in silence to silent souls showing forth what is to come,
Related lexical entries προφαίνω
LXXXVI.9 AV126_05
Source AP126.05
Supplied apparatus 9 ἀπάγῃ codd.
Adopted forms ὑπάγῃ
Adopted lexical access ὑπάγω
Reported forms ἀπάγῃ
Reported lexical access ἀπάγω
Transliteration access apagēi
Printed leading/drawing life along differs from reported leading away. Preserve the different prefix, without automatically importing the death-related reversal of LXXXV.7 into this line.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.9. τερπωλαῖς ὑπάγῃ βίον ἀνθρώπων προχαρέντων,
Aligned English LXXXVI.9. may lead on with delights the life of men who have rejoiced in advance,
LXXXVI.10 AV127_01
Source AP127.01
Supplied apparatus 10 ἀνάπαυσιν Abel] ἀνάπαυλαν.
Adopted forms ἀνάπαυσιν
Adopted lexical access ἀνάπαυσις
Reported forms ἀνάπαυλαν
Reported lexical access ἀνάπαυλα
Transliteration access anapaulan
Closely synonymous rest/respite nouns are distinct lexical formations; maintain the reported ἀνάπαυλα lookup without inventing an opposed doctrine of rest.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.10. τῶν δὲ κακῶν ἀνάπαυσιν, ὅπως θεὸς αὐτὸς ἐνίσπῃ
Aligned English LXXXVI.10. and a rest from evils, that the god himself may tell of it,
Related lexical entries ἀνάπαυσις
LXXXVI.11 AV127_02
Source AP127.02
Supplied apparatus 11 τε πόλον θύσαντες codd.
Adopted forms τε χόλον λύσωσιν
Adopted lexical access τε; χόλος; λύω
Reported forms τε; πόλον; θύσαντες
Reported lexical access τε; πόλος; θύω
Transliteration access te; polon; thysantes
Adopted clause releases the lords' anger by prayers and sacrifices; reported τε πόλον θύσαντες instead contains pole/heaven and having sacrificed. Its connected syntax is corrupt or uncertain; preserve the words without manufacturing a coherent alternative ritual.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.11. εὐχωλαῖς θυσίαις τε χόλον λύσωσιν ἀνάκτων.
Aligned English LXXXVI.11. that by prayers and by sacrifices they may loose the anger of the lords.
LXXXVI.13 AV127_03
Source AP127.03
Supplied apparatus 13 οὔ κεν φαίνοι Hermann] οὐδὲν φαίνει.
Adopted forms οὔ κεν φαίνοι
Adopted lexical access οὐ; κε; φαίνω
Reported forms οὐδὲν; φαίνει
Reported lexical access οὐδείς; φαίνω
Transliteration access ouden; phainei
Adopted modal negative with optative would not show impending necessity differs from reported shows nothing. This affects assertion and what is negated, not merely spelling.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.13. τοῖς δὲ κακοῖς οὔ κεν φαίνοι μέλλουσαν ἀνάγκην
Aligned English LXXXVI.13. but to the wicked it would not show the necessity that is coming,
Related lexical entries φαίνω
LXXXVI.18 AV127_05
Source AP127.05
Supplied apparatus 18 μηδέν’ Hermann] μηδέν.
Adopted forms μηδέν’
Adopted lexical access μηδείς
Reported forms μηδέν
Reported lexical access μηδείς
Transliteration access mēden
The apostrophe marks an elided μηδένα, not unelided singular μηδέν. A neuter-plural construal with σημεῖα is possible; do not force masculine nobody or silently remove the apostrophe. The surrounding construction still requires care.
Greek evidence LXXXVI.18. μηδέν’ ἐπ’ ἀλλοκότοισι κακῶν σημεῖα προφαίνων.
Aligned English LXXXVI.18. showing forth to no man, in monstrous shapes, the signs of evils.
Related lexical entries σημεῖον
LXXXVII.9 AV128_01
Source AP128.01
Supplied apparatus 9 οὔτε γὰρ εὐχαῖσι(ν) πιθόμενος οὔτε λιταῖσιν codd., corr. Hermann.
Adopted forms οὔτε γὰρ εὐχῇσιν πείθῃ μόνος οὔτε λιτῇσιν
Adopted lexical access οὔτε; γάρ; εὐχή; πείθω; μόνος; λιτή
Reported forms οὔτε; γὰρ; εὐχαῖσι; ν; πιθόμενος; οὔτε; λιταῖσιν
Reported lexical access οὔτε; γάρ; εὐχή; πείθω; λιτή
Transliteration access oute; gar; eukhaisi; n; pithomenos; oute; litaisin
Printed second-person are persuaded plus μόνος, alone, replaces reported participle πιθόμενος, together with Ionic/alpha dative changes. The printed exclusivity is not licensed by the reported participle alone; the full negative petition context must remain visible.
Greek evidence LXXXVII.9. οὔτε γὰρ εὐχῇσιν πείθῃ μόνος οὔτε λιτῇσιν.
Aligned English LXXXVII.9. for you alone are won over neither by prayers nor by entreaties.
LXXXVII.10 AV128_02
Source AP128.02
Supplied apparatus 10 σε Hermann] γε.
Adopted forms σε
Adopted lexical access σύ
Reported forms γε
Reported lexical access γε
Transliteration access ge
Accusative you supplies the subject of the requested infinitive draw near; reported emphatic γε does not. No new divine addressee is introduced.
Greek evidence LXXXVII.10. ἀλλά, μάκαρ, μακροῖσι χρόνοις ζωῆς σε πελάζειν
Aligned English LXXXVII.10. But, blessed one, that you draw near after long spans of life
Related lexical entries πελάζω
LXXXVII.11 AV128_03
Source AP128.03
Supplied apparatus 11 θυσιῇσι (sic) Hermann] θυσίαις.
Adopted forms θυσίῃσι
Adopted lexical access θυσία
Reported forms θυσίαις
Reported lexical access θυσία
Transliteration access thysiais
Apparatus lemma θυσιῇσι, marked sic, has different accent from the verse's θυσίῃσι; reported θυσίαις uses a different dative ending. Same sacrifices noun.
Greek evidence LXXXVII.11. αἰτοῦμαι, θυσίῃσι καὶ εὐχωλαῖς λιτανεύων,
Aligned English LXXXVII.11. I ask, entreating you with sacrifices and with prayers,
Related lexical entries θυσία