T187. With a rounded mouth translates Ore rotundo literally to preserve its link with roundness in the following sentence. Only that opening sentence corresponds to the italic Latin. Compare Horace, Ars poetica , 323–324, where the phrase belongs to the Muse’s gift of eloquence to the Greeks. The control is a bounded direct electronic Latin reading of 309–332; it identifies the phrase, not Joubert’s following commentary or his copy.
T188. The quoted term, unnamed they, comparison and two alternatives remain. The musical-organic association is left open; no polemical target is supplied. English places the comma inside the quotation marks under American style; French keeps it outside.
T189. The attribution, question and repeated each word/each note remain. That sings gives chantant its audible force. Joubert calls each numbered phrase a word; the translation does not silently change that designation. Only the words after the three numbers are to be italicized; the numbers remain in roman type. The precise Soumet source remains unverified. English places the first quoted sentence’s period inside its closing quotation mark under American style; French keeps it outside. The last italic phrase includes its final period.
T190. The three spatial nouns and two following infinitives remain. Lead up to it gives amener its contextual anticipatory force; it is an ordinary English completion, not a recovered French pronoun. Suspension preserves the technical and physical suggestion without reducing it to suspense alone. Void renders the source’s literal historical spelling vuide , which remains unchanged in French.
T191. The nominal opening, perspective/distance alternative, parenthetic moved and paired purposes remain. No fixed period of time or theory of poetic detachment is supplied.
T497. Événemens retains its ending without t . Poëtique and poëte retain qualified diaereses: the native upper components are visible but compressed by the reproduction. The parenthetic alternative and both purpose phrases remain; no finite main predicate is supplied.
T192. Sixteenth note and thirty-second note are the American musical names for double-croche and triple-croche . The unusual ordering and parenthesis remain. The opening English nouns are plural to agree idiomatically with the plural words, where the French names each note type in the singular. The qualified French reading has no comma before the opening parenthesis and a clear comma after the closing parenthesis; the English follows that placement.
T498. Both musical terms retain their hyphens and the printed plural sont . A clear comma follows the closing parenthesis. Before the opening parenthesis only detached thin vertical traces survive, not a certified substantive comma; the no-comma reading remains qualified, and the senior editor’s independent native comparison agrees.
T193. The conditional prescription, quoted freedom, flood and parenthetic fire comparison, and intemperance remain. Provision gives disposition a contextual policy sense; its exact antecedent remains unspecified. People supplies the ordinary object of threaten, without identifying a group absent from the French. The conjunction “and” and the paired parentheses follow the explicit et d’un incendie , and flood renders the unchanged French spelling innondation . [Pride] and [all] contextually interpret orgueil and tous from or[…]eil and […]s ; the complete English words are bracketed without restoring the missing French letters. The single paragraph continues onto 787 through echoes. No historical policy or person is supplied.
T499. The single paragraph continues for the first two lines of page 787, then ends before the next dated unit. Native innondation has two n letters, and the parenthesis explicitly includes et d’un incendie . The conditional, menace infinitive, quotation and restriction seuls remain. At the damaged continuation the full letters eil survive after or- , while the preceding fragments do not certify g or a complete u . In the next line only final s is complete before les autres ; the broken preceding u -like body is not treated as a recovered letter. The senior editor’s independent native comparison agrees with the explicit or[…]eil and […]s limits; neither missing opening is supplied from context.
T194. The opening dash, infinitival and relative fragments, repeated heads/fumes and darkened/blackened remain. Murky preserves the obscuring quality of ténébreuses ; no preceding subject is supplied. [Darkened] and [murky] contextually interpret obscurci and ténébreuses from […]scurci and téné[…]euses ; the full English words are bracketed without restoring French letters.
T500. The May day is wholly lost. The opening dash is substantial, with thinner parallel artifacts; it remains a printed fragment boundary, not a supplied predicate. Before scurci only incomplete components survive; after téné- only euses is complete. The explicit losses do not restore obscurci or ténébreuses . The plural possessors, second nominal têtes opening and all its truths remain.
S1. Source editor’s annotation Variant: “There are luminous brains, heads fitted to receive, retain and transmit light. They radiate on all sides; they illuminate... [etc.] It is necessary to join...[etc.] but [it] cultivates nothing.”
T195. The repeated light operations, threefold limit and the distinction between producing and cultivating remain. Property retains propriété as a capacity or characteristic. Things supplies the ordinary English object of brings, not a source restoration. The sun’s birth/bloom correction remains inside the parenthesis. Source note 1 is separate apparatus. [Receive], [illuminate], [must], [give] and the first [cultivate] contextually interpret reçoivent , éclairent , faut , donner and cultive from […]çoivent , […]lairent , […]ut , […]nner and […]ltive . The full English words are bracketed; the source letters are not restored. The earlier receive and final intact cultivate remain outside brackets.
T204. This is Beaunier’s separate variant, not an additional dated entry. Both source bracketed etc. forms and the ellipses remain; no omitted text or secondary agent is supplied. The final French cultive is singular and has no expressed subject in the surviving clause. [It] supplies an English grammatical subject while leaving its antecedent unresolved across the omission; it is not a recovered French pronoun. The earlier plural brains/heads does not determine that final singular subject. The semicolon after sides follows the French separation; the entire variant remains roman.
T501. The indented Têtes is complete; detached margin remnants before it do not establish an extra word. Actual interrupted beginnings retain çoivent , lairent , ut , nner and ltive ; the preceding partial bowls/stems do not certify re , éc , fa , do or cu . The five gaps remain explicit, with intact Il and the first ne/pas retained. The second complete ne cultive pas in the parenthesis is unchanged and unbracketed. The feminine pronouns, repeated et , three singular predicates and secondary-agent relation remain. The raised source call follows the final closing parenthesis.
T196. The paradox of work, movement/rest relation and reflexive repetition remain. The internal self-sustaining image is not reduced to idleness or leisure. The day is not supplied from neighboring entries. [Life] and the first [itself] contextually interpret vie and soi from […]ie and […]oi ; no French letters are restored. The day and the damaged month opening remain unspecified, with only final in secure in the latter. The English semicolon follows the source between the movement and rest clauses.
T503. No day is recoverable, and the month is itself damaged: only final in is complete, while preceding j/u -like components are interrupted. The contextual month juin is not restored in the raw date. The senior editor’s independent native comparison agrees with that damaged-month distinction; it does not certify the separate body residues. The initial Travailler is complete; an isolated left-margin mark does not certify an extra word. The body retains only ie and oi after its two damaged initials. The full initial negative, repeated repos , reflexive predicates and hyphenated lui-même remain.